Qing Yu Nian: People Are in the Inspection Institute, Hosted by Poisonous Men!

I also think it's best not to write emotional scenes with women. If you want women, the author can set them in the background when writing, so that it is not easy to write and not collapse. Since it has not been loaded (for more than ten years), it is best not to accept it now. According to the current rhythm, it is still very comfortable.

To be honest, it's really hard for you to be so aggrieved when you have so many means at your disposal. What's the use of Abao? Raised a father? When you meet a woman, you don't even know if she's hostile or not, and you give her all the information. It's better to chop her with a sword.

What's the Poison System? It's a dog-legged subsystem.

Please come here to write mindless and cool articles. Don't you know what your brain is? Why do you have to wear the hat of a highly intelligent counselor? It looks embarrassing

It's more human-like than Ai. There are a lot of typos. The first part is pretty good. The second part is written by a different person or written for Ai. It's hard to comment.

As a person with no bottom line, it is best not to have feelings, because once you have a weakness, it will be fatal.

The most annoying thing is to write about it just after watching a TV series, and it means nothing.

Not bad, not bad. Compared with the other two books I read, the new Qing Yu Nian, the fan fiction is much better. I gave him four stars for one of them, and he even banned me from the whole book, but this book didn't contain the junk I wanted to read.

The protagonist has no goals, is not human in the early stage, and becomes a human in the later stage. Creating a cold and calculating character in the early stage actually conceals a boring, perverted and torturous nature and enhances strength? A fight for power? It's just some bad taste and the patches applied to the system that reflect each other. In the later stage, he looked human-like but not human-like. What was human-like was that he was attracted to women, and even though he was in a "trance", he thought he had become a normal person. What was not human-like was that he was "embarrassed" and "embarrassed to refuse", and was in a pretentious state where he didn't want to take responsibility but felt like he was forced to do nothing. Such a disgusting state, no wonder so many people turned away from that episode. In the early stage, I wrote normally, in the later stage, I was casual and coping, and it was unfinished. In the early stage, you should write some content, but in the later stage, there is no actual content, and the plot is piled up randomly, just like keeping a running account; or it jumps repeatedly, and the characters that should be included are not followed up, and you can only rely on the system to add some people to advance the plot; In the end, dealing with the temple was even more boring. The temporary addition of plug-ins, threats and confrontations were also ridiculous. I didn't know what it was doing. The system could then go to another world, and then it was done carelessly. In fact, the above evaluation is very subjective, but it feels like this. The most important point is that you don't know what the protagonist wants to do. He doesn't like women, money, or power. He just likes strength. After improving his strength, he can get it. The temple hurriedly went to another world, giving people the feeling of a systematic wage earner and slave, without their own pursuits and status. Sometimes they look like people and sometimes they don't, giving people no sense of involvement and no sense of satisfaction. How many people can like this overall hollow character?

Those pets alone are poisonous enough and pointless.