Siheyuan: Get a Good Start, and the Whole Hospital Breaks Defense
by One Hundred Million Red Clouds
About This Novel
What bad thoughts could an orphan have? He just wants to change his life and have a lot of love. But I didn't expect that Zhu Ping'an was traveling through a courtyard. Ah, this... Everyone is numb! How can we talk about love when we can't even eat enough? Fortunately, the lottery system has been awakened. As long as you get the lottery, you can get rewards. If you ask for luck with malicious intentions, you will get even more rewards. Slowly, Zhu Pingan found that these days were becoming more and more interesting. (No anger, oriented towards daily life, want to eat bran pharyngeal vegetables and go around)
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Official(4)Scraped 8d ago
Find yourself an old man
How could there be such a father? The strict father in Chun Chun movies and TV dramas is always ready to beat people, but the real strict father is not like this.
your your
You, your, your, you, what are you, it gets annoying when I see it. Elders call juniors the same way, grandma calls grandchildren the same way. It looks very awkward. It doesn't matter if you call someone respectable. Are you annoying if you call everyone the same thing?
If the protagonist's father's role was removed, this book would be good. Why not remove the protagonist's stepmother? That's because she is not nosy and can listen to what the protagonist says.
Writing chronology must be in line with that era
Workers were not qualified to fish at that time, you can check it yourself. Hunting is even more ridiculous. Beijing has issued a special document not allowing city dwellers to go hunting in the countryside. If you want to write fantasy novels rather than fantasy novels, I suggest you read Mo Yan and Yu Hua if you want to write chronological novels.
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Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 8d ago
Find yourself an old man
How could there be such a father? The strict father in Chun Chun movies and TV dramas is always ready to beat people, but the real strict father is not like this.
your your
You, your, your, you, what are you, it gets annoying when I see it. Elders call juniors the same way, grandma calls grandchildren the same way. It looks very awkward. It doesn't matter if you call someone respectable. Are you annoying if you call everyone the same thing?
If the protagonist's father's role was removed, this book would be good. Why not remove the protagonist's stepmother? That's because she is not nosy and can listen to what the protagonist says.
Writing chronology must be in line with that era
Workers were not qualified to fish at that time, you can check it yourself. Hunting is even more ridiculous. Beijing has issued a special document not allowing city dwellers to go hunting in the countryside. If you want to write fantasy novels rather than fantasy novels, I suggest you read Mo Yan and Yu Hua if you want to write chronological novels.
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