Honglou: I Only Want Daiyu

The male protagonist is neither a time traveler nor a local. Judging from the introduction, he is a bit alien to people. It would be good on a female channel, but it would be annoying on a male channel.

Just like the title, book lovers who like it can get started.

I posted it at the starting point, so I won't say much more here. All in all it looks good and there is room for improvement.

Old Sister Three: Zhen Baoyu's Mother Throughout "A Dream of Red Mansions", the concept of "old relatives" is mentioned in many places. So what is the concept of old relatives? According to the "Modern Chinese Dictionary", the entry "Laoqin" is interpreted as "a relative of many years". In Chapter 79, Xiangling used the word "old relative" when introducing Guihua Xia's family to Jia Baoyu. We know that Xia Jingui's mother is Xue Pan's aunt. This old relative has two meanings: first, they were married a generation ago, so it took a long time; second, the relationship is relatively close. In Chapter 84, Wang Erdiao proposed marriage to Jia Baoyu. When it came to Mr. Zhang's daughter, Zhan Guang said that Mr. Zhang was related to Uncle Xing. When Mrs. Wang asked about it in person the next day, Mrs. The two old relatives in "A Dream of Red Mansions" are both related by marriage, which is one step closer than the explanation in the dictionary. So what is the relationship between the Zhen Mansion and the Jia Mansion? In the second chapter, Leng Zixing introduced to Jia Yucun that the Zhen Mansion and the Jia Mansion were old relatives; in the fifty-sixth chapter, Jia's mother also said that the Zhen Mansion and the Jia Mansion were family friends and old relatives; in the 114th chapter, Jia Zheng and Zhen Yingjia recognized each other as old relatives; in the 115th chapter, Mrs. Wang and Zhen Baoyu's mother also recognized each other as old relatives. Jia Zheng, Zhen Yingjia, and Mrs. Wang came from the Jia Mansion, Zhen Mansion, and Wang Mansion respectively, but the origin of Mrs. Zhen Yingjia was not stated. And the sentence "(Mrs. Zhen) saw that Jia Baoyu's appearance and figure were the same as his son" has already explained the truth: Mrs. Zhen is also Jia Baoyu's biological aunt. Otherwise, it cannot explain why Zhen and Jia Baoyu are so similar. After all, my nephew cannot leave his uncle's house. Therefore, Zhen Baoyu's mother is a direct descendant. Old Sister Four: Wang Ziteng's Wife As introduced before, Wang Ziteng is the direct grandson of Prince Bo of the county under the control of Du Taiwei. His second sister is married to Jia Zheng, the second master of Rongguo Mansion, who is Mrs. Wang in the book; the other younger sister is married to the eldest son of the emperor Xue, who is Aunt Xue in the book. Wang Ziteng's wife appears many times in the book. In the twenty-fifth chapter, she celebrated her birthday and specially sent people to invite Mrs. Jia and Mrs. Wang. If we only consider the brother-sister relationship between Mrs. Wang and Wang Ziteng, it would not be special for Mrs. Wang Ziteng to invite her sister-in-law back to her parents' home to have fun together on her birthday, but it would be unreasonable to invite her sister-in-law's mother-in-law at the same time. The author made a bold assumption: Wang Ziteng's wife was actually one of the four old sisters of the Jia family, and she was Jia's mother's biological daughter. In this way, the whole mystery was solved. In the twenty-fifth chapter, we saw that Jia Mu did not attend Mrs. Wang Ziteng's birthday banquet because she was uncomfortable (physically unwell), and Mrs. Wang also did not go. After the birthday party, Wang Ziteng's wife went to Rongguo Mansion to visit; Chapter 62: On Jia Baoyu's birthday, Aunt Xue's gift was half of that of Wang Ziteng. This is because Wang Ziteng and his wife and Jia Zheng and his wife are two pairs of siblings. Wang Ziteng is both Jia Baoyu's uncle and uncle, and Mrs. Wang Ziteng is both Jia Baoyu's aunt and aunt; In the seventieth chapter, Mrs. Wang Ziteng was about to marry her daughter, so she specially invited Wang Xifeng to help. She also invited all the nieces and nephews to spend a day. Mother Jia and Mrs. Wang arranged for Baoyu, Tanchun, Lin Daiyu and Baochai to go with them. If we only look at the relationship between Wang Ziteng and Mrs. Wang, there is no problem in arranging for Jia Baoyu and Xue Baochai to go. Tanchun can also be regarded as going with Mrs. Wang's daughter, but Lin Daiyu should not be included. But if Mrs. Wang Ziteng is also the legitimate daughter of Jia Mu, then it would be logical for Lin Daiyu to go with her. Therefore, Wang Ziteng's wife is a direct descendant So, we know that the "four old sisters" of Jia's family are: Zhen Baoyu's mother (born from the direct line, living), Wang Ziteng's wife (born from the direct line, living), Lin Daiyu's mother Jia Min (born from the direct line, died), Shi Xiangyun's mother (born from a common concubine, died).

