Twin Cities: the Prop Master in Zaun

Twin Cities: the Prop Master in Zaun

by How To Write It?

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About This Novel

When Vi, who has never chosen to be right, takes Jack Sparrow's compass, can she listen to her heart and choose to be right once? When Jinx, who always makes mistakes, has a demon passport that can obtain forgiveness from others, can the relationship between the sisters be restored to its original state? When Singed possesses the rat charm that turns death into life, will he really believe that under that familiar body is his daughter's soul? ... Link traveled to the world of the Battle of Two Cities and became Silko's top pony. At the beginning of the story, he chose to lend a helping hand to the poor girl...

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书友2024112914445618114mo ago

Let's talk about the positioning of this book.

First of all, my writing method is to promote the plot according to the characters' personalities, so some people may feel that the main plot is unclear. The reason is that the main plot of the first volume only has one sentence, which is to establish a reasonable friendship with Jinx, and everything else is secondary. Then talk about Our Lady. I just wrote the protagonist as a standard good person, a warm-hearted person. This is unacceptable and I have nothing to say. Then why should the protagonist be a warm-hearted and good person. Because he got to save Jinx. Since he is a good person with a conscience, why is he working for Hilko? Because people saved his life. From the above two points, have we come to a conclusion? When the protagonist sees Shimmer's harm, the first thing he does not kill Hilko is try to reason with him. I really can't imagine that a person can kill his benefactor without saying a word because of his different views. No matter what your current status is, it's the same. I can't imagine you being a vanguard of justice. Sorry, this is my fault. Finally, the protagonist does not know the origin of the props. First of all, what the protagonist knows and what he doesn't know is not decided by me. I based it on a friend of mine who is a police officer. When I was writing, I asked him if he knew this. He said he didn't know. Oh, then the protagonist doesn't know. Do you know this? Oh, I have seen Pirates of the Caribbean, so I know. I would like to add that the protagonist does not know the plot and has zero knowledge of everyone. Everyone he knows can only be understood through his own contact. I can't help it if it's not cool enough. I want to write cool articles instead of writing fan fiction. It's a thankless task.

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八卦患者15mo ago

It looks good. I recommend updating it at ten times a day. Twenty is also fine.

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Book Friends 20241126260_dc15mo ago

It's so good. Don't give up on it, author. It would be best if it has one heroine, Jinx, or no heroine.

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Book Friends 2023020721955115mo ago

It's really great, I hope you can keep up the good work. Cool

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I Gradually Understood Everything15mo ago

It's very beautiful, but the updates are too slow.

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