Comprehensive Martial Arts: Seven Heroes Town Storytellers, Become Sworn to Qiao Feng at the Beginning

Your protagonist has reached a higher state just by taking drugs. It doesn't reflect the rules of the world of mixed martial arts. Others must have their own martial arts intentions when practicing martial arts. You are talking about Qin Shihuang being an emperor and a figure in the world of other countries. He is also drunk. You might as well break them into worlds.

You can be sure that this is a big, big, big hodgepodge. Hodgepodge is fine, but there are too many two words in your book. Get up, get up, get up. Read them together. Add a sentence and put these two words at the back. You can read it or listen to it and see how you feel.

After seeing that kid being the leader of the alliance, I stopped watching it because the storyteller had gone off to engage in jianghu affairs. With the integration of various worlds, the world's power structure will become more complex. I personally think that the protagonist should stay in contention for a longer time.

Let's talk about it first. I believe that people who read this book are here for storytelling. This is the key point. The key point is storytelling. This should be the main line. There can be branch lines, but not too many. Otherwise, it will be a declaration of victory. I have seen many storytellers go off topic in the end. What do you want to read? Well, it is the protagonist who conveys our story to other worlds, and then receives praise from others, which makes him feel honored and proud. At present, there is no problem with the author's writing skills, but he must also be careful about the development of the branch plot, otherwise readers will easily skip reading. Anyway, don't go off topic! Don't go off topic!

I came here for Qixia Town, but after writing dozens of chapters, Bai Zhantang and the others didn't appear a few times. They appeared in the background, and I was really speechless. I felt that the article was not right, and then I felt that although it was Zong Wu, the division of strength was too strange. First of all, Dongfang Invincible is the most powerful, on the same level as Xiao Feng and Zhang Sanfeng. This is a matter of opinion. After all, the strength in mixed martial arts cannot be much different, but the strength is almost the same. I feel uncomfortable when I look at it. Then All the protagonist gets are martial arts in the snow, Immortal Kneeling with a Sword, Dahuangting, etc., But in terms of strength, he feels second-rate. (They say Dongfang Bubai and they are peerless grand masters, and the protagonist is a grand master, which is much worse, and the masters are just as powerful. , But there are not many who are worse than the protagonist.) When the protagonist is not strong enough, and has almost no strength, he dares to provoke Zuo Lengchan. He has some strength and provokes Dongfang Bubai. He has to test Xiao Feng to save the situation, but the protagonist has no strength and still pretends to be. He has always relied on others but has no self-awareness. He has not mastered the skills initiated by the system. He plots the Dugu Nine Swords, which is the most important skill in gold-type martial arts, instead of quickly practicing the internal skills and swordsmanship in the snow given by the system. When making enemies everywhere, he ignores his own abilities and quickly improves his strength. Instead, he keeps acting like a monster. Then after making enemies everywhere, the protagonist gives his only two swords to Linghu Chong and Lin Pingzhi. This is also something I don't understand.

Wow, they are exactly the same. This is

First of all, I would like to formally thank every reader who has read this book and has been reading it. Because I am a newcomer and it is my first book, so it is inevitable that there will be loopholes and all the details when writing. You can put it forward in a friendly way, and I will listen carefully to your suggestions and make reasonable modifications to make the plot smoother and more natural. I hope everyone can witness my growth, and I will work hard to write this story well. Thank you all again.

It's so fake. Xiao Li killed Guan Qi with a flying knife, just like Qiao Feng beat the sweeping monk to death. If the author knew Guan Qi's talent, he wouldn't have written it like this. If Guan Qi didn't want to die, no one could kill him.

Why. Because the world limit is set because you can cause too much harm to the world. Can you break a mountain with one palm? We can't talk about the world limit. The Fengyun kind is pretty much the same.

Author, please update quickly and don't be short and weak.