
Villain: after Showing Off, the Tsundere Heroine Hears His Voice
by Drinking White Dew, Frost And Snow
About This Novel
Introduction: Gu Yuan traveled through the world of fantasy novels and became the villain of the Holy Land of Wentian. What? I dug up the protagonist's supreme bone? What? The protagonist is still my adopted sister? Heaven protects the body, luck increases the body, and the law of reincarnation favors you! You can't rob and rob, you can't kill and you can't kill. Okay, let me show off! Whoever you like can go! "Ding, congratulations to the host for successfully destroying it and obtaining the outsider-[Atomic]" "Ding, congratulations to the host for successfully destroying it and gaining a special ability - [Vector Control]" "Ding, congratulations to the host for his outstanding smashing effect and for obtaining the supreme cultivation level." After Gu Yuan was done with it, he found that things were gradually going wrong. Gu Changqing: Brother, it turns out that I have wrongly blamed you before. You have done nothing to repay my kindness. My sworn sister can only promise you with your body... Blood Princess: My disciple is ignorant, and all the responsibility lies with the master. I am willing to atone for my disciple's sins in this life. Come, let me observe your strengths carefully! Gu Yuan: Damn, this script is wrong! Could it be that the protagonist is myself? (Knocking on the blackboard): The voices heard are random and intermittent. Because there is systematic interference, there will be no voices that are unfavorable to Gu Yuan.
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Official(14)Scraped 18d ago
Do brothers want to take in a sister?
Deduct 1 if you want it, deduct 2 if you don't want it, hehe. (You can say whether you want a single heroine or a harem)
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What are you doing again? Many authors on my bookshelf have stopped updating. I feel numb.
good
I've read Chapter 20, and this book is just a hodgepodge. There are also some places where the logic is not very comfortable, and there are some things that cannot be copied from the original text and need to be revised.
Just talk
How can I put it, it was quite good at first, and it is considered a good invincible novel. But the author also feels that the writing is getting worse and worse. In my opinion, it is like a different person is updating it, and the writing style is different from the previous one. In fact, the plot is not completely broken. If the author is really careful, it can be saved. I think the plot becomes very random and a bit chaotic starting in southern Xinjiang. In some plots, I couldn't understand what the author wanted to express, such as the sudden appearance of the temple. Also, the writing style needs to be more steady. It's pretty steady at the beginning, but why does it feel so exaggerated and fake later on? The author needs to calm down and settle down, and don't really overwhelm this book. You don't have to have an outline, but you must have a firm and specific idea and main line. Otherwise, no matter how you write it, it will be very casual, fewer people will read it, and the logic will be poor. A small suggestion. I hope the author will take a look. My original intention is not to collapse the book.
The author hasn't updated it for a long time, so he probably abandoned the book.
Where is the author? ? ? ? Missing? ? ? Where are people? Body text
Is this different from fighting against the sky?
Chapter 4 Kunkun changed
Damn it, we are not little Heizi, why can't even Kun Kunzi say it?
No longer updated? Please give the author a big update
Rating
Community(0)
Official(14)Scraped 18d ago
Do brothers want to take in a sister?
Deduct 1 if you want it, deduct 2 if you don't want it, hehe. (You can say whether you want a single heroine or a harem)
.
What are you doing again? Many authors on my bookshelf have stopped updating. I feel numb.
good
I've read Chapter 20, and this book is just a hodgepodge. There are also some places where the logic is not very comfortable, and there are some things that cannot be copied from the original text and need to be revised.
Just talk
How can I put it, it was quite good at first, and it is considered a good invincible novel. But the author also feels that the writing is getting worse and worse. In my opinion, it is like a different person is updating it, and the writing style is different from the previous one. In fact, the plot is not completely broken. If the author is really careful, it can be saved. I think the plot becomes very random and a bit chaotic starting in southern Xinjiang. In some plots, I couldn't understand what the author wanted to express, such as the sudden appearance of the temple. Also, the writing style needs to be more steady. It's pretty steady at the beginning, but why does it feel so exaggerated and fake later on? The author needs to calm down and settle down, and don't really overwhelm this book. You don't have to have an outline, but you must have a firm and specific idea and main line. Otherwise, no matter how you write it, it will be very casual, fewer people will read it, and the logic will be poor. A small suggestion. I hope the author will take a look. My original intention is not to collapse the book.
The author hasn't updated it for a long time, so he probably abandoned the book.
Where is the author? ? ? ? Missing? ? ? Where are people? Body text
Is this different from fighting against the sky?
Chapter 4 Kunkun changed
Damn it, we are not little Heizi, why can't even Kun Kunzi say it?
No longer updated? Please give the author a big update










