Cultivating Heroes is Just the First Step in My Divine Power

Tomorrow (March 14, 2025) we will start to repair the first 160,000 words, mainly to deal with problems such as confusing plots, confusing lines, jumping thoughts, unclear explanations, too many settings, etc. There may be situations where the plots are deleted or moved. We will try our best to ensure that the total amount of information remains unchanged "before the current progress". Try to unify the general text before entering v. There is a small probability that a new branch will be added (such as the Dreamkeeper branch). The construction status, post-construction changes (if major changes will be marked directly, and the specific content will not be recorded), filled, deleted content, etc. Will be recorded in this post.

The current repair directions are: 1. Repair excessively chaotic descriptions and excessively jumping lines. 2. Add an introduction to the inner thoughts of the characters and the cause and effect of the plot, and complete the places where the author's perspective is clearly seen but not stated, causing readers to find it baffling. 3. Possibly (depending on the author's ability, I have a bad cold recently, it may be postponed) to speed up the early main plot and make the beginning more readable. A plot update patch will be written to introduce it to everyone, so there is no need to read it again. If you have any sentences that you don't understand, parts that you think are too confusing, or description methods that you are not used to, you can reply under this post. There are some parts that may not be repaired in the end, but I will thank every reader for their praise and criticism. This will become the motivation for me and my work to become better!

The modification content is: 1. The title was changed from "Will a 10,000-year-old old woman regard a hundred-year-old Long Aotian as a grandchild?" To "Can't wake up?" 2. Modify the middle paragraph. The specific effect of the poison does not appear. Add the paragraph "Do you believe that Xiao Siming is a good deed and a saint?"... "You don't believe it" and "I don't believe it either": The problem is that if senior Lei Huang is not a think tank, then Liu Ruyan will not be able to perform her job well. [I'm not the only one who is dark, right? I will be responsible for making suggestions when the time comes... No, no, no, with my personality and appearance, it would be more appropriate for me to be a bad woman and infiltrate the villain. Liu Ruyan thought indifferently. Suddenly I wanted to have a cigarette. "Fairy, I have something to ask you." "Say." "Why are you worried that Immortal Lord needs help? I think he does everything well." Liu Ruyan blinked and recalled: "Yun Shangze introduced in the system that Ye Xiaosiming became a saint and ascended to the upper world because he did too many good things. Do you believe it?" "... Don't believe it." "I don't believe it either." We are all cultivators of immortality, so hearing such words will just make you laughable. If you can really achieve this level of immortality by saving people, how many people will you have to save? How many billions, how many reincarnations? This makes no sense at all, just like a story told to coax a child. Liu Ruyan lowered her eyes, a little worried: "So, I have a guess." She said: "Perhaps, Immortal Lord did not accomplish the great feat of becoming a god by himself before." "Oh?" "Either, there were many people like us who followed him and struggled with him; or, he and many other great people struggled together. Otherwise, the character of Xian Zun, who trusts and respects others, will not be cultivated, but a suspicious and withdrawn savior will be created." Speaking of "struggle together", the figures of friends who had traveled through time together appeared in front of Liu Ruyan's eyes. She wiped the corners of her eyes: "So, I've been thinking about it. "Would you feel lonely if you respect him as an immortal? "So I thought if we could be his hands, his feet, help him out, maybe he would realize that there are a lot of people out there with him." After saying that, the temporary medical office was quiet for a long time. Neither of them spoke. Ling Shuangtian stopped talking three times and finally said: "Senior." "Huh?" "Teach me how to use poison." In Liu Ruyan's somewhat surprised look, Ling Shuangtian stretched out his hand to form an ice sword and handed it to Liu Ruyan: "Let's work together to study new killing moves, and we will eliminate the corpses of the invading enemies." ".................." Liu Ruyan blinked. She seemed to be in a trance just now, and suddenly she could recall the faces of friends who had worked hard together. "Okay." ... After teaching, Liu Ruyan seemed tired from sitting, or was frightened by Ling Shuangtian's stupidity. She stood up and walked around roughly with her hands on her hips. Perhaps it was because after arriving in Yunshangze, although it was an "oriental wonderland" everywhere, the logic behind it and the ideas of his colleagues around him were very modern, causing Liu Ruyan to relapse into the habits of modern people many years ago. Liu Ruyan gave up: "I can't finish teaching. I'll continue teaching when senior Lei Huang comes." Lei Huang, who had been taking notes outside the door but couldn't keep up with Liu Ruyan's thoughts, suddenly raised his head. Do you want to take such a complicated course again?

