Douluo, Huo Yuhao Returns from Sekiro

Maybe it was because I was so tortured by the original work that I really couldn't accept Wang Dong'er or Tang Wutong as the heroine, and the protagonist changed a lot, but basically nothing changed. Wang Dong's daughter was still not discovered, and she still went to the Haotian Sect, and then returned to Shrek to confirm their relationship with Poseidon. The writing is very good, and the changes are also very interesting, but for personal reasons, I simply hate why the heroine is the same as the original work. If it weren't for the revelation of Tang San's plot against him, it would basically be no different from the original work.

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Some suggestions for authors 1. Word count There is no need to write 10,000+ words every day, just about 4,000 words is enough. There are so many chapters every day, but the quality is not very high, and the plot progress is also very slow (the same thing, introduced in large quantities. Abbreviation: water) 2. Typos and grammatical errors Starting from the W word update, there are a lot of typos and grammatical errors in every chapter, which greatly affects the viewing experience. 3. Regarding the protagonist's mental problems It stands to reason that since the protagonist has cleared Sekiro, his mind should be very mature and he should have his own views and understanding of everything. But I didn't notice it at all. It was like a setting was forced on the protagonist of the original work, but the result was that he was still a puppet without his own thoughts. (Don't tell me how old the protagonist is. There are a lot of precocious children in the countryside. Who is mentally immature?) 4. Repeated and frequent words Single words are used repeatedly. For example, when expressing sentences such as "surprised" and "unexpected", all the sentences I saw were "XXX took a breath of cold air", which appeared every one or two chapters, which greatly affected the viewing experience.

This should be the best Douluo fanfic I've ever read. First, it really expresses the author's thoughts on various character positions and some plot settings. There is no forced plot, it has its own rhythm. Secondly, at least he didn't start out as someone who was against Tang San or anything like that. At the beginning, it was said that it was anti-Tang San, but the methods used in the article were not seen in Tang San's plot novels. To be honest, this kind of protagonist is more disgusting than Tang San. Thirdly, there are many fanfics that belittle Shrek's facilities and teaching methods, even for the sake of belittling. However, the protagonist in this article discovered problems, raised questions, and at least proposed ways to improve them through his own practice and ability. This is progress. Fourth, the author has his own understanding of the upcoming war, but he has not written about it yet. This needs to be read again. At least it's not just a matter of characterizing the good and evil of several countries. The last point is just my personal opinion. Wei Mingren is a school that only aims to win. The protagonist Huo Yuhao is the same, and so is Tang San. They will do anything to achieve their goals. Huo Yuhao could blackmail and steal cannonballs, and Tang San could also break the inheritance and steal luck. After 23 years of writing fan fiction for 12 years, I feel that what is needed is a more complete plot setting and full-bodied characters. The introduction of the concept of Wei Mingliu is really the key to breaking the weak portrayal of humanistic villains in many Dou Er fandoms. After all, villains who always cling to double standards, hypocrites and other quasi-moral things, disgust the protagonist in the text and disgust the readers outside the text. This kind of villain is worthless. I hope the author can create more of Tang San as a villain, such as the inheritance of first-level gods and second-level gods and evil gods. There are also many evil soul masters in Douluo Continent. This will not only ease the relationship in all aspects of the God Realm, but also cause trouble for the protagonist. After all, the person who was born as a killer can tear apart the soul of his own daughter at will. Do you really care about the lives of other people? After all, Huo Yuhao, as the protagonist, has already had enough failures. There is no point in pushing all the way without difficulty.

I actually bought all the chapters at once after reading the good reviews, thinking it was a lesson learned. The protagonist only has three rings in more than 400 chapters. What kind of bullshit is written. In Saving Ma Xiaotao, the protagonist is even willing to die. Although it is later stated that the protagonist has a resurrection item, the protagonist "suicide" is to expel the energy in the body. Does the protagonist think that the energy will disappear after death or when he is resurrected? Do the Electrolux, Tianmeng, and Ice Emperor in the protagonist's body count as energy? I can't think calmly for someone I don't know much about. And the more I write later, the more childish and bad jokes become.

I think it's okay for Wang Dong to be the heroine. Did Wang Dong do anything disgusting? Tang Wutong is not Wang Dong, it's Tang Wutong and Tang San who are disgusting. What happened to Guanren Wang Dong? Wang Dong is quite pitiful. He only has half of his soul. Tang San has not yet placed several layers of seals and the curse of death at the age of 20. It's true that when people are sitting at home, the pot comes from the sky

4 stars, writing a book is not easy. You should read the comments first before reading the book. I really haven't played Sekiro and I can't understand it (if I didn't read the comments section and didn't know it was a game, I thought it was the author's second guess). Also, the plot is too long and the chapter names are a bit random. Personally, I feel that it would be enough if only Sekiro and the original work were added, and a Sendo-ryu feature was added. It felt like there were too many skills and too many features, which made it dizzying. I even opened a membership specifically for this book. I didn't expect it to be like this. Writing a book is not easy, maybe I am not the audience. I still support the author. It is recommended that readers who have never played Sekiro consider this as a second setting (it will have a slightly more immersive feel). Come on, author.

It's so beautiful and sad when I have no coins.

Huo Yuhao, who does not have the luck of Douluo, is normally a small person who cannot survive more than two chapters. This is still a familiar environment. It is really disgusting to think about it. Look at the operation of Tang Mou to get his mother to the God Realm. It must have been arranged since Huo Yuhao was born. Otherwise, she is just an ordinary maid, and she actually knows all the history of Tang Sect?

If the soul ring is taken from a soul beast with ultimate attributes, but the martial spirit does not reach the ultimate after absorbing the corresponding attributes of the soul ring, then the attributes attached to the martial soul using the corresponding soul skills will not be the ultimate attributes. The attributes possessed by the soul ring will enhance the attributes attached to the martial soul, but the soul skills released are based on the attributes of the martial soul. In the author's article, the second soul ring of the protagonist's second martial soul is taken from the Ice Jade Emperor Scorpion, which is the ultimate ice. There is no such thing as the soul skill released by this second soul ring is the ultimate ice and the martial soul is not the ultimate ice. If the attributes of the martial soul cannot reach the ultimate ice, then even if the soul ring comes from the Ice Jade Emperor Scorpion, the soul skill released will not be the ultimate ice. In addition, the author wrote too many Japanese names. It is understandable that the protagonist uses a Japanese sword alone. After all, the protagonist was in the Sekiro world before, but many of the cold weapons used by others are also written as Japanese weapons. It is very problematic. After all, the original author is not Japanese, and the world view is a strange world view that combines China and the West. There are no characters based on Japanese characters in the original work. It's just that these two places look a little awkward, and the settings are not clear, but the rest is fine.