Across the Heavens: Starting from Bajiquan

When I saw a story about someone killing people everywhere, I knew that the author was destroying the hearts of our audience again. This work "Under One Man" is different from those Long Aotian novels. His main theme is to stretch the muscles and temper the mind, not to let the protagonist show off. As an author, haven't you ever read Under One Person? Don't you feel ashamed when you write about the protagonist Long Aotian? Just like the middle school boy Zhao Nian who was rescued by Zhuge Qing, and the strangers in Biyou Village who were forcibly transformed by the self-cultivation furnace. The original author Mi Er has already ridiculed this kind of Long Aotian's protagonist. You still use this kind of Long Aotian's protagonist to write about one person. I really don't know what you think. Don't you feel ashamed?

The personality is too arrogant and self-centered. The little girl from the Liu family was killed directly after just threatening her. Others just want to threaten and run away, but you just kill them directly. In addition to digging graves and holding others hostage. Are there any major faults?

Zhetian's combat power was simply shattered. It has been said before that the protagonist's combat power is almost comparable to that of an immortal, but later on he still has to wield a sword to fight an ancestor king. The sword was also broken into pieces by the ancestor king. I am so speechless when writing about this place. Even great emperors can kill saints as well as ants, but you are speechless.

The protagonist is very strong and the fights are well written, but the problem with the protagonist's personality is that he is too self-centered and treats others as NPCs, without any conscience or evil. Sometimes the writing is normal and then too messy. There are also ten guys except Lao Tianshi who don't forcefully strengthen others at all. The protagonist is like that and it is so troublesome to fight a king.

I can't stand it at all, the writing is a mess

I couldn't stand it after reading a few pictures, so I just read the comments. As expected, a lot of people scolded me for being too toxic. You don't respect other people's original works when you write a fanfic.

There is no intelligence work at all. The worlds of each work all violate the settings. The plots are taken for granted and do not respect the original works at all.

**It's another eunuch. Dog enters the smoke and goes to fight to be the chief steward.

Seeing all the one and two star reviews, how did you get a 7.4 Rating?

The combat power of this book has completely collapsed. Earlier, I said that the protagonist came up with an idea, but later he was beaten by Wang Ai alone and had no power to fight back. So what is the use of this idea? The spirit is strong, the spirit is strong.