Defend the Heavens

Your subject matter is very good, but you need to write the realm clearly as soon as possible. In addition, the role of Goldfinger must be increased! Don't write a power that is far greater than the main character as early as possible! Develop slowly! Try to have a side job such as alchemy! Slowly change the protagonist into a fairy-like image! Official positions and so on must also be sorted out in order! The most important thing is that with such a novel subject matter, I hope it won't be a bad one! Come on!

Don't delay, update quickly. Maintain quality without supervision. After a thousand chapters, he is expected to become a god.

Broken? ? ? ? ? ?

Hurry up and improve your cultivation. You will be unhappy when you are always wandering around in the sky. . .

The writing is pretty good, come on

Hahahaha, I have grown more than a hundred and have a good collection! Come on!

Come on, all my tickets from now on are yours! By the way, I'll give you a suggestion: it's best to update in the morning! I won't tell you why it's too troublesome!

Come on! Be persistent! This kind of subject matter is very novel and you can practice your writing skills slowly!

Not bad! ! !

The author has a good idea in writing a book, the writing is very good, and there is a lot of room for improvement. I hope the author will persevere and I support you!