All Heavens: Starting from the Dragon Island of the Immortal Realm

Is there multiple heroines? Is there multiple heroines?

Three Golden Chapters, written as Three Idiot Chapters

It's good to write about the world of immortality, but the protagonist talks too much and talks about everything, which is not good. If there were only a few people, it would be okay to talk about the protagonists and supporting characters of the original work, but you are going too far by saying they all

The main character is so bad, no one can fight a dragon-human hybrid dragon in the same realm and still get injured.

You can travel through time, so what does the catastrophe have to do with you?

I can't bear it in the first chapter, a good man and a holy mother

The Tomb of the Gods was obviously not well written. I used a cannon to swat the mosquitoes. I followed the main character group and continued to follow the plot. The pretense was also very stiff, and I just became a babysitter.

Actually, to be honest, the book Immortality World is pretty good. Regardless of the content or layout, this book is actually very good. The only thing I don't like very much is the character of the protagonist Xiao Chen. He has been practicing for so many years, and he doesn't even know his own feelings, and he can't confirm them. Until the finale, his feelings were still a blank slate. He didn't understand but escaped from them. I said an unceremonious sentence and killed decisively. However, I don't dare to face my feelings, I only know how to escape. According to a saying, there are so many girls, but none of them make his heart flutter. I believe this is definitely the case. Not only is he not a ruthless person, he will have other thoughts more or less, but for Xiao Chen. Even in the finale, it was just that he had some other relationships with other women, but it was not clearly stated that he had a wife and children. Of course, this is my own simple opinion. I also have a suggestion that I hope the author will give to Xiao Chen in your book. A perfect love. One or both are fine. Immortality world. The content is just okay. It's a pity. In the end, Xiao Chen was alone and just talking. I had an affair with other people. In fact, when I was writing the book The World of Immortality. The original author shouldn't have written about emotions. Since he didn't intend to write about emotions, he shouldn't have buried such a foreshadowing, and ended it hastily the year after. Zhao Ling'er's evaluation of the most beautiful woman in Kyushu is even more appalling. What about being captured by people from another world? I believe that anyone who has read the book Immortal Realm should know the ending. I remember when I read this book, I felt very confused for several nights, how could it be written like this. At that time, I was wondering what the original author was thinking and why he wrote people with such tragic endings. Regardless of the other books written by the original author, although the world view written is very grand, and the characters are of course well portrayed, only the book "The World of Immortality" makes people feel a bit uncomfortable. From the first picture of Xiao Chen and Zhao Linger. Enter the world of immortality with Lan Nuo. One ended up dying alone and tragically. The other ended up being arrested and occupied by countless people. In the end, he was rescued by Xiao Chen, and his appearance was completely ruined. He is even more decisive and ruthless in killing. It can be said that these two people are completely tragic. None of them end well. The author hopes that this book can give them both a happy ending, and not write it so tragically.

Doesn't the protagonist have any desire to seek truth? He has to go home, and the earth has no spiritual energy. Why go back and sell furniture to make money? Isn't it good to be the master of the earth when he is invincible?

Good old man, the most despised thing is this kind of rotten good man, disgusting