Douluo: Starting from the Engagement with Zhu Zhuqing

The first chapter shocked me. This is not Dou Er. Dou Yi White Tiger is the royal family after all, right? Dou Er, Huo Yun'er, was a maid, Dai Hao was guarding the side, and the Duchess of the Duke's Palace covered the sky with one hand. She allowed the servants to bully their mother and son, which was barely acceptable (this was on the premise of hiding Dai Hao). You are a horse-riding warrior, royal family! The emperor is not dead yet, the martial spirit has not yet awakened, and even a prince who is a concubine is still a prince. Is this the queen's character? Do you understand what royalty is? If someone dared to bully the emperor's son, he would be slapping the emperor in the face. How could a eunuch dare? Is the emperor a turtle? You said that you are a waste after awakening your martial spirit. You should just say it when others bully you (Huo Yuhao is born with level 1, so the servants dare to bully him unscrupulously, so the logic makes sense). The eunuchs and queens are not afraid of the protagonist who is born with level 10, the royal family is a death guard or the emperor pays attention, and the protagonist grows up to take revenge? In the first chapter, the protagonist and the people around him are described as being like a bunch of idiots. After traveling through time, the protagonist crawls into a dog hole to get food, preparing to be humiliated and turned into a dog. What do you think the protagonist is thinking? I'm thinking about women, I'm thinking about living for myself after time travel, and I'm thinking about lawlessness. Okay, okay, think about it more, I suggest you drill more dog holes. After suffering for 6 years, a time traveler who doesn't think about revenge is a waste. Even if Huo Yuhao later became a slave of the Tang family and was born as a slave to someone else, he still wanted to take revenge on the Duke's Palace in the early stage. You start as a prince, and you are not even as good as Huo Yuhao in the early stage. A prince's life is worse than that of a slave. I'm too lazy to spray, so I'll leave it at that. I took a look at the book reviews, which were mixed. I wanted to read it, but I didn't expect that there was something there, but it was really not that good.

A tiger, a cat, the spirit of martial arts mutated into a green lotus. As long as he awakens, if he survives the day, he will have a backer in the royal family. Really, the blood and majesty of the royal family are a joke. Keeping this kind of mutation is a shame to the royal family. They are the kind who would rather kill the wrong one than let it go.

At seven years old, you enter primary school. On the day you enter school, you are bullied by a fifth-grade child. You can't beat me, so I swore bitterly in my heart, thirty years to the east of the river, thirty years to the west of the river. At thirteen years old, you are at the peak of your sixth grade. After years of martial arts training, you have the air of a naughty kid every time you breathe in and out. Like those fifth-grade kids, even three of them are no match for you. At this time, you meet the strong people in the junior high school level. Even the weakest junior high school strong people, their strength is by no means comparable to yours. And in this realm, you have enough financial resources to buy two packs of spicy strips! So scary. So you make up your mind to enter junior high school. At the age of sixteen, you have reached the state of junior high school, through years of study and hard work. You already look down on your classmates who are at the same level. The usually elusive high school realm is the direction that a strong person should move forward. At the age of eighteen, you discovered the reason why there are so few strong people in high school. It turns out that due to the limitations of the laws of heaven and earth, only a few people in each generation can pass the test of the college entrance examination. Those who pass will completely lose their mortal bodies and enter the university realm. Received blessings from higher education institutions. Those who fail to pass will lose this opportunity and become adults. In ancient times, some of them could also become the most powerful people and obtain the Great Way. But in the current world trend, where the vitality of heaven and earth is so thin, it is almost difficult. If you go with it, you will be ordinary, if you go against it, you will become an immortal. You must seize this opportunity. After graduating from college, you suddenly find that the people around you are all college students. At this time, your girlfriend of four years actually belongs to a huge family power. In their eyes, you without financial resources are like an ant. The family promised their girlfriend to a young master of a large family business. You were forced to leave your girlfriend temporarily. You just remember that Lihua Daiyu's girlfriend made a three-year contract with you. You recall the shame, the powerlessness, and the pain you experienced that day in elementary school. My heart is roaring and roaring. The veins on your hands are popping up. When I come back, I will dye the sky with demon blood. In order to become stronger in a short time, you chose the Internet. From then on, you enter a big company and get the guidance of a big boss. Even the time spent sitting on the toilet is used to study. As he continued to grow stronger, he discovered a shocking secret. From then on, he started his own business. I have encountered despair and encountered danger. From Beijing to. From Shanghai to Shenzhen, I met strong people who worked hard in the adult realm, received life experience from the guidance of a mysterious old man, and talked with geniuses who died young after graduating from college. They all become your strength to move forward. Three years later, everything was calm and peaceful at the woman's home. Do you think he will come? Hearing this sentence, my girlfriend felt a little bitter in her heart. In the past three years, she had refused many blind dates arranged by her family. Now it's almost reaching its limit. The sun is almost setting. Is it just a disappointment after all? At this time, a huge and trembling breath came to my girlfriend's home. The mother-in-law's expression changed slightly at the sound of the mount. Their family had been in business for many years, but in the final analysis it was just a small branch of the family. She had seen Bentley, the patriarch of the big family, from afar, and she would never forget that voice in her life. But this sound is real, but this sound is different. The father-in-law suddenly thought of something, his face suddenly turned pale and he started to tremble, this was impossible. How can you do it. No matter how hard I try for half my life, I can't overcome it. Father-in-law and mother-in-law, you are well. A man's voice sounded. Sure enough, a golden dragon Rolls-Royce came down from the doorstep. Suddenly there was silence in the house, and the mother-in-law asked cautiously. Where is the mansion? Answer day. In the magical city of Taiyi Xianfu (urban area), the mother-in-law lowered her head in shame and arranged for the wedding, and the young couple needless to say. Another year passed, and on this day a man named Ma wearing glasses rode a penguin to visit. After some pleasantries, you are invited to enter the new map Zhengdao Alliance (Internet Conference). As soon as you enter, you find that there are about dozens of people present, and their strength is unfathomable. Among them, you can hear that I have no interest in money and I have not received a salary for a month. Set a small goal and earn one hundred million first. I am face blind and don't know whether it is beautiful or not. Things like that. You can't help but be stunned for a while. Recalling what I saw and heard along the way, it feels like a lifetime ago.

