
Journey to the Immortal Martial Plane
About This Novel
From martial arts to immortals, from internal strength to magical power, to heaven and earth, everything is possible.
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Official(16)Scraped 22d ago
Your efforts make me want to die. If I hadn't seen you talking about writing a book for the first time,
The character creation is too poor and there is no sense of substitution.
The dialogue between the characters is bland, as if they are talking to themselves. It feels like everyone speaks in the same tone, including those who are just tools and have no feelings.
The plot is very dry
How to say it? The writing is a bit dry. As someone said before, the sense of substitution is too poor. The protagonist is also mentally immature.
I believe
My family worships Bixia Yuanjun, commonly known as Grandma Taishan
Why not write a Hongda passionate world and include elements such as martial arts and immortals. Why should you imitate old-fashioned plots and create new novels when writing novels?
long-term lack of intelligence
You can't read with your brain in mind, otherwise you won't have a book to read!
Ladder to the clouds! A vertical ladder?
Wudang Qinggong is called Tiyunzong! It's not called a vertical ladder! It has the same effect as the horizontal movement in the Nine Yin Manual, but the movement direction is opposite! The ladder cloud is in the form of a vertical parabola, and the toes point on the back of the feet to move forward or backward in the air! Moving across the air means moving left and right, used to dodge ground attacks! The two are respectively a vertical and horizontal body lifting technique! Why do most of the current authors write about Zongyun Ladder?
Jump too big
Ip Man jumped to another world before he finished writing.
The sense of immersion is so bad, there are many places where the writing is confusing! ! !
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Community(0)
Official(16)Scraped 22d ago
Your efforts make me want to die. If I hadn't seen you talking about writing a book for the first time,
The character creation is too poor and there is no sense of substitution.
The dialogue between the characters is bland, as if they are talking to themselves. It feels like everyone speaks in the same tone, including those who are just tools and have no feelings.
The plot is very dry
How to say it? The writing is a bit dry. As someone said before, the sense of substitution is too poor. The protagonist is also mentally immature.
I believe
My family worships Bixia Yuanjun, commonly known as Grandma Taishan
Why not write a Hongda passionate world and include elements such as martial arts and immortals. Why should you imitate old-fashioned plots and create new novels when writing novels?
long-term lack of intelligence
You can't read with your brain in mind, otherwise you won't have a book to read!
Ladder to the clouds! A vertical ladder?
Wudang Qinggong is called Tiyunzong! It's not called a vertical ladder! It has the same effect as the horizontal movement in the Nine Yin Manual, but the movement direction is opposite! The ladder cloud is in the form of a vertical parabola, and the toes point on the back of the feet to move forward or backward in the air! Moving across the air means moving left and right, used to dodge ground attacks! The two are respectively a vertical and horizontal body lifting technique! Why do most of the current authors write about Zongyun Ladder?
Jump too big
Ip Man jumped to another world before he finished writing.
The sense of immersion is so bad, there are many places where the writing is confusing! ! !










