Senior Sister Bai Yueguang Has Fallen into a Demon State. How Did My System Get Here?

It was the senior sister who protected you, but you chose to stand on the opposite side of her.

When I read the fourth chapter of amnesia, I felt something was wrong. When I found the table of contents and looked at the chapter names, I felt like it felt like a bloody drama! I can't see it, I personally feel that the author should post it to a female channel

While thinking about letting Luo Ruyue recover, the system gave her no pills.

1. The character structure completely collapsed, and the protagonist became a pure love-minded tool. Su Bai's "Senior Protector" was written as a mindless lick. The setting of being the best in swordsmanship appeared out of thin air but was not shown in the whole process. Facing the fallen demon Luo Ruyue, she could only give in without a bottom line. Even the system's outrageous hand-holding and hugging tasks were forced on her. She had no character arc of her own and was like a puppet being led by the system and her senior sister; Luo Ruyue is even more outrageous. All the preparations made by the talented senior sister in the early stage were in vain. After falling into the devil, he became an invincible tool for no reason. He became the leader in seconds and abused the right way by relying on "falling into the devil means being invincible". There is no logic of combat power, and the cold character after amnesia cannot be established. One second, the sword is pointed at Su Bai, and the next second, he is silently protecting the law. The twist is ridiculously blunt. 2. The combat power system is lousy, and the best points are all made by force. The core combat power of Xiuxian Wen was directly destroyed. The boundaries between the cultivation levels of Golden Core Realm and Foundation Establishment Realm were blurred. Su Bai's upgrade was like drinking water. He had just reached the peak of Foundation Establishment and became invincible in Golden Core. Luo Ruyue had no reason to crush everything. Even the invincible shield of the ancestor of the sect was blocked. Being able to break through with one sword completely lacks the feeling of "beating monsters by leapfrogging", leaving only mindless crushing; the reason why Zhengdao forced the senior sister to become a demon is also untenable. For the sake of the sword's heart, everyone has to surrender their wits. The sanctimonious hypocrisy is superficial and deliberate, and the sense of conflict is entirely created by force. 3. The system settings are useless and the plot flow is too slow. The core cheat system is purely a drag, always posting inappropriate love missions. The life and death of the senior sister who has just fallen into a demon is at stake, and the system makes the user fluctuate emotionally; the two are hunted and hiding in Tibet, and the system allows them to hold hands for five seconds. The mission is separated from the main plot, and the author has completely made up a man and woman. It is a tool for primary interaction; the plot is even more streamlined. Except for the famous scene of forcing the devil at the beginning, the follow-up is a cycle of "encountering a monster - Su Bai fills a cup to solve it - the system sends a love mission - the senior sister has a cold face - continues to run away." There is no foreshadowing or reversal, and you can guess the entire direction after reading a few chapters. 4. There is no foreshadowing in the emotional line, and the sweet pet becomes greasy. Su Bai's deep love for Luo Ruyue has no reason. It was a vague good impression in the previous life. After rebirth, he rescued her and immediately gave up. There is no foreshadowing of a long-term love, no two-way pull, only Su Bai's unilateral self-motivating dedication; Luo Ruyue's emotions The transformation is also extremely blunt. After losing his memory, his wariness towards Su Bai was gone. With just a few small actions, he went from "killing and then quickly" to silently protecting the law. The so-called "loving wife" was all Su Bai's wishful thinking. The interactive sweet pet did not feel it, only the greasy feeling of forced sticking. To sum up, this novel just follows the popular framework of "Senior Sister Bai Yueguang falls into a demon, and the male protagonist defends against the will of heaven" without any filler. The characters, combat power, plot, and emotional lines are all stretched. The only highlight is the core setting. After reading it, I will only feel aggrieved and speechless. It is a complete waste of such a good subject matter.

How do Chapter 47 and Chapter 48 connect?

Why can't it be right? Jumped so much.

So why add the amnesia link?

Please go check it out, the author, the content in chapters 47 to 53 is wrong.

I changed the directory, but the plot is still wrong.

This is a solid female channel style, go to the female channel and try it.