Douluo: Lie Down and Write a Diary, Something is Wrong with Them

This book is a fill-in second-generation fanfic. Don't keep mentioning the original work to me. I dare say that most people have not read the original work as many times as I have. In addition, there is a lot of information on the Internet that has been compiled and analyzed, so it's not that I don't understand it, but there is a reason. I came up with this book because I didn't like some of the settings of the original work. (Don't comment if you don't like it, don't accuse the author of deleting the comment) The setting of the original book is very childish, but many readers still have stereotypes, so they criticized me in the book review section, giving negative reviews and setting the pace. It's really not easy to write about Douluo. How can such things happen in Douluo? This book has added low-level settings: 1: Advanced martial arts must be obtained through the fusion of strong martial arts from both men and women, otherwise the probability will be reduced. 2: There are many hidden power families. In addition to the Wuhun Palace enshrinement family, Xingguan Sect, Fengjian Sect, etc. In the original work, there are also the newly set Tianchen Shengshi Bank, the Light and Dark Spider Clan, the Sky Fox Clan, ancient soul beasts that have been sleeping and sealed for more than a million years, etc.

Come on, come on, come on, don't give up, well written

Then leave it to myself! Hahahahahaha

The author's hacking is so bad. If you want to be hacky, at least the logic is reasonable. For example, Xiao Wu sacrificing Ah Yin can be a conspiracy, and Tang Sansan goes to Haotian Sect. The previous hard hacks are even more illogical. I also like to watch hacking Tang San and torturing Tang San, but it is pointless to be so hacky. On the other hand, it is said that combining with a spirit beast is forbidden. Taboo, and then he wants to lust for the soul beast, treating all the characters in it as fools, just giving them away... Dou Yi is willing to find a lot of black spots, but there is no need to be black, hard black is boring, but it shows that the protagonist confuses right and wrong, and then gives himself a great and upright image, which makes people feel disgusting

Pk1 has passed, the follow-up reading is 900, the follow-up reading is close to 1:1 (14:13) Thank you all for your support! (Those who say I write like a dog flying should stop complaining. Users know whether the product is good or not. When you go to the supermarket to buy meat, and you see the fish on the side and say it is too fishy? If you don't eat fish, others are not allowed to eat it, right?) One more thing: This book is a speculative fanfic based on the original work. If it were written according to the original work itself, who could come up with the final answer in the absence of details? It's all ambiguous. Not to mention 100%, most of these people are pretending to be reasonable customers, but in fact they are fans of Tang San. This work, after in-depth research based on other fans, was criticized and blackmailed. I have added imaginative settings to the numerous settings bugs in the original work. Why not? For example: Can you believe that there are no arrangements in Holy Soul Village? In such a world, is there any village where oppression does not exist? Notting College is a college for soul masters. It has a majestic gate. Can you believe that men and women live together and can't even afford a blanket? Again: As a normal person, you can't think of Bibi Dong liking Yu Xiaogang even if you think about it, right? This is what the original work calls forced setting and forced darkness. In order to rationalize the entire Douluo Continent and fulfill his childhood regrets, the author thought a lot and made so many efforts, but was said to be forced to be evil, which is really chilling. One final point: This work is not the kind of astronomical work that uses the gimmick of Douluo to go to other worlds. It focuses on the ambiguous interaction with the heroines and depicts the three-dimensional real characters of Tang San and Tang Hao. This is an important reason for my good results. Don't maliciously lead readers to set the pace!

You may not know that I have just experienced a life and death experience, which was so painful that I doubted my life. I originally thought that the pain caused by the stone attack would not be painful after the operation, but I never expected that it would be so painful to remove the tube! I suddenly felt that those who died suddenly seemed to be nothing, and the continuous pain was terrifying. Of course death is sad and extremely painful. Just a feeling. Therefore, everyone must exercise more, drink more water, eat healthy and safe food, pay attention to oxalic acid, purine, alcohol, and scientific seasonings, live a happy life, and stay healthy. Otherwise, all kinds of diseases will come to your door, and you will have no place to cry if you regret it.

Tai Shui, a small city of Notting has hundreds of chapters, and by the end of it, there are more than 10,000 chapters of a personal master who cannot catch up with the school belle.

I really don't blame Chihiro-level, I can't control myself even if I were to do so!

My friend, you write a diary with a title. The content of the diary is not about how you tortured Tang Sanduo, and some of the logic does not make sense.

How to say it? I have read a little bit, and there is no other diary where the sudden psychosis and the heroine going crazy look very comfortable, but the author likes to change some places, like Bibi Dong, if you want to accept it, then you must change it, it doesn't matter if you don't accept it or not, but like Xiao Wu and Lei Zhi's Breath, it seems to be a lot of redundancy and drama. Especially Xiao Wu's original work didn't write anything that even remotely hinted that Tang Hao and Xiao Wu knew each other before Tang San was 6 years old. This author's second set is already capable of killing people. It's even a bit illogical. This is the first time I have seen this kind of creation. Tang Hao and Xiao Wu knew each other before Tang San was 6 years old, and even went through a matchmaking process with Tang San? If that's the case, then why did Xiao Wu agree to be Tang San's sister? Is it so exciting and expensive to play? Then Xiao Wu is very good at it, right? ! ! That's outrageous