A little bit foggy

There are so many things I want to say. During this period of editing, I was really exhausted. Hahaha, I encountered some big problems during the evening revision. I will report it to everyone first. This post will be deleted after it is completely repaired tomorrow. 1. Regarding the issue of "the protagonist's personality is like a dummy" This is the main direction of repair. In fact, this question has troubled me for a long time: Is it really a fake person? Even when I discussed this with other authors, we all came to the same conclusion: The fake talent is right. The protagonist is a college student from a well-to-do class with an explosion of information, everything is a bit indifferent, and it is normal to be fake. It is normal to not know why to work hard. This emptiness is in line with the character. But correspondingly, I did some research later and understood that everyone was not dissatisfied because of the "pseudo-human" protagonist, but more dissatisfied with me as the author for not arranging some flesh-and-blood plots for the protagonist. The dummy is the background. It needs pain, flesh and blood, and emotions. This is not the fault of the reader or the protagonist, but my lack of ability as an author. The solution is to add a journey to the lower world in the early stage to increase the protagonist's attention to reality, which is also the main focus of this restoration. The changed plot is the middle part of "after Ye Yimeng pinches Ye Jinghua and before drawing Lei Huang". It has been fully implanted and can be watched normally. 2. The rhythm changes too quickly, making it uncomfortable to read. I did some research before repairing it, opened a few books to read, and found that it was not that the rhythm changed too fast, but that "there was no polish between the two new events and transitions". The description of the passage of time, the description of the scene, and some explanations were lacking, which caused everyone's reading discomfort. The way to deal with it is that every day I will polish the previous chapters and constantly add details of transitions in the chapters, so that it will be much more comfortable to read. 3. Not feeling cool enough This part is because I started revising the text at about 180,000 words, so the subsequent plot is relatively calm. I will delete the relevant settings and insert more specific plots. My goal is to make it exciting without leaving the characters and information unchanged. 4. The settings are too messy, the writing looks like a female video, and there is an empress who won't read it... There are too many problems, some are reasonable, some are unreasonable, some can be corrected, and some are like finding faults. In fact, I value readers' comments very much. I will read every comment carefully, so it actually leads to doubts about myself hahh But fortunately, the torturous experience of editing during this period made me realize: the mechanism does not recommend that you change the text. Chapters cannot be moved, deleting a chapter that has already been written will be counted as an absence, and you must write the corresponding number of words to delete... Various mechanisms indicate that authors are encouraged to ignore past shortcomings and move forward. In fact, I was very upset last night because a reader went to the reader group to ask what kind of mess the recent updates were and what the results were. Thinking about it carefully, in fact, the most precious thing to me is watching the readers who accompanied me along the way, isn't it? I should look forward. Because some chapters were deleted during revision and merged into the front, I may not be able to get my perfect score, but I will not give up on this book, and I will not cut it. Even if it takes 300,000 words to put on the shelves, and I cannot get perfect score, I will not cut it. I will write until the end, and I will also open the second book later. I will continue to become a more powerful author, so that my readers can see my updates more comfortably every day. I have also encountered a lot of troubles during this period of editing. I would like to thank everyone who has been supporting me and voting for me. Currently, I am communicating with the editor because of the issue of "deleting chapters will result in absence from work." I will fix the last chapter after asking about the solution tomorrow. I will write a detailed patch description at that time. See you all tomorrow night. (Toshita seat)

1. Add about 20,000 words of new plot, which will be inserted once everything is ready, and the cause and effect logic will be repaired, and the chapters will be filled in before and after Chapter 8. 2. Regarding the problem of "chaotic rhythm", after thinking about it, I realized that it is not that the rhythm is disordered, but that the transition and scene description are not done well, and the transition is stiff. I will add more transition parts to soften the transition. 3. In response to the problem of "feeling too empty", more struggles between the protagonist and living people and the protagonist are added, and more emotions are written in. At the same time, the character of the protagonist is restored to the second version of the initial design, and the arrogance and stubbornness are added. 4. In response to the problem of "poor writing", we began to liberate the perspective from the protagonist more and start the narrative more from God's perspective. 5. In response to the problem of "peace", the order of the before and after plots is modified. The three card pools are no longer connected together, and the main mission is emphasized. 6. Added a new character: Master Qingluan It's the birthday of an old man at home on Sunday, so I may have to take a day off. All the text that needs to be repaired has been prepared and will continue to be repaired tonight. It is expected to be completed around Monday.

The main plot parts that will be changed (sequence or new content added) are Chapters 4 and 5, Chapter 10 to Chapter 22, and Chapter 42 to Chapter 53. Repairs will be carried out during the day, and updates may be delayed at night (there will be two supplementary chapters updated in the middle). In order not to affect everyone's continuous reading, it is recommended to read after the repair is completed. The update is expected to be completed on March 19th. If additional problems are encountered and the time needs to be postponed, I will continue to publish update posts to point out the updated parts of the plot for you. You are welcome to watch the new plot.

I originally wanted to cut it off, but I decided to be a person worthy of readers and told the editor not to be full-time. I would delete tens of thousands of words from the article until the plot becomes unstable. I would like to restore the outline. I will take a rest for the next few days and slowly start to resume updating.