The Wind Blows and the Feathers Blow
About This Novel
The general trend of the world is that if it has been divided for a long time, it must be united, and if it has been united for a long time, it must be divided. After the real power of the Echigo guardian family was gradually controlled by the guardian Dai family, it was in name only. After a young man woke up, he inexplicably became a member of the Kamijo family, a member of the Echigo guardian family. But the good times did not last long. After the defenders suffered a disastrous defeat at the One-Third Plains, the defenders' troops surged towards the castle like a tide... This young man from the future was burdened with a weak family that lacked resources, talents and troops. Let's see if he could turn the tide and help the building to collapse. Book club group 607280374
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Official(3)Scraped 2d ago
Either don't write that you have fallen in love with that woman. After writing that you have fallen in love with a certain woman, don't give it to others and force feed it with poison.
The writing feels like an introduction to the setting
The ideas are very rich, but when implemented in words, it just "comes out of your mouth". It feels very exaggerated and gives people the feeling of introducing the game settings.
The long sentences used by this author are really frustrating... For example, "The main reason why Qingsei has kept Ayahime in the city since seizing Sakato Castle is that the Kamijou family has not yet reached the point of controlling the entire Uonuma County." Changed to "The reason why Qingsei has kept Ayahime in the city is because the Kamijou family has not yet controlled the entire Uonuma County." There are also various long and devastating sentences by the author, especially the following paragraph, which makes me feel uncomfortable no matter how I listen to it. "When the Oita clan saw that no one responded to him, he prepared to find another way. He sent envoys to secretly contact the Japanese lords of Nishi-Aizu County such as the Yamauchi family, the Kawarada family, the Minamiyama Naganuma family, etc., Who were friends with the Nagao family in Fuchu, and gave gold and silver to each family's important ministers and ministers. House Governor, I hope that the Japanese lords of Nishi Aizu County such as the Yamauchi Family, the Kawaharada Family, the Minamiyama Naganuma Family, can send troops to contain the Uonuma County generals such as Nagayoshi Hataki, the lord of Itaki Castle, Naozuna Kaneko, the lord of Sukawa Castle, and Masamari Fukushima, the lord of Rokumanki Castle who are on the side of the Kamijou family. " I change it like this: Seeing that no one responded to him, the Oita family prepared to find other ways out. Envoys were sent to secretly contact the Yamauchi family, the Kawarada family, and the Nanshan Naganuma family. These Japanese lords from Nishi-Aizu County have good relations with the Fuchu Nagao family. He (Oi) gave gold and silver to the important ministers and family governors of each family, hoping that they could send troops to contain the Uonuma County generals who were on the side of the Kamijou family, such as the lord of Itaki Castle, Nagayoshi Hatsuhiro, the lord of Sukawa Castle, Kaneko Naotsuna, and the lord of Liuwanqi Castle, Fukushima Masaori, etc. " I don't know why the author has obsessive-compulsive disorder about conjunctions. He insists on using so many conjunctions in a long sentence. Why not cut off the long sentences as much as possible to simplify the logical relationship. Listening to the book makes my head spin... As a sharp remark, I am not so bad at writing a paper that I have to cram so much information into one sentence.
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Official(3)Scraped 2d ago
Either don't write that you have fallen in love with that woman. After writing that you have fallen in love with a certain woman, don't give it to others and force feed it with poison.
The writing feels like an introduction to the setting
The ideas are very rich, but when implemented in words, it just "comes out of your mouth". It feels very exaggerated and gives people the feeling of introducing the game settings.
The long sentences used by this author are really frustrating... For example, "The main reason why Qingsei has kept Ayahime in the city since seizing Sakato Castle is that the Kamijou family has not yet reached the point of controlling the entire Uonuma County." Changed to "The reason why Qingsei has kept Ayahime in the city is because the Kamijou family has not yet controlled the entire Uonuma County." There are also various long and devastating sentences by the author, especially the following paragraph, which makes me feel uncomfortable no matter how I listen to it. "When the Oita clan saw that no one responded to him, he prepared to find another way. He sent envoys to secretly contact the Japanese lords of Nishi-Aizu County such as the Yamauchi family, the Kawarada family, the Minamiyama Naganuma family, etc., Who were friends with the Nagao family in Fuchu, and gave gold and silver to each family's important ministers and ministers. House Governor, I hope that the Japanese lords of Nishi Aizu County such as the Yamauchi Family, the Kawaharada Family, the Minamiyama Naganuma Family, can send troops to contain the Uonuma County generals such as Nagayoshi Hataki, the lord of Itaki Castle, Naozuna Kaneko, the lord of Sukawa Castle, and Masamari Fukushima, the lord of Rokumanki Castle who are on the side of the Kamijou family. " I change it like this: Seeing that no one responded to him, the Oita family prepared to find other ways out. Envoys were sent to secretly contact the Yamauchi family, the Kawarada family, and the Nanshan Naganuma family. These Japanese lords from Nishi-Aizu County have good relations with the Fuchu Nagao family. He (Oi) gave gold and silver to the important ministers and family governors of each family, hoping that they could send troops to contain the Uonuma County generals who were on the side of the Kamijou family, such as the lord of Itaki Castle, Nagayoshi Hatsuhiro, the lord of Sukawa Castle, Kaneko Naotsuna, and the lord of Liuwanqi Castle, Fukushima Masaori, etc. " I don't know why the author has obsessive-compulsive disorder about conjunctions. He insists on using so many conjunctions in a long sentence. Why not cut off the long sentences as much as possible to simplify the logical relationship. Listening to the book makes my head spin... As a sharp remark, I am not so bad at writing a paper that I have to cram so much information into one sentence.
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