Intruders from All over the World

Readers, if you have any world you want the protagonist to go to, you can put it forward here and Qiang Zai will consider it carefully, preferably one with high popularity.

Overall it's okay, but some details could be better. I feel that the protagonist is too easy-going and doesn't have the demeanor that a master should have. The more honest people are, the easier they are to be bullied. Now in the time-traveling system novels, some authors' writings are really unsightly. The protagonist's strength and physique are dozens of times that of normal people, and he is just like a child. It is simply insulting to the readers. I feel that this book is great, at least unlike some books where the author has never even gone to school. I must write it well. I look forward to the future plots. Come on!

Write something about ghosts blowing lamps, then some zombie movies later, and then some fairy tales

Author, your writing is very detailed. I decided to become your 286th fan. Come on💪

Water water water sleep try water water water

I want to fall in love, I want to fall in love, you will be comfortable and fun if you fall in love with me

I didn't really want to watch it at first, but after looking at the catalog, I found Toxic Milk Powder , a game that ruined my childhood.

I have read a few novels recently and they were all good. As long as they get to the main character's relationship, I can abandon the book.

I read more than ten chapters of this book. [Personal feeling] There is a problem. Point 1: The plot in the first few chapters is too abrupt. It feels like a piece is missing here, pulled from the other side, and stuffed in. For example, where the protagonist appears in Chapter 1. Point 2: Character setting. Where is the protagonist from? Where did the system come from? How did you get it? Where did his first two abilities come from? After completing the mission, should I return or continue traveling? What are the initial settings of the system? Not a single mention was made in the first dozen chapters. Of course, some people may be thinking that if there is a system and they know the plot, they must have traveled through time. But just like when you go to work, it's one thing if you know how to do it, and another thing if you do it or not. Point 3. The plot of this book, which spans more than ten chapters, feels very silky and smooth, but it feels dry. Although this may be the reason why the book is enjoyable, [but my personal feeling] is that it still needs to add a little description of the characters' movements, expressions, psychological activities, etc., Just a little bit more will be enough. I think it might be better to block it this way. Otherwise, when reading, I will feel that the characters in the book are just dead objects, without any spirituality at all.

It is a good and refreshing article. The protagonist written by the author is a manifestation of modern human beings. Overall, the current chapters are a good casual and refreshing article. I hope the author will work hard to write this book. To make a complaint, when the protagonist enters Douluo Continent 1, Tianmeng Ice Silkworm is only about 990,000 years old. At the beginning of Douluo Continent 2, Tianmeng Ice Silkworm is a million-year-old soul beast. However, as a refreshing article, this small detail can be taken seriously by readers or not.