Zixing sighed: "There are four old sisters, and this one (Jia Min) is the youngest, and she is gone. The old sister has passed away, and I only see how the younger ones will fare in the future." In this passage by Leng Zixing, he talks about three generations of Jia family. The "old sisters" mentioned first refer to Jia Min's generation; the "older generation sisters" refer to Jia Daishan's generation; and the "younger generation" refer to the generations of welcoming the spring, exploring the spring, and appreciating the spring. [Who are the four "old sisters"] One of the old sisters: Jia Min Jia Min is undoubtedly the first among the old sisters to be sure. It is generally believed that Jia Min is the biological daughter of Shi Taijun Jia Mu. In the third chapter, Lin Daiyu entered the Rongguo Mansion, met everyone, and after sitting down, Jia Mu said to Lin Daiyu, "My children, the only one who loves me is your mother..." Unfortunately, Jia Min died too early, leaving behind a weak daughter Lin Daiyu, who had to seek refuge in Rongguo Mansion. Lin Daiyu came to Rongguo Mansion and was very popular with Jia Mu. She was arranged to live in Bishaqi. This blue gauze cabinet is next to Jia's mother's master bedroom. It was originally Jia Baoyu's bedroom. Now Jia Baoyu gave the bi gauze cabinet to Lin Daiyu and moved it out to sleep on the bed outside (the third chapter). After spring started, Jia Mu arranged to move Yingchun, Tanchun and Xichun to the three small houses behind Mrs. Wang's house. In this way, only Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu were left with Jia Mu (Chapter 7). After the wedding, Concubine Yuan was worried that the Grand View Garden would be sparse, so she specially arranged for Eunuch Xia to go to the Rongguo Mansion to issue an edict to allow several sisters in the family who were good at poetry and poetry to live there. These sisters included Yingchun, Xichun, Tanchun and Daiyu. In addition, Concubine Yuan specifically asked Jia Baoyu and Xue Baochai to live in the house. (Chapter 23) Why point it out specifically? First, because Jia Baoyu is a young master, he should not live in the garden with his sisters; secondly, because Xue Baochai is a foreign relative and does not have the blood of the Jia family, so he is not qualified to enjoy a separate residence in the mansion. Those who joined the Jia family after Xue Baochai, such as Xing Xiuyan, Li Wen, Li Qi sisters, Xue Baoqin, etc., Were not arranged to live alone, as evidenced by Chapter 49. From our current perspective, for Jia Baoyu, Xue Baochai and Lin Daiyu are aunts and cousins, and there is no difference in blood relationship. However, under the historical environment at that time, Lin Daiyu was much closer than Xue Baochai, because Lin Daiyu had Jia's blood and was the granddaughter of Jia's mother, so she naturally got a separate residence. Moreover, because of Jia Mu's liking, Lin Daiyu also had priority in choosing a residence. Old Sister 2: Shi Xiangyun's mother Shi Xiangyun's parents died young, and her grandfather was the direct brother of Jia Mu (Shi's family). The historian also had two titles at that time, Shi Ding, the Marquis of Zhongjing, and Shi Nai, the Marquis of Baoling. They presumably lived in separate houses like the Jia family. Shi Xiangyun lived with his uncle Baoling Hou Shi Nai (Chapter 71). Shi Xiangyun often stayed with Jia Mu in Rongguo Mansion when he was a child, and lived in the Nuan Pavilion to the west of Jia Mu's master bedroom (Jia Baoyu lived in Bishaqi). At that time, Jia Mu appointed Xiren (named Zhenzhu at that time) to serve Xiangyun (Chapter 32). Shi Xiangyun's official appearance was in Chapter 20, which coincided with Concubine Yuan's wedding and the Ning and Rong mansions were busy making arrangements. This time Xiangyun lived in Lin Dai's Yufang (Nuan Pavilion) (Chapter 21). According to the plot of Chapter 32, we know that Nuange is actually the old place where Shi Xiangyun lived. Later, when Shi Xiangyun returned to Baolinghou Mansion, the three sisters Yingchun, Tanchun and Xichun lived there, and later Lin Daiyu lived there. Shi Xiangyun's second appearance was on the second day of the Dragon Boat Festival (Chapter 31). She took Nanny Zhou and