But can you have a good understanding of Douluo Dalu and write fan fiction? Randomly changing settings, whether Zhu Zhuqing's innate soul power, or whether you absorbed a seven-hundred-year-old soul ring and only raised it to level 11 soul power, is too ridiculous. The name of the protagonist is also ridiculous. Have you ever seen anyone with a two-character name in the Star Luo Empire? And how can Dai Mubai, a ten-level guy, fight you? Even if they are evenly matched, they even create their own soul skills. Do you know what martial soul pressure is? How can an ordinary evil white tiger compete with the protagonist's martial spirit? Just like how can an ordinary wolf get mad in front of the Wolf King? The soul skills haven't changed at all. They are still the White Tiger Protective Barrier. Then what exactly is your martial soul?

The Holy Mother reaches the extreme, torturing the protagonist for 6 years and letting others go. Zhu Zhuqing wants to kill the protagonist and chooses to bet on whether she will actually kill him. Placing your life on others is like a licking dog. Every time I say I want revenge, it turns out like a holy mother who chooses to let the enemy go. Without a strong and heroic demeanor, he is just a useless protagonist. Any other dog as the protagonist would have done better than him.

When I read the first chapter, it was extremely poisonous. It didn't follow normal logic at all, and I didn't notice that my IQ was a bit low.

I really can't stand the author anymore. There are a lot of loopholes. Zhu Zhuqing is the seventh level of innate soul power. Although I didn't introduce it so clearly, I still introduced it. It's just not introduced so clearly. You wrote it wrong enough to be understandable. But Dugu Bo. It's just a treasure land in Sunset Forest. It's very clear why it was written as Sunset Forest because of his column, and a lot of people know that they can't stand the details. There are too many loopholes.

I originally thought it was pure love, but when the author was about to start buying with coins in the later paragraph, he emphasized those three sentences! There is a big contrast with what the protagonist was thinking before. At the beginning, the protagonist said that the reason why he wanted to choose Zhu Zhuqing was because he loved her! But you said this is a harem story, and I feel very sorry for Zhu Zhuqing! When it comes to this, although it is said by the author himself, the character of the protagonist here has begun to collapse! To sum up, I feel sorry for her. She loves her so much, but you still want to choose the second heroine. What should you do if you originally thought she was someone with pure love? This makes everyone very embarrassed!

It's so damn poisonous. I read more than twenty chapters and I was completely disgusted.

The level 80 queen of the Nether Civet is jealous of the protagonist's mother? It's funny. The protagonist's mother is only level 50, so why should she be jealous? Those above level 50 are considered strong, so how could they be treated like this? Not to mention, he was treated like this without awakening his martial spirit. Emperor Xingluo is sick, why don't he look forward to the White Tiger's martial spirit? Isn't this broadcasting just for the White Tiger Spirit?