Silver Overlord

If a person who drowned for several hours was revived with a traditional Chinese medicine prescription, it would probably make all the scientists working for modern medicine angry to death

At first I thought the beginning was a bit novel. The background of the main character was a modern quasi-elite. He understood a lot of truths in front of Uncle Qian, and gave him a young, mature, courageous and resourceful character. However, after more than 100 chapters, he seemed so hot-blooded and brainless. Inexplicably, he even killed his own father. I couldn't stand it any longer, so I decisively gave up the book.

The author's positioning of the book is fantasy, and the focus was indeed on cultivation in the early days, but now, it is completely written in historical fiction, and cultivation is very small. I am also a long-time fan of Zuihu, and plotting in Black Iron plays a very small role, and the writing about cultivation is very exciting. Maybe Zuihu wants to change the style and try new writing methods, but at present, there are still big flaws. I often read it and can't stand it. Chapter by chapter, leaping through the book has no impact on reading, which shows that there is still a lot of room for improvement. I hope Zuihu has a clear positioning for Baiyin, understands what he wants to write, what he is good at writing, and what the audience likes to watch. I hope everyone will support me and let Zuihu see my suggestions! [Emot=default,45/]

The writing is too messy, just to make the main character and his whole family die. I deleted the outline and started writing again. It's not a bit worse than the previous one. Recommended. You are not in front of the monthly ticket. I feel that the people in front of you who helped you become the leader suffered a big loss.

Castle of Black Iron, Overlord of Silver, the next one should be Throne of Gold

To be honest, this book is much worse than Black Iron so far. I don't seem to have seen the specific cultivation level. I often jump to read it, and I don't know if I missed it. It's too exaggerated that a samurai can kill at various levels. I don't know how many levels he has surpassed. And not only does the protagonist have a parallel world where he can know history 4 years in advance, but there are also various predictions in the real world that the protagonist is the savior. I feel that the author's outline was not written well or it collapsed. The black iron is an upgrade and is spectacular. This book only introduces 3 steps of foundation building, and then the protagonist no longer upgrades. He plays with bows and arrows, guns, and boxing. I just want to know how the levels are divided in this book. I don't understand it. It's a mess. Are there dragon and tiger warriors behind the samurai? And the martial artist? What's behind, Takeo? How do they need to be upgraded? Is it also 3 steps? Don't just talk about the protagonist's ability to use a bow and do various things instead of upgrading. Those who have been practicing for a lifetime and are N levels higher than the protagonist are like being able to kill just anyone by shooting arrows. That's a waste of training. It's almost 400 chapters. The protagonist's skill is still foundation building, but with a bow and a gun, he is invincible. Is it interesting? You are a little samurai, trying to save the world. Are you tired? All kinds of prophets have identified the protagonist as the savior, and they all come to your door. I want to ask, if a prophecy can target the protagonist, why is the protagonist still alive? Isn't this kind of person someone the emperor or other gods must kill immediately? They all choose to let the protagonist kneel down and beg to be stepped on when he grows up, so why don't you just kneel down and lick him? However, there are all kinds of difficulties in the book, and no one recognizes the savior. This logic is wrong, right? What the hell are you giving 5 stars? Black Iron is so good, just upgrade it, there is a way out in the world, it is clean and refreshing. The pace of this book is whirring, and the prophecies come one after another. The protagonist is not nervous at all. He practices the same old methods, neither hurry nor slow. He pays close attention to everything and practices weapons. Isn't that stupid? The protagonist in Black Iron is low-key and can change his face in various ways. Others cannot see it and no one predicts it. He can make a fortune in a low-key manner and have a way out of the world. Not to mention the various prophecies in this book, the protagonist died once just under the spotlight. I wasn't nervous at all about being predicted, I just kept playing, shooting the sky and the earth with a bow and becoming invincible, I was speechless. How does the author divide the levels of this book? What are the requirements for upgrading each level? Can the treasures of heaven, materials and earth help speed up the upgrade? The protagonist in Black Iron needs various crystals, and the progress of his training is clear. In this book, his training has been stagnant, and he only practices killing skills. It's too much. . . There are all kinds of predictions, but no one can predict the discovery of the protagonist's human skin mask, haha... It looks very helpless...

Comment: I was attracted by the introduction. The most precious things in the world are free, air, sunshine and family affection. There are also some neglected precious things that are clearly within easy reach but always invisible. Yes, we always ignore some people who are good to us, and always take that kindness for granted, but hurt that person, and we only know how to regret it when we lose it. So, as the title says, cherish everything around you. The article begins with the story of Li Qiang being cheated on by his girlfriend and breaking up, and then a very dramatic scene occurs, in which Li Qiang transforms into a second-generation rich man experiencing life in the private sector, making his girlfriend feel regretful. Originally this was already bloody enough, but the author went on to write it down. All of this was a scene directed and acted by Li Qiang, just to earn the remaining bit of self-esteem for himself. Let yourself be happy, because in life, isn't that what you want to be happy? It's boring to be submissive all the time. Li Qiang originally planned to leave this sad place and develop a good life in another place. He also had people to cooperate with. He thought he could reach the pinnacle of his life. However, God played another joke on him and let him be killed by a meteorite. He traveled to a place where martial arts were the only thing and was plotted against him as soon as he arrived. It really can't be too miserable. However, after traveling through time, Li Qiang had a good body and was still a well-known martial artist there. However, because the original Li Qiang was not good at dealing with people and worldly affairs, and only knew how to practice martial arts and then practice martial arts, he was often criticized by others. But don't those people who make irresponsible remarks envy Li Qiang's excellence? They only saw Li Qiang's glory, but never thought of the hard work and suffering Li Qiang had to endure. Only when Li Qiang is frustrated can he stand up and laugh mercilessly. And I hate this kind of people. They don't understand other people's hardships. They look at others from God's perspective, but they are nothing. So never denigrate the work of others easily. Book reviewer: Lin Zi

Zuihu's books are all slow-burning. The more you read them, the more you feel them. However, the slow update has lost many readers.

From Castle of Black Iron to now, I have been following books written by Seekers. I just think they are very well written. Some people say this is not good or that is not good, so don't read it. I think the author's writing is great, and I will keep revising it! When I get rich one day, I will reward you! Come on, author!

Give the author a suggestion! Originally I thought I was falling into the trap, but suddenly I ran two lines. It was too complicated. Is it really good to go back to the past? Shouldn't life be flawed? What do you think? I don't understand! The protagonist's personality is not very good! I could barely watch the plot before, but now even the plot is broken. What do you think you are doing so thanklessly? It's much worse than Kurogane.