The Search for Immortality Begins with Tomb Robbing

This book has received mixed reviews, but I think it is fundamentally a very well-written book. First of all, I think the handling of the character Song Jiang is very good, completely breaking the previous style of Song Jiang obeying the advice of Monk Tang. Tang Seng is not like before who always chatted with Lin Daiyu and did not do his job properly. Including the scene where Xia Houtan fights Xu Sanduo was also shot very well, completely subverting Xu Sanduo's sinister XL image in our minds. Moreover, Xia Houdan did not have a crush on Hua Qiangu from the beginning as stated in the original work, but the sparks sparked with her only after experiencing Mei Changsu's transference. In this way, the logic of the plot becomes very reasonable, giving the audience a refreshing feeling, and the plot of the story is also intricate and fascinating. For example, why did Duan Yu save the Haier brothers regardless of the danger to his own mother? Did Teletubbies have a revenge plan against He-Man? Was it Edison Chen who caused the belly of Mr. Cang, the wife of Roaring Sky Dog? These questions tightly locked the audience's attention. The finale of the fight scene between Zhu Bajie and Donald Duck was well arranged, and the open ending made the audience yearn for the love song duet between Taishang Laojun and Marilyn Monroe. It is worth mentioning that the atmosphere of vicissitudes of life when Big Big Wolf misses Zhou Zhiruo in Akina Mountain, and Ren Wo Xing's delicate inner world when he steals Huba, the sacred object of the Uchiha clan, is shown at once. The stand-up comedy segment of Comrade Sha Ruijin and Chu Liuxiang who guest-starred in the film, as well as the ingenious idea of ​​Mr. Bean visiting the thatched cottage three times and asking Charlotte to go together to rescue Cao Cao are also highlights.

From the chapters I have seen, the author has a lot of ambition and is laying the groundwork for a lot of things, but from my perspective, there are too many missing words in the sentences with extremely poor typos, which makes me feel too uncomfortable. To sum up at this stage: there is no brainer, there are no words in the sentences, the power system is unclear, there are too many foreshadowings and the differences are too large, which makes me feel that these are two different worlds that are forcibly intertwined. Finally, I hope that subsequent chapters can improve.

The system is not clear, and there are a few extra abilities inexplicably. The more the content is written, the more confused I feel. Have you eaten some content without explaining it after reading it? The description of the characters is even more baffling. Overall, the author is living in his own world😴

It's so mysterious that it scares you away from it at first glance. Didn't the author even read it once after he finished writing it?

A modern memory travels to the past and combines with an ancient memory + body. If a pig goes through the past, it must have an IQ of 100, right? Is the force given away for free?

The protagonist doesn't even know about Tomb Raiders Notes. He's just a trap. It's better not to write this.

As a modern person, doesn't the protagonist know about tomb robbing notes?

I just don't know what happened in the prehistoric times, or thousands of years ago. To be honest, I don't understand each of these characters very well. I thought the author was writing about a person who finally found a treasure of immortality, and then fell asleep every few years.

It's a bit messy, let's take another look and hope it can be improved.

Not bad. Thank you all for giving me a round of applause.