Naruto: System Jinchuuriki, Give Me More Points!
About This Novel
[The dungeons have been decided so far: Goblin Slayer, Kimetsu no Yaiba, Spell Return, Gun Yong...] Time travel as Naruto and start in purgatory, but you can level up alone in the dungeon. Before graduating from the ninja school, he had killed hundreds of goblins and was nicknamed Goblin Slayer. In "The Legend of the Eyes", what's the point of not having the Samsara Eye? The evil eye of death, open! He changed his job to Shadow Lord and fought through the Fourth Ninja War, with all the strong men under his command. Nine Lamas, the power of the Six Paths is nothing but external force. Strengthen yourself and see the beauty of pure numerical values! On this day, Otsutsuki Toneri came from the moon to steal my wife. Will it win? ... This book is also called "Naruto Doesn't Want to Be Hokage", "Naruto Returns from the World of Heavens", "Naruto Levels Up Alone in the Dungeon"
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Official(19)Scraped 4d ago
Ino was inserted inexplicably. Did he fall in love with Naruto after seeing him defeat Sasuke? Even Sakura is not as good as Sakura. Although Sakura is poor in quality, she is at least dedicated. If Naruto was not the protagonist and was defeated, would Ino have to fall into the arms of someone else again?
Doesn't the author look at his own plot? Just how does the protagonist know his identity? Is there really no problem in saying that the film owes him? Wouldn't the old monkey wonder how the protagonist knew this? You wrote before that the protagonist would have no problem with holding things, but then you would reveal that he has a problem with his backhand...?
It was too late to time travel (Hinata was hooked up with the original Naruto, and so were the interpersonal relationships, so of course she was punished)
In addition, my problem is that it is too awkward when pretending to be cool, and there is no feeling of pretending to be invisible. For example, directly telling Sarutobi Hiruzen, you owe the protagonist, and there is a cold sweat on the back after walking out 😰, directly calling Naruto's full name, and the protagonist's attitude has changed 180° in one day. The above is still barely acceptable.之后到杀哥布林守护村庄那段,被人嘴臭,鸣人武器架别人脖子上,然后鸣人表情从白到黑再白,描写的还挺细,啊啊啊啊啊啊好尬啊啊啊啊我的我的受不了 After that, after killing more goblins than either side, the clones killed were not counted at the beginning, so they forced a face-slapping session. After talking for a long time, they added the number of clones killed, and then slapped the other party in the face (it's embarrassing to slap the NPC with poor information, but the reader knows the truth), ahhhhhh, so embarrassing, like a slap in the face like the urban Wenlong King. It's so embarrassing to feel good, it makes me feel uncomfortable
In Chapter 96, the poison begins. I sympathize with the goblins in the world of Goblin Slayer. I can't bear to kill them, but I will pity them if hundreds of them die. Chapter 97 issued an order to some goblins not to harm humans or steal for an unknown length of time, but then let all the goblins go...
Have you ever been speechless? Did you write that you were happy? Just write slowly, I guess it won't take long /
When Naruto was in the Ninja School, everything was lacking except for Chakra. Then the protagonist traveled through time and lost Chakra.
It feels like these women's dumpling wrappers are all prepared for Naruto and they don't have any thoughts of their own.
There are more than 200 pictures with the protagonist being underage and a girl being promoted. Are you, the author, planning to wait until it is finished?
It's still ok, be careful not to offend Naruto fans
Wouldn't traveling into Naruto mean killing the original "Naruto"? That's not as good as creating an original character.
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Official(19)Scraped 4d ago
Ino was inserted inexplicably. Did he fall in love with Naruto after seeing him defeat Sasuke? Even Sakura is not as good as Sakura. Although Sakura is poor in quality, she is at least dedicated. If Naruto was not the protagonist and was defeated, would Ino have to fall into the arms of someone else again?
Doesn't the author look at his own plot? Just how does the protagonist know his identity? Is there really no problem in saying that the film owes him? Wouldn't the old monkey wonder how the protagonist knew this? You wrote before that the protagonist would have no problem with holding things, but then you would reveal that he has a problem with his backhand...?
It was too late to time travel (Hinata was hooked up with the original Naruto, and so were the interpersonal relationships, so of course she was punished)
In addition, my problem is that it is too awkward when pretending to be cool, and there is no feeling of pretending to be invisible. For example, directly telling Sarutobi Hiruzen, you owe the protagonist, and there is a cold sweat on the back after walking out 😰, directly calling Naruto's full name, and the protagonist's attitude has changed 180° in one day. The above is still barely acceptable.之后到杀哥布林守护村庄那段,被人嘴臭,鸣人武器架别人脖子上,然后鸣人表情从白到黑再白,描写的还挺细,啊啊啊啊啊啊好尬啊啊啊啊我的我的受不了 After that, after killing more goblins than either side, the clones killed were not counted at the beginning, so they forced a face-slapping session. After talking for a long time, they added the number of clones killed, and then slapped the other party in the face (it's embarrassing to slap the NPC with poor information, but the reader knows the truth), ahhhhhh, so embarrassing, like a slap in the face like the urban Wenlong King. It's so embarrassing to feel good, it makes me feel uncomfortable
In Chapter 96, the poison begins. I sympathize with the goblins in the world of Goblin Slayer. I can't bear to kill them, but I will pity them if hundreds of them die. Chapter 97 issued an order to some goblins not to harm humans or steal for an unknown length of time, but then let all the goblins go...
Have you ever been speechless? Did you write that you were happy? Just write slowly, I guess it won't take long /
When Naruto was in the Ninja School, everything was lacking except for Chakra. Then the protagonist traveled through time and lost Chakra.
It feels like these women's dumpling wrappers are all prepared for Naruto and they don't have any thoughts of their own.
There are more than 200 pictures with the protagonist being underage and a girl being promoted. Are you, the author, planning to wait until it is finished?
It's still ok, be careful not to offend Naruto fans
Wouldn't traveling into Naruto mean killing the original "Naruto"? That's not as good as creating an original character.
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