Journey to the Broken Realm

This is the author. I feel that the content of the first volume is still too general. No elements are well mixed. There are four differences and the characteristics of rushing to finish the project. Let's take the first part, Wang Ping, for a total of ten chapters. It is completely a small character biography, and there is a major poisonous point in the Internet literary world-the eunuch. This thing will greatly reduce the reader's sense of substitution and make the article's refreshing feeling close to nothing. I did this eunuch to fit my identity. Of course, as an ordinary person, the way to counterattack is to be a eunuch, but in the end, the devil's body appeared. Explanation: I didn't expect it. I acted it. It was a bit suspected of feeding Ollie, and it made the readers feel deliberately disgusted. Although this was not the author's intention, it may have a similar effect. I'm sorry. Li Mu's sudden waist-breaking farming in the second life, and the explanation of the demon who forcibly returned to the circle may have a certain effect, but it is indeed a bit unreasonable for me to start the actual operation without introducing the male protagonist's academic qualifications. Later, although I added the so-called universal science and engineering education of college or above in the second life's main world, and the memories of the second life, the content was still too far-fetched. The third life was purely written by me in a hurry, but Wu Qiu's world view and specific attributes were not well written. I am deeply sorry for this. But as for the changes in the power system, what I want to say is that there are no surprises, it is just vague. This is deliberately so. Although the effect is likely to be negative, it shows the chaos of world relations. After all, we cannot say that the essence of battle is spiritual pressure, right? Then stack up the numerical values, describe the ability, and create a vacuum at will. Oh, what if the world is so thin that even a dump truck can't bear it? So I think the overall feeling of this article is in one word - strange. The author can't tell where the strange thing is specifically. Maybe this world is too ordinary as a novice village. It would be much better if it was changed to science fiction or other worlds, and it would not be like this.