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How many water friends did you invite? This book is poisonous. It is a poisonous article even if it is not considered a white text.

First of all, your introduction at the beginning is not sufficient. What makes people feel poisonous is that you were still talking about landing on Mars at the beginning, and then jumped directly to the main text without using a transition line to separate it, nor did you use this paragraph as a wedge. Furthermore, your introduction to this game does not mention it as an online game article at all at the beginning. Your introduction to the game must be sufficient and as early as possible. I will give you an example at the beginning. Then there is the description of the character, and it is recommended that the player's nickname be visible in this game, unless special props are used to modify it. In this way, when writing about player interaction, you can directly use nicknames instead of him, that man, that woman, that Japanese, etc. Also, you need to pay attention to your wording. The word "Heroes emerge from troubled times" at the beginning of your article is completely wrong, or exaggerated. If you really want to use suggestions, use upper and lower quotation marks. This way the article will be much more rigorous. Many readers today are very critical and irritable. If you want to set up suspense at the beginning, the requirements will be relatively high, and it can easily be self-defeating.

I have only read a few chapters and can barely talk about it. First, the transition is a bit stiff. There is no sense of immersion at all, I am confused, and I have no general image. (Another reader has also raised this issue, so I'll say it again,,,). Second, scene description. For example, when killing a leopard or something (I forgot about it just after watching it) the only thing that people can remember about the surrounding scene is: there are many people around, there is a stone, and the rest is gone. Another example is when I went to tell the village chief about the details of the mission: there were only three of them around, and there were no others. For another example, when I was looking for that quest monster, it felt like this to me. They were walking and suddenly transitioned into the forest. There were many trees in it, but the others were gone. I don't know if the author has experienced the feeling in the middle when I say this. . . . . The picture I imagined in my mind is that except for the ones I mentioned above, everything else has a white background. Third, character description. I have no idea what they are wearing, what their characteristics are, etc. (After adding the author's description, it gives me the feeling of a lifelike stick figure...) Fourth, attributes. I actually don't know how to say this, because it may be the author's setting. Let's talk about the attributes of the protagonist. A basic strength of 5 points is considered the standard for ordinary people, but according to the author, a basic strength of 15 pounds is too petty. (Two more sentences, bb, the author's writing is good, but the narrative method is wrong. Generally speaking, novels are divided into two situations; Xiaobai mode, which has a strong sense of substitution. God mode, just like reading a storybook, refers to the four famous works. The author is caught in the middle and it is very uncomfortable...) That's it. I haven't read a few chapters. The shortcomings that I can see are this. In fact, the author's writing is good. According to the books I have read, it is above average. There are just a few flaws in the various descriptions. If these are changed, this should be considered a good book. Come on, author.

Three updates a day. Writing 6,000 words a day has no effect. It's a sure sign of a rush! It's poorly written and some people criticize it. I'm so cowardly that I don't even have anyone to complain about? Just slap him to death with a piece of tofu

I just came in and read Chapter 2. Not bad. I added it to the bookshelf and received seven recommendation votes! Fine.

Five-star support, I support it, I support it, I support it!