many maids and daughters-in-law to see Jia Mu. At this time, sisters Baochai, Daiyu and Sanchun had all moved into the Grand View Garden, while Shi Xiangyun still lived in the pavilion next to Jia's mother's master bedroom. There is a detail in this time. Jia's mother asked Shi Xiangyun to visit her sister-in-law. Shi Xiangyun followed his words and went to visit Wang Xifeng and Li Wan. Shi Xiangyun's third appearance was on the second day after the establishment of Haitang Club. Jia Baoyu pestered Jia Mu and sent someone to fetch Shi Xiangyun. Shi Xiangyun was a lively person. He not only composed poems, but also made things. In order to discuss how to arrange eating crabs and writing poems at the same time, Xue Baochai invited Shi Xiangyun to live in Hengwuyuan. This is the first time Shi Xiangyun has lived in the Grand View Garden (Chapter 37). Until Chapter 49, Shi Xiangyun appeared for the fourth time. This year, several relatives came to Rongguo Mansion. Wang Xifeng's brother Wang Ren, Mrs. Xing's brother Uncle Xing, Li Wan's widowed aunt Li, and Aunt Xue's nephew Xue Biao all came to Beijing with their families to visit their relatives. Xing Xiuyan is the daughter of Mrs. Xing's brother, and Xue Baochai is the daughter of Mrs. Wang's sister. Yan and Chai have the same blood relationship with Rongguo Mansion, but Wang Xifeng felt it was inconvenient to set up another place, so she arranged for Xing Xiuyan and Yingchun to live together. For Li Wan's sake, Mother Jia asked Aunt Li and her family to stay in the small house in Daoxiang Village. Suddenly, three members of Aunt Li's family were added to the small house, which suddenly seemed crowded. However, there was no suggestion to find another place for Aunt Li and the others. So Xing Xiuyan, Li Wen, and Li Qi all moved into the Grand View Garden, but they did not find another place to live. Xue Baoqin lived with Jia Mu. At this time, Marquis Qia Baoling appointed officials from other provinces and took his family to leave the capital (Chapter 49). Because Jia Mu couldn't bear to leave Xiangyun, she took her home. She originally planned to order Sister Feng to live with him in another place in Grand View Garden. Shi Xiangyun refused, as long as he lived with Baochai, that was all. Through the description of the original work, we can see that Shi Xiangyun is the grand-niece of Jia Mu (Shi Taijun). His parents died young and he lived with Baoling Hou Shi Nai since he was a child. When Jia's mother (Shi Taijun) married into the Jia family, Shi Xiangyun's father might not have been born yet, at least Shi Xiangyun was not born yet. If it was just the above-mentioned relationship, Jia's mother could not have cared so much about her grandniece Shi Xiangyun. We boldly assume that Shi Xiangyun's mother is one of the "four old sisters", then all this will be completely explained. Shi Xiangyun's mother is the concubine sister of Jia She and Jia Zheng, so Shi Xiangyun should naturally call Li Wan and Wang Xifeng sister-in-law. But Shi Xiangyun's mother was a commoner. In those days, being well-matched was very important. Shi Xiangyun's father was not qualified to ascend the throne, so the Jia family would naturally not marry his legitimate daughter to him. Shi Xiangyun's mother may have been born to one of those old aunts.

It's very well written, please update it more

The writing is good and the characters are well drawn. It would be better to continue until the end.

The setting is very good. Through the past life relationship between Jiangzhucao and Sanshengshi, it fundamentally negates the former alliance between wood and stone. The portrayal of Daiyu is very good and very apt. The most rare thing is that it is rare for a male channel Red Mansion fanfiction to have a single heroine of Daiyu. I searched all over and couldn't find two books. The female channel depicts Daiyu in such a way that it is beyond recognition. I can't stand it anymore and feel melancholy! Author, you have to believe that there are still a lot of "Daiyu fans" in male videos. If you don't have a male channel, you must have a harem. Why don't you be the first person to try out the male channel that is full of harems and red mansions? Maybe it will become popular one day?