
Become a Pilot from the City
About This Novel
Yang Yu was inexplicably reborn and received an "all-round pilot learning system". From then on, his life started to get messed up! Make money, ride motorcycles, drive supercars, hold robot boxing competitions, build mechas, and build spaceships. Use his mecha to punch bad guys and kick aliens to create his own legend.
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Official(14)Scraped 1mo ago
I've read about 20 chapters and I think it's average.
The material is good, but it's a pity that it doesn't have a sense of immersion and makes people have no desire to watch it.
Too watery
Writing so many pages on a motorcycle is too procrastinating.
Do you write a running account?
This is a straightforward running account.
I hope there can be less nonsense and less water.
Should you take your family with you to conquer the stars and the sea?
I think it's best for the protagonist to take his family with him when he wants to go to the sea of stars. 1. The protagonist didn't ask his family for their opinion, so he decided to go alone without his family, and still claimed it was for their own good. This was a selfish act of the protagonist. Even if he might have some scruples about bringing his family along with him on the way, he should still take them with him, and the family should be in order. 2. The protagonist has injected genetic medicine into his family. The strengthening medicine and brain medicine are all fine. The key is the life-span medicine. This protagonist has not announced it. Others have a life span of less than a hundred years. Just his family's life span of a few hundred years. What will be the result? You taste it, you taste it carefully. When the time comes, there will be a slice study or something. . . . . Some people are crazy about longevity (don't say he will come back, what if an accident happens and delays him, and he will be sliced by the time he comes back? Even if he can take revenge, what's the use, what is lost has been lost). Therefore, I have to suggest taking it with you. I don't recommend announcing this potion, because after it is announced, some big guys can live for a long time, and no one knows whether they will be corrupted by rights. Hope the author adopts
actually. . .
In fact, it is because of the common problem of the author as a new author, "narrative problem". . . Basically every novice will do this. . . Fumbling around in the first book. . . Usually after one million words, it's almost done.
After listening to Chapter 6, I feel: Is this writing a daily essay or is it a deliberate attempt to make up the word count?
If you can't grasp the key points, just write about topics that don't hurt or bother you, hehe, go away.
Awesome
The writing is okay, but the entry into the drama is too slow, dragging, and wasting time.
Why is there no one? The timeline goes too fast
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Community(0)
Official(14)Scraped 1mo ago
I've read about 20 chapters and I think it's average.
The material is good, but it's a pity that it doesn't have a sense of immersion and makes people have no desire to watch it.
Too watery
Writing so many pages on a motorcycle is too procrastinating.
Do you write a running account?
This is a straightforward running account.
I hope there can be less nonsense and less water.
Should you take your family with you to conquer the stars and the sea?
I think it's best for the protagonist to take his family with him when he wants to go to the sea of stars. 1. The protagonist didn't ask his family for their opinion, so he decided to go alone without his family, and still claimed it was for their own good. This was a selfish act of the protagonist. Even if he might have some scruples about bringing his family along with him on the way, he should still take them with him, and the family should be in order. 2. The protagonist has injected genetic medicine into his family. The strengthening medicine and brain medicine are all fine. The key is the life-span medicine. This protagonist has not announced it. Others have a life span of less than a hundred years. Just his family's life span of a few hundred years. What will be the result? You taste it, you taste it carefully. When the time comes, there will be a slice study or something. . . . . Some people are crazy about longevity (don't say he will come back, what if an accident happens and delays him, and he will be sliced by the time he comes back? Even if he can take revenge, what's the use, what is lost has been lost). Therefore, I have to suggest taking it with you. I don't recommend announcing this potion, because after it is announced, some big guys can live for a long time, and no one knows whether they will be corrupted by rights. Hope the author adopts
actually. . .
In fact, it is because of the common problem of the author as a new author, "narrative problem". . . Basically every novice will do this. . . Fumbling around in the first book. . . Usually after one million words, it's almost done.
After listening to Chapter 6, I feel: Is this writing a daily essay or is it a deliberate attempt to make up the word count?
If you can't grasp the key points, just write about topics that don't hurt or bother you, hehe, go away.
Awesome
The writing is okay, but the entry into the drama is too slow, dragging, and wasting time.
Why is there no one? The timeline goes too fast










