
Commander's Unlimited Part-time Job Journey
About This Novel
So, a new journey begins. This time, I learned the lessons from this book, reduced the information density, and made the layout smaller. The number of words in the outline and detailed planning should be around 1.8 Million---2 million. The title of the book [Fantasy City Lone Star] hopes that everyone can support it. Here is the introduction of the book: From the boulevards of the capital of the New Elf Empire, to the dirty alleys of the haunted United Kingdom of Giant Trolls, through the fog of the industrial city of the dwarves, under the gaze of the dragon, come Travelers from another world, together with the elites of the Third Human Republic, witnessed the harsh interrogation of the goblins, walked into the gnomes' magical surveillance vehicles, and battled wits and courage with the Zerg pretenders. Between the thrills and the turbulent undercurrent, they guarded the secrets of the two worlds. "Tell me, are you afraid of dying?" "That's part of the job.
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Official(14)Scraped 22d ago
The time has come again to abandon the book
Probably because I saw that in the Knight Princess mission, I was about to explore a rock on a certain mountain. Originally, this section was nothing. After reading online articles for so many years, I rarely abandon the book when I see any annoying terms. But the paragraph about the three virgin princesses is a bit long, and the corresponding plot can probably be fully described. These are the attitudes and behaviors of the three women and the protagonist. Originally it was nothing, I didn't want to watch it until I saw it. But after watching it, my inner analysis and fermentation gave me the idea that I didn't want to watch it before the plot was completed. I found that the protagonist did not meet expectations, was unsatisfactory, and even felt a little disgusting, annoying, and disgusting. Let me share my thoughts on Our Lady. This kind of person is actually similar to a person with some kind of neuropathy. Wherever there are conveniences, there are also inconveniences. It takes a little deception to communicate and cooperate with such people better. Of course, you can deal with it however you want when you have time. Just understand it in your heart. But obviously the environment the author wants to describe may be different from the environment I read. I think the author doesn't have time to do so many things in this period. In order to be sincere and make gestures to the Holy Mother, the psyker can't figure out the thoughts of an ordinary creature. ........ When I think about it, I also think about my own problem. I am a very emotional person, but sometimes the opposite happens. Overall, it's pretty good. For a StarCraft novel,
The first few dozen pictures were pretty good, but since the release of Tal'darin, what else has been written in the following chapters?
What follows is simply the author's obscene, poisonous, and confusing logic. It's better to start rewriting from Tal'darin and ruin the novel later.
Do you know why so few people read this book?
Because most of us are blind...
Big cheers for the author (ง •̀_•́)ง, I support you!
I think the author's writing is pretty good, and I hope to continue to work hard!
Characters and sources 2
There are too many characters in this book, and their relationships are quite messy. After constant requests from book friends, YaYa finally released a character relationship list recently, which is very helpful in understanding some of the contents in the book. Due to some reasons, this part of the content cannot be seen here, so the kind-hearted Yaya sent me a screenshot after learning about the situation. The following is the list details.
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Everything is written for family and friends.
I read a little bit and don't know what I wrote.
[em ot=default,18/]It's hard to do, it's hard to do, it's hard to do, it's hard to do
I have read this book three times. Please post a review to support it haha
I had just reached the Zerus stage when I read this book for the first time. After a while, I read the update for the second time to the warship r. After a long time, I read it again to take a look. The author's writing style is really good. In the early stage, before Rayman went to Nerazim, the pace of the writing was a bit tight. The language had an inexplicable feeling that was translated from a foreign work's storytelling. However, it got much better later. From my personal point of view, this may be the best interstellar fanfic on QQ (or maybe I haven't found a good one). Although I may get out of the trap after the interstellar story is over, I will still support the author.
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Official(14)Scraped 22d ago
The time has come again to abandon the book
Probably because I saw that in the Knight Princess mission, I was about to explore a rock on a certain mountain. Originally, this section was nothing. After reading online articles for so many years, I rarely abandon the book when I see any annoying terms. But the paragraph about the three virgin princesses is a bit long, and the corresponding plot can probably be fully described. These are the attitudes and behaviors of the three women and the protagonist. Originally it was nothing, I didn't want to watch it until I saw it. But after watching it, my inner analysis and fermentation gave me the idea that I didn't want to watch it before the plot was completed. I found that the protagonist did not meet expectations, was unsatisfactory, and even felt a little disgusting, annoying, and disgusting. Let me share my thoughts on Our Lady. This kind of person is actually similar to a person with some kind of neuropathy. Wherever there are conveniences, there are also inconveniences. It takes a little deception to communicate and cooperate with such people better. Of course, you can deal with it however you want when you have time. Just understand it in your heart. But obviously the environment the author wants to describe may be different from the environment I read. I think the author doesn't have time to do so many things in this period. In order to be sincere and make gestures to the Holy Mother, the psyker can't figure out the thoughts of an ordinary creature. ........ When I think about it, I also think about my own problem. I am a very emotional person, but sometimes the opposite happens. Overall, it's pretty good. For a StarCraft novel,
The first few dozen pictures were pretty good, but since the release of Tal'darin, what else has been written in the following chapters?
What follows is simply the author's obscene, poisonous, and confusing logic. It's better to start rewriting from Tal'darin and ruin the novel later.
Do you know why so few people read this book?
Because most of us are blind...
Big cheers for the author (ง •̀_•́)ง, I support you!
I think the author's writing is pretty good, and I hope to continue to work hard!
Characters and sources 2
There are too many characters in this book, and their relationships are quite messy. After constant requests from book friends, YaYa finally released a character relationship list recently, which is very helpful in understanding some of the contents in the book. Due to some reasons, this part of the content cannot be seen here, so the kind-hearted Yaya sent me a screenshot after learning about the situation. The following is the list details.
????
Everything is written for family and friends.
I read a little bit and don't know what I wrote.
[em ot=default,18/]It's hard to do, it's hard to do, it's hard to do, it's hard to do
I have read this book three times. Please post a review to support it haha
I had just reached the Zerus stage when I read this book for the first time. After a while, I read the update for the second time to the warship r. After a long time, I read it again to take a look. The author's writing style is really good. In the early stage, before Rayman went to Nerazim, the pace of the writing was a bit tight. The language had an inexplicable feeling that was translated from a foreign work's storytelling. However, it got much better later. From my personal point of view, this may be the best interstellar fanfic on QQ (or maybe I haven't found a good one). Although I may get out of the trap after the interstellar story is over, I will still support the author.
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