Mystery: Start with the Reader

It is best not to touch the Gou Sanjia route; The five omniscient and omnipotent are all gods; The path of the cultivator has the Earth Mother; The Generalist path also has sequence 0; The true god of the criminal path seems to be tainted by cassava; The night secretly peeks at the God of Death and the God of War, still holding in his hand the uniqueness of the medicine man's path; Chik of the Witch Path is either a god or the King of Angels (God is more likely, after all, the Witch Sect is looking for the sequence characteristics of the Hunter Path in the later stage); The Black Emperor path is a bit photogenic, with Russell in the front and King Loen in the back; The only ones left with hope are: Hunter (need to defeat that three-in-one wraith) Judge (must defeat Loen royal family) Prisoner (Desire Cassava is an old time with no emotions) The Secret Peeper (there are a lot of competitors) Wheel of Fortune (this run is really strong) Looking at it this way, there are really not many people who can reach the 0 position of the sequence path - of course, if you are like a squid and just want to describe the world and the adventure process, choosing a path is very casual. After all, Squid won't have many chapters after overcoming his coward and becoming a high-sequence character. PS: The picture comes from Baidu Encyclopedia

The protagonist is just looking for trouble. Anyone who has seen Mystery and traveled to Mystery will not do anything haphazardly. Ninety-nine percent of the time, he will develop silently first instead of doing things that have nothing to do with him. I really vomited when I saw the plot about Xio. It's what you told people. If you don't tell or get involved, there won't be so many things. What the hell, don't look at Mr. Ke who worked conscientiously and didn't waste time after traveling through time. In the end, he was directly written to death by that pen in the first volume. After Mr. Ke died once, he even dared not touch his eldest brother and sister. You are always seeking death and looking for trouble everywhere you go.

The Lord of Mysteries, the protagonist is more like a supporting role! ! ! ! ! ! The author pays too much attention to the original work. I feel that there are no other changes except that there is one more protagonist than the original work. Moreover, I feel that the golden finger is not very useful and cannot reach the god level (and it cannot be the only sequence). After all, there is already someone in the high sequence of the protagonist. Should I just write it according to the original work and then insert a protagonist to become an angel level?

If fan fiction wants to be good, it must surpass the original work or find another way. If it's too difficult to transcend, I won't talk about it. To find another way, you have to have your own highlights. If you don't have characteristics, there will be nothing interesting.

The crises that occur in more than 50 chapters are all because of Xio, who is really too much of a dog-licker and desperately seeking death. He doesn't have any skills yet he tries his best to kill himself. He's so annoying to show off everywhere. I really want to kill the protagonist's virtues. The supporting characters forcibly subdue his intelligence. The protagonist acts like he knows everything about the plot. He also reveals his knowledge of the plot and the original characters. In chapter 50, he reveals a lot of side information. I just want to ask you, the author, what is the butterfly effect? Do you know what misfortune comes from your mouth? Revealing a lot of information, the butterfly effect can only change a little bit the trajectory of your dog-licking target, Hugh, and it's all over in one stroke? Vomited. There is also a way of writing about the reader with this little ink. There is no connection between the protagonist and the reader at all. The process of describing the acting method from Sequence 9 to Sequence 8 is briefly described. On the contrary, it is annoying to watch this dead woman Xue who keeps appearing. The funniest thing is the copy in the dream. The writing style is so bad. The author didn't put any ink on the first three levels, which required wisdom. As a result, the wisdom was not reflected and he had to rely on gold fingers to force through the levels. It was very boring to watch. The description of the first three levels is the same as that of the mentally handicapped. It is too inconsistent for Conan to appear in the first three levels. This is the Crusu world. Logically speaking, even Russell is a time traveler. By the time he has the ability to create a copy of the dream, his status will be very high. Will Conan appear in the first three levels? It's so funny that the third level can directly affect the trajectory of reality. Do you know what causality is? This dream copy is really poisonous.

I think the author can tell the protagonist's future path to becoming a god. Arranged in the starry sky. For example, if you make an old god, (not to mention killing him, that's impossible. But if you make him a little stronger, isn't that enough?) Don't say you can't beat the old god, having a golden finger for the protagonist is too much! If not, you can cooperate with Adam, Klein, or some other big guys. It would be nice if the arrangements are reasonable.

The protagonist likes to look for trouble because he can't bear to have such a kind smile disappear. . . Can you survive in this world for one more episode? Then I have to go to work, I like to help people, I help others to create the butterfly effect, but I also want to help others clean up the mess. Forget it, others will still suspect my intentions, and then throw out more secrets and knowledge to prove it, and then continue to butterfly the next person, becoming a cycle, and this Hugh is the heroine?

Chapter 300 is only sequence 6? It feels like there are a lot of unnecessary things. Brother, you are a fanfic! Are you trying to force me to read the original novel? Just change someone else! Encountered the same thing?

As far as writing level and quality are concerned, it's okay. It just seems too inconsistent. All in all, it is a doujin with a huge amount of secondary creations. Except for the background world called Lord of Mysteries, in fact the spiritual core has nothing to do with the original work. To be honest, why do you still need Klein to appear? He directly kicked himself as the Lord of Mysteries Protagonist: Liu Boai Early plot: There is no sense of existence. By the way, Hugh falls in love with Foles. Mid- to late-stage plot: I didn't expect that I would be so stupid (I came to Mystery a few times before and started a series of plans, and had an affair with a group of goddesses and angels.), I started the Long Aotian mode, what kind of Lord of Mysteries, this is called the Lord of the Unknown (arrogant face). 🐶🐶🐶

It feels like the protagonist can tell all his secrets, which is a bit brainless.