Douluo: the Martial Spirit Shukaku Will Bury the Whole Continent in Sand!

Let's talk about the inexplicable flaws of this novel. 1. The protagonist belongs to Naruto. No matter how badly the villagers treat him, beating or scolding him, he will always influence his villagers with great love. Otherwise, can he be the protagonist? His endurance is incredible! It can compare with the mythical Zhao Gao! Of course, those in the early stage and those who are rich and famous in the later period do not count. 2. Although someone said that the protagonist has twin martial spirits, the second martial spirit is fire attribute. However, some readers also criticized the protagonist for joining Blazing Academy. It's true that you don't plan to expose your second martial soul, or you can't cultivate the second martial soul in the early stage. It's better to choose one that suits you. If you can't walk on the road without seeing a woman. (Euphemistic)😚

Why did you write that paragraph at the beginning? I wrote it but let it go. As for the follow-up, even if they are killed, you are not allowed to get back the money your parents left. Are you mentally ill? Are you a pervert? Do you like to be abused? What to write if there is no result? If you don't finish writing one thing, write on another. Why did you start selecting readers in the first place?

This is the first time I have seen a novel using a tailed beast as a martial spirit. The author writes well. I have some suggestions here: (1) I personally think that the heroine should be a single heroine or no heroine. This will better reflect the character of the protagonist. In the introduction, the author said, didn't you say the protagonist (dark)? So I personally think that to make it darker, either the protagonist's lover dies (single female protagonist), or the protagonist's only close friend dies (no female protagonist), and it becomes darker. (2) The pace is too fast. The pace can be slowed down appropriately. For example, in the one taken six years later, there is no mention of the protagonist's experience in training, the progress of the relationship between the protagonist and Shukaku, and how Shukaku wakes up. (3) Shukaku knows the tailed beast jade and sealing techniques. I think the protagonist can use the ninth tailed beast jade soul technique as a sealing technique in the eighth chapter, and the seventh soul technique can be used as a tailed beast transformation soul technique.

I couldn't stand it until I reached Chapter 10. The protagonist introduced the sand displayed opposite him, but he ended up going to Blazing Academy and entered it. The protagonist's parents gave their inheritance to the village in exchange for raising the protagonist. As a result, the protagonist had poor food, clothing, and housing, and was often bullied by his children. In the end, he just jumped over without retaliating, and the inheritance was not taken back. Pure Holy Mother. The protagonist has traveled through time and is innately full of soul power. As a result, after seeing the two-thousand-year-old soul bone, he wanted to absorb it. Fortunately, Shukaku stopped him, and the protagonist almost became angry with it.

In fact, you should go to Tiandou Royal Academy or Kamikaze. In Tiandou, you can contact Qianrenxue and Duguyan. If you go to Kamikaze, you can fly sand and rocks and blow up sandstorms. I don't understand. Can you let the flames melt the sand into glass? Shukaku not only has sand but also a certain amount of wind attributes. Practicing blank ammunition is a skill. You can see Pirates' sand crocodile sucking up water and turning it into a mummy, or directly turning the field into quicksand. This is very good. The attraction of quicksand is impossible without grabbing objects and flying ability. Or Pokémon's sandstorm. In sandstorm weather, you can sense others and others can't find you. Also, Feng Xiaotian's soul skill is very good in flying and amplification. If you have an attack in the early stage, you can increase the amplification much and become stronger in the later stage! Of course, Feng Xiaotian is a bastard. It's okay to say that he created his own soul skills when he was practicing the fastest, which caused his level to drop down. Moreover, the homemade soul skills can't even do the cloak. This is very embarrassing. Why has he been acting like a licking dog all these years? If you are over level 50 or above, if you are lucky, you might be able to reach level 58 or 59. You can use some fairy grass to become a level 1 god. This is no better than Silver Tiger Grass Chicken. To sum up, there is no need to go to Blazing Fire to go to Heaven Dou, level 30, second ring, Thousand Years, and you will definitely see Qian Renxue. Then Feng Xiaotian is a stupid dog.

Books like this will be useless once the harem is opened. You can also give up directly. I'm not kidding, it's true.

If the guess is correct, the author doesn't know how to read the protagonist's soul skills.

The heroine Huo Wu, Zhu Zhuqing, Lonely Yan, Ye Lengleng, Shui Bing'er, Liu Erlong, arrange more girls😘😘

It's so fake. You can beat a Titan that is over 100,000 years old, but you can't beat Tang Wu. Do you know that you can beat a Titan and the Green Ox, Python, Yue Guan and Gui Mei who are less than 200,000 years old? There is also a level 99 Bibi Dong, and you can poison them with poison. You can only kill them with poison. You removed half of his arm in one breath, but you can't beat Tang Wu. You are a bit too rubbish.

A suggestion to the author, don't write about a female protagonist next time you write a fanfic. I feel that the author's writing style is not very good, especially in terms of emotional drama. I have also read the template of Baili Keeping a Promise. Personally, I feel that the character of the protagonist in this book should be developed in this aspect, which is cold and cold.