
Witches
by The Concubine Comes Down From The Palace
About This Novel
"Traveling" and starting a new life in a new world sounds good, but is it really like this? When time travel occurs, it means a complete separation from the past. The longing of family members, the nostalgia of friends, the love of lovers, these sincere emotions are all cut off at the root due to time travel, and become autumn leaves drifting in the wind, leaving only the sigh of sadness after the family is broken. Are you still anxious about the disappearance of your family members? Are you still worried about the disappearance of your friends? Are you still crying all day long because your lover's whereabouts are unknown? Then come to us! Traveler Transaction Processing "Company" is here to serve you wholeheartedly. Express your thoughts, bring back news, and even find poor people who are lost in another world. Your needs are our mission. --------Of course the above is all nonsense-------- Lin Zhenxi, an outstanding employee of the company and a C-level special correspondent who has been to six different worlds, said: I really don't understand why so many people like to go to this strange world. Anyway, I just want to go home. Comprehensive comics & interpenetrations. The heroine is not married, pure magic in the early stage, and magic technology in the later stage. Worlds that have been traveled as backgrounds: Harry Potter, Gensokyo Scarlet Devil Mansion, Magical Nightmare, Magical Girl Nanoha, Magical Girl Madoka Magica, and Date Live.
What Readers Think
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Official(6)Scraped 4d ago
lengthy
There's so much nonsense at the beginning that I can't even find the main text.
Eat
Witch, wizard, witch, devil boy, uh huh huh
1 million words and no comments yet
It's too bad that no one has commented after 1 million words! ! ! ! ! !
Why are there so few people? There are only a few people commenting on it with more than a million words. I think "Online Game: Fantasy Mage" is quite interesting.
Give the author a piece of advice
Listen or not, it's up to you. It's not that there is no market for original novels, it's just that in today's market, it's too difficult to break through based on originality alone! First, the writing requirements are very high. No matter what the subject matter, the original plot, unsightly, boring, lack of vitality in descriptions, all these factors may cause it. Book lovers will be impatient, read slowly, and slowly enter the world that the author wants to depict. This is an irresistible factor! Only an author with superb writing skills can depict an interesting and fascinating world! Only original novels like this can survive. Therefore, if you want to write a completely original novel, you should first ask yourself, do you have the writing power? The second one is the sense of immersion. From the rise of online novels to the present, a sense of immersion has always been the pursuit of all readers. Especially after the emergence of time-travel novels, instead of the previous fantasy of being the protagonist, the fantasy of being the protagonist has been added. They look the same, but are actually completely different. Knowing the plot, destroying the plot, changing the plot, creating plots or even new worlds are all cool. Therefore, when the author's writing style is not strong, adding a second point to enhance the sense of substitution will make it more attractive! After all, my writing skills are not very good, so I can only make up my mind. Like this article, if the protagonist adds a time traveler setting, or changes from male to female, it will increase the desire to read further. It's a pity that now it's an original protagonist, so when the protagonist is dealing with various events, book friends obviously know the sequel of the plot and even fantasize about what they should do. However, the protagonist is still there, and then many people quit (well, I quit in Chapter 7). They can't stand it anymore and have no desire. Today's readers are creatures that lose their passion so quickly. Finally, cheers to the author! For your next book, think carefully about the market before writing it. Only by complying with the market can you survive, then succeed and become a god, and your voice will increase. When the time comes, you can create the world you want, and people will look at it. One step? Stop dreaming. Slipping away.
I think it's pretty good-looking, and the setting is very novel.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(6)Scraped 4d ago
lengthy
There's so much nonsense at the beginning that I can't even find the main text.
Eat
Witch, wizard, witch, devil boy, uh huh huh
1 million words and no comments yet
It's too bad that no one has commented after 1 million words! ! ! ! ! !
Why are there so few people? There are only a few people commenting on it with more than a million words. I think "Online Game: Fantasy Mage" is quite interesting.
Give the author a piece of advice
Listen or not, it's up to you. It's not that there is no market for original novels, it's just that in today's market, it's too difficult to break through based on originality alone! First, the writing requirements are very high. No matter what the subject matter, the original plot, unsightly, boring, lack of vitality in descriptions, all these factors may cause it. Book lovers will be impatient, read slowly, and slowly enter the world that the author wants to depict. This is an irresistible factor! Only an author with superb writing skills can depict an interesting and fascinating world! Only original novels like this can survive. Therefore, if you want to write a completely original novel, you should first ask yourself, do you have the writing power? The second one is the sense of immersion. From the rise of online novels to the present, a sense of immersion has always been the pursuit of all readers. Especially after the emergence of time-travel novels, instead of the previous fantasy of being the protagonist, the fantasy of being the protagonist has been added. They look the same, but are actually completely different. Knowing the plot, destroying the plot, changing the plot, creating plots or even new worlds are all cool. Therefore, when the author's writing style is not strong, adding a second point to enhance the sense of substitution will make it more attractive! After all, my writing skills are not very good, so I can only make up my mind. Like this article, if the protagonist adds a time traveler setting, or changes from male to female, it will increase the desire to read further. It's a pity that now it's an original protagonist, so when the protagonist is dealing with various events, book friends obviously know the sequel of the plot and even fantasize about what they should do. However, the protagonist is still there, and then many people quit (well, I quit in Chapter 7). They can't stand it anymore and have no desire. Today's readers are creatures that lose their passion so quickly. Finally, cheers to the author! For your next book, think carefully about the market before writing it. Only by complying with the market can you survive, then succeed and become a god, and your voice will increase. When the time comes, you can create the world you want, and people will look at it. One step? Stop dreaming. Slipping away.
I think it's pretty good-looking, and the setting is very novel.









