Merchant from Another World
by Wulin Bitch
About This Novel
A story about opening a grocery store in a different dimension, including the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, the Nine-Yang Divine Art, the Resurrection Cross... Martial arts, skills, props, whatever you can think of, I have them for sale here. Thanks to the free cover of the Chinese author material library for supporting vzzsck. Com
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Official(6)Scraped 24d ago
I read one chapter but couldn't finish it! Give some suggestions
When a person faces the unknown, will he babble endless nonsense like this? In the first chapter, you start to make up the word count. You have no idea what you want to express. You want to describe the plane merchant company, but it is covered up by some nonsense words. If you haven't read it later, for fear of lowering your IQ, I suggest the author to practice more on his narrative skills before starting the book. The beginning of a novel is the most important thing. Just start adding words at the beginning, which is a lot of nonsense. Most book friends read novels to kill boring time, but as a result, they will only become more bored after reading it!
Alas, it's really not that good. Hope......
author...
Did you offend the editor?[Emot=default,04/] I have not read this novel, so I will not comment on its content.
The name of the sect
fishing
The pretense flow is not enough, it cannot be controlled, the structure is unbalanced, the writing is weak, and the concept of the plane merchant did not fill the gap in the end.
Rubbish
Haha, Yuling? Why don't you name me Ritian?
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Community(0)
Official(6)Scraped 24d ago
I read one chapter but couldn't finish it! Give some suggestions
When a person faces the unknown, will he babble endless nonsense like this? In the first chapter, you start to make up the word count. You have no idea what you want to express. You want to describe the plane merchant company, but it is covered up by some nonsense words. If you haven't read it later, for fear of lowering your IQ, I suggest the author to practice more on his narrative skills before starting the book. The beginning of a novel is the most important thing. Just start adding words at the beginning, which is a lot of nonsense. Most book friends read novels to kill boring time, but as a result, they will only become more bored after reading it!
Alas, it's really not that good. Hope......
author...
Did you offend the editor?[Emot=default,04/] I have not read this novel, so I will not comment on its content.
The name of the sect
fishing
The pretense flow is not enough, it cannot be controlled, the structure is unbalanced, the writing is weak, and the concept of the plane merchant did not fill the gap in the end.
Rubbish
Haha, Yuling? Why don't you name me Ritian?
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