Super God: Qilinti Breaks Up, Guardian Angel Arrives

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, defending the country and falling in love don't seem to interfere with each other. If we follow the author's logic, does it mean that all the soldiers who protect the country and the country must be divorced, and those who are married must be divorced? Isn't this pure nonsense?

When a war disaster breaks out in the country, how can it be compared with the temporary love between children? The protagonist is distressed by the breakup. The author can obviously write about the protagonist's understanding and let Qiqi go to fight and defend the country. He can make the protagonist noble and create a tragic character. However, the introduction says that due to temporary changes (referring to the country being in trouble), Qiqi will break up to defend the family and the country. I dare not evaluate the protagonist's values. It seems very green tea, which makes it difficult to like.

Qilin is the most assertive in the Xiongbing Company. It is impossible for her to break up with her boyfriend of 20 years just after joining the Xiongbing Company. If it is still possible after the Grand Canyon is bombed, at that time, the country will fight to the death on the battlefield. You must know that Ge Xiaolun has been on a blind date with ordinary people.

It's like shit. I want to know the end of QQ. Now it's a fucking theme and a bunch of templates. ***, Blocked.

A trivial matter can be solved in two sentences, but I am still writing it after writing thirty or forty chapters. The plot is not reasonable at all. Qilin is a policeman, not an idiot! ! ! It was originally rational, upright and good at thinking, but it made you write it like a resentful woman with a love brain. I'm really speechless. You haven't read the original work! I'll read a few fanfics and then write some reviews! Originally, a fan science fiction novel asked you to write a sad drama. You are not suitable to write this kind of story. You should write "Female Channel"

It's enough to mention it. It's been confusing all the time, and I can't figure out what your main plot is. Who is the protagonist? Is Qilin the protagonist? If she regrets it, she will regret it. You have been writing in detail. You are a fool. If you can't write, then don't do it. This is not a female video. What you are writing about is Super Seminary, not Love Nuannuan.

Qi Lin is a character in Super God whose IQ, appearance, and thoughts are both online. A sci-fi hot-blooded novel is turned into a Qiong Yao drama, the only one that is so disgusting. I thought the novels about Double Standard Douluo were disgusting, but this one is even worse than them.

A pure supernatural fanfic, neither fairy tale nor fantasy. The author has millions of words of experience! Please support me all the big guys!

The theme and plot idea are quite good, but the writing is a bit messy. One thing is said over and over again. I just finished the previous paragraph and said it again in a different way in the next paragraph, which is a bit annoying. The emotional drama is a bit disgusting, a bit like the trend of women's novels, and the protagonist doesn't look like a man at all, but has a female mindset. Excluding the plot, the writing is disgusting (emotional drama) and endlessly repetitive (Qilin's patriotism). It looks really bad and makes me feel irritated. I hope the author can further grasp the style of the work. This is fan fiction, not an emotional novel by Sumary.

What did you write? The staff assistant dares to love and hate because Ge Xiaolun dares to shoot and disobey orders to beat Sun Wukong. You can just write about female videos. You have to write about Super Seminary.