Introduction to the game world at the beginning. It has a high degree of freedom. It is almost a complete simulation of the real world. There are also hidden maps. The creatures in the game world are similar to the creatures in the real world. In the game world, materials should be available and can be found freely. For example, the things that are killed together will not be lost after killing. The fonts can also be used by the players themselves. Let's start with Introducing Pig Heel, another person, fighting, this should be a foreshadowing, thus triggering a hidden mission. Maybe later, the main heel duel will have some stories. The character expression of Pig Heel in the first two pictures is that an irritable person causes public outrage by hunting monsters. This is irrational in the novice period, unless you are an old player with superb experience, otherwise you are brainless. If you are a normal person At least you have to reason first and not listen before taking action. But the protagonist has not played this game. To put it simply, he has not even played the game because the attribute points have been mentioned before and they will not be distributed. This proves that the protagonist has not played the game. His personality should be hot-blooded. But when it comes to the later personality, I feel a little strange. Let me tell you about the introduction of this game. In the game, there are many different types of people. Let me briefly introduce it. Shao means that as long as you have an ID card, you can get this game, regardless of nationality, so at the beginning, a cheetah invaded the village, and the players worked together to kill it. It is precisely because of this that there was a subsequent story. However, the pig's feet dueled with other people, because it was the samurai who caused it first, and then they dueled, but later, a girl intervened. I was very curious, why do you intervene when others are dueling? Are you troublesome or have a strong sense of justice? Let's not talk about this first. After they finish the fight, they trigger the hidden mission, complete the mission, and then prepare to buy supplies. Then the female character who helps the male protagonist cooperates with another male character. In simple terms, it is a tantrum with the shooter. In the end, the shooter is not satisfied. Tank, I looked at the male protagonist coldly, yes, he just looked at it coldly, and even complained. This sentence proves that his character is calm and does not like troublesome people. But later, the female character is dissatisfied with Tank, and goes on her own to hunt the mobs, and then she can't defeat them. You know it, and then Male protagonist, go help. I don't want to say anything about this. Maybe it's because of the previous help, maybe because you don't want to owe a favor, but after you finish helping, you still want to invite him to do hidden tasks. You just do it. You go to fight monsters and do tasks together. If you can't defeat them, run to the tree, and the other one , Japanese players tried to persuade the male protagonist, but this Japanese samurai player should be from a famous family, and his personality should be calm, aloof, and sometimes hot-blooded. If he couldn't beat him, he would open the teleportation scroll and let the female player go. However, what would happen if you didn't bring him here before? Then the Japanese samurai attacked the female player, then left, and asked the female player to beg him and teleport him. Maybe you think this samurai player is a bit like that, but the author wanted to highlight the character of the female player. Then the woman refused after finishing the family, which reflects his stubbornness, which can show her He has a strong character, but later on, you are attacked, you fall from the tree, and the protagonist is not in danger, so he hugs the female player. Calculating that they have known each other for less than eight hours, it is so good. Later, Pig's Foot chooses to jump off the cliff, and then takes out a pill and eats it. It's so intimate to protect the female player with your body. In less than eight hours, I used my body to protect the female player. Then, as mentioned above, the female player's character is strong. Then, he didn't resist in the protagonist's arms. I can't complain. Don't worry, there are more things to say. When we got to the bottom of the cliff, It means hiding the map. When he gets down there, he doesn't observe the terrain but cares about the female character's problems. He also tries to give him a health-recovering elixir, which he took to save his life on the cliff. The elixir, I, was speechless. Then, the female player called the protagonist brother, "I want to vomit blood. What the hell is this?" Where is the stubborn one in front of you? Did you feed the dog or lose it? Finally, we told each other each other's names. There must be a story behind this. Let's continue to complain about the next one. Then the female player was teleported away, and then snakes began to attack the protagonist. They almost died, but you told me that you took an extra pill for safety. Where did your sudden self-protection method come from? Wasn't it passionate and impulsive before? The IQ was too good. Let's ignore it for now. Then they went offline. After going offline, my father called me. I don't know what he said. Anyway, it was his father's sacrifice to heaven. He has boundless power. Don't ask me how I know. Then the protagonist drove his blue sports car, angrily, ran the red light and turned off the hospital bar. Rod, break in, don't ask me why I'm so fucking stupid, because he is the protagonist. The nurse from before borrowed a mobile phone to the male protagonist's father to record a recording, and then the mobile phone disappeared. Here comes the key point of complaining. The male protagonist ran directly to his father. I don't know what they said before. He came up and touched his nose with his hand to see if he was still breathless? It was really amazing. Then he was shocked and stepped back step by step until he pushed against the wall. Shouldn't a normal person call a doctor first? Your sudden burning operation showed me. As I said before, the nurse's mobile phone disappeared, and then the nurse ran over directly and asked the protagonist face to face, where is my mobile phone? Then the protagonist's expression was that of being helpless and his eyes were empty. I just wanted to say, nurse, where are your eyes? Did you forget to bring your glasses, or is it something? At this time, the nurse's expression was angry. Previously, the protagonist drove a sports car and ran through a red light. By coincidence, the police came up and took away the male protagonist. Then the male protagonist's eyes suddenly disappeared, and he left directly with the police. I want to say, is this male protagonist considered a fool? One second, I was confused, and the next second, this is what I should do, and then the nurse's expression instantly turned into a daze. Then after thinking about it for a while, I knew the whole story and I laughed. You are so smart, why can't you see the protagonist's performance just now? I just laughed, can you all do tricks? So magical? What kind of nurse do you want to be? It's great to perform, make money, and don't have to work so hard. Then after a group of screenings, I started looking for a mobile phone. After searching for a long time, I couldn't find it. Then the doctor sent the male protagonist's father to the morgue. This should be the father's sacrifice to heaven. His magic power is boundless. Here comes the key point of your complaints. After the male protagonist was released, he drove a blue sports car and met the nurse, and then the nurse's boyfriend. Who was he talking about? Why are you by your side? Then I won't tell you the bloody plot that followed. The two couples burst into tears. After they broke up, the male protagonist said, you can't beat my game world in the real world. Come to me. In the end, the nurse's boyfriend agreed with 666, and then the male protagonist invited Please, the nurse got in his car. I just wanted to say, you all seem to know each other. We are old acquaintances when we meet. It's amazing. I admire you. When we got to the back, the nurse got in the car and was crying loudly. Then the hero sent her home, but she said she wasn't home. Do you all understand what happens next? The male protagonist invited the nurse to his home, and then the nurse actually agreed, and then she was afraid that the male protagonist would do something bad to her. Since you were afraid, you still got on the woolen car. I was hesitant and entangled, and finally got on the car. I laughed. This novel is really good. Really, I really don't lie to you. I lied to you. I went out and picked up 1 million. I stepped on diamonds when I went out and won 5 million in lottery tickets.

The second one is that you said girls interfered in the pig's trotters fight. There are these narratives in the original text: ""This man must be a madman! " However, the person who said this loudly was the Indian man, who was already holding the rock in his hands. "I think you are the crazy one! " However, some bystanders couldn't help but deliberately made sarcastic remarks, causing the onlookers to burst into laughter. "What a commendable courage! " The beautiful girl archer didn't know whether it was praise or ridicule, but she inadvertently bent her bow and drew an arrow. " From the original text, it can be seen that this beautiful girl has a different appreciation of pig's feet than other players. Here we might as well consider why the Indian man said that pig's feet are crazy. It was only because he chose to surrender because he had no weapons when fighting his opponent. So under this kind of inertial thinking, his understanding is that pig's feet should surrender even if they have no weapons. Are you right? There is another sentence in the original text later, "... This was an excellent opportunity for Peak Qiankun to counterattack, but it did not do so. Instead, it looked in the direction of the arrow with a grateful expression. Facing the looking eyes, the beautiful girl shooter who came to help said calmly: "I admire your courage to not be afraid of death. ..." " These are the original words of the beautiful girl who came to help. So the question is, why did she say this? I want to see here that we have understood that the pig's feet are Chinese and the opponent is Japanese. So who is this beautiful girl? " Read the original text next "I don't want it. Even if it's for asylum, I'd rather go to China. " "Go to what China? Why go to China if your dad doesn't want you? Just reflect on it in your room! "" This is an excerpt from the original text of Chapter 12, which reveals that the nationality of the beautiful girl is Korean, and her father is Chinese. So? This makes it easy to understand why the beautiful girl came to help the pig's feet. I can analyze about three points first. The first point should be based on the fact that his father is Chinese. The second point is that he has a certain interest in pig's feet, and the third point is that he has a hatred for the Japanese. Of course, readers can also continue to explore in the original text. Let's experience, understand and ponder by yourself here!

I was ordered by a book friend to test the book. Without further ado, let's get started. 1: "A spaceship landed without warning on a vast, desolate and dark planet." Because the surface of Mars is covered with hematite, also known as iron oxide, the surface of Mars is orange-red. It's not desolate and dark. 2: "With a loud noise, like a cannonball, a spaceship landed without warning on a vast, desolate and dim planet." The landing of the spaceship was not a missile launch, nor an asteroid impact, nor a loud noise. If you don't feel sorry for Mars, the country still feels sorry for the spacecraft. If I don't understand, watch the video of the moon landing. 3: "Such sounds of excitement and joy are not only filled in the mouths of the astronauts from all over the world, but also in the mouths of people from all over the earth." Now the landing of the spacecraft cannot be broadcast live globally, and even if it can be done, the country will not do it. Please take writing this book seriously. People like you who have a very close timeline should be more realistic and have some interest. Follow-up book reviews will continue to be updated.

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