
Simultaneous Travel: Starting from Panlong
About This Novel
Qi Fei traveled through time. But something happened during the time travel, and Qi Fei became Qi Fei. Coiling Dragons Qifei: Actually, I think it's okay. The mythical version of Three Kingdoms: After all, the clones are considered powerful in many golden finger genres. The Dzi beads are flying together: one thing is said and the other is true. ... Current world: Coiling Dragon, Dzi Bead Transformation, Mythical Three Kingdoms, Fighting to Break the Sky, Devouring the Starry Sky, Witch for All 1994, Covering the Sky, Sun God.
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Official(52)Scraped 4d ago
If you insist on writing about a world with a small audience, you will still have fun in the minefield of most readers. In Lao Phoenix's 99, the sexual transformation would step into the minefield of popular readers and only cater to the preferences of niche readers. It was brushed off in one sentence and only a small amount of description was used for comedy. Various worlds with a small audience or that everyone does not understand will only have a basic introduction. And progress in these worlds is rapid. The author just did the opposite, awesome👍. If the author planned to write about this niche from the beginning and only serve a small number of readers, there is nothing wrong with it. Although niche products have a small audience, they can still gain a group of loyal fans. The evaluation will not be low either But the title of your book is "Starting from the Coiling Dragon". Readers are not here for these niche groups, and you are not targeting a niche group. Nowadays, readers come in to read the book, and after reading about half of it, they find that the first part is very good, but in the second part, the author is going crazy in his own minefield. You go to a restaurant to eat, and halfway through the meal, the boss changes the meal into something that only pica would like to eat. Naturally you will be unhappy. When you first revealed that it was a restaurant for pica, no one would say anything. But at first you were the signboard of a normal restaurant, and most of the people who came in were people who wanted to eat normal meals. It was strange that they would think well of you.
I feel like I could have deleted Dou Po and the Witch. The main character in Dou Po is too mean, and she only works as Xiao Yan's dog licker and nanny. The author also found an excuse for a dou huang in Dou Qi Continent to practice the law of destiny. I can't understand that the protagonist's strength in Dou Qi Continent is third-rate, and all his talents are shared by lying down. Yi Geng neither practices nor studies alchemy seriously, and spends all day working as a nanny behind Xiao Yan, who is not even a fighter. He is stronger than Xiao Yan, has better talent than Xiao Yan, gets stronger faster than Xiao Yan, and has a higher upper limit than Xiao Yan. I don't understand why he has to bring Xiao Yan with him and multiple oil bottles; as for the witch The sexual transformation was just for disgusting people. Not only was it unpopular, but it also included a lot of emotional drama. Judging from the title, most of the people reading this novel are male readers. Who wants to read the relationship history of a man who transforms his body and mind into a female queen? Shensan's sharing of talents is too outrageous, and the character setting is too silly. I don't understand the meaning of surrendering to Liu Bei wholeheartedly. With my full ability and the support of knowledge from all worlds, wouldn't it be good to directly recruit Chen Xi to join the gang and persuade Cao Liusun to get rid of the emperor and build a democratic society in one step? To make major changes and take major measures, the province must also consider the feelings of Liu Bei and his subordinates.
It's rare to see someone playing with Shensan III. The setting of Shensan III is still a bit difficult to write. I hope the author won't write it down.
What have I been writing in the last few dozen chapters?
The protagonist of Shen San is too licky. Shouldn't he have three choices: treat him to a guest, behead him, or accept him as a dog? Why did he turn against Tiangang?
It's well written. Please write more about Witch of All People and Shen San.
It's a rare novel with the transformation of Dzi beads.
Skip all others, Dou Po Poison Kills People, Heavenly Realm Soul Douhuang's cultivation is said to be enough to fight the Dou Zong, and he also apprenticed to Yao Lao to be Xiao Yan's nanny
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Official(52)Scraped 4d ago
If you insist on writing about a world with a small audience, you will still have fun in the minefield of most readers. In Lao Phoenix's 99, the sexual transformation would step into the minefield of popular readers and only cater to the preferences of niche readers. It was brushed off in one sentence and only a small amount of description was used for comedy. Various worlds with a small audience or that everyone does not understand will only have a basic introduction. And progress in these worlds is rapid. The author just did the opposite, awesome👍. If the author planned to write about this niche from the beginning and only serve a small number of readers, there is nothing wrong with it. Although niche products have a small audience, they can still gain a group of loyal fans. The evaluation will not be low either But the title of your book is "Starting from the Coiling Dragon". Readers are not here for these niche groups, and you are not targeting a niche group. Nowadays, readers come in to read the book, and after reading about half of it, they find that the first part is very good, but in the second part, the author is going crazy in his own minefield. You go to a restaurant to eat, and halfway through the meal, the boss changes the meal into something that only pica would like to eat. Naturally you will be unhappy. When you first revealed that it was a restaurant for pica, no one would say anything. But at first you were the signboard of a normal restaurant, and most of the people who came in were people who wanted to eat normal meals. It was strange that they would think well of you.
I feel like I could have deleted Dou Po and the Witch. The main character in Dou Po is too mean, and she only works as Xiao Yan's dog licker and nanny. The author also found an excuse for a dou huang in Dou Qi Continent to practice the law of destiny. I can't understand that the protagonist's strength in Dou Qi Continent is third-rate, and all his talents are shared by lying down. Yi Geng neither practices nor studies alchemy seriously, and spends all day working as a nanny behind Xiao Yan, who is not even a fighter. He is stronger than Xiao Yan, has better talent than Xiao Yan, gets stronger faster than Xiao Yan, and has a higher upper limit than Xiao Yan. I don't understand why he has to bring Xiao Yan with him and multiple oil bottles; as for the witch The sexual transformation was just for disgusting people. Not only was it unpopular, but it also included a lot of emotional drama. Judging from the title, most of the people reading this novel are male readers. Who wants to read the relationship history of a man who transforms his body and mind into a female queen? Shensan's sharing of talents is too outrageous, and the character setting is too silly. I don't understand the meaning of surrendering to Liu Bei wholeheartedly. With my full ability and the support of knowledge from all worlds, wouldn't it be good to directly recruit Chen Xi to join the gang and persuade Cao Liusun to get rid of the emperor and build a democratic society in one step? To make major changes and take major measures, the province must also consider the feelings of Liu Bei and his subordinates.
It's rare to see someone playing with Shensan III. The setting of Shensan III is still a bit difficult to write. I hope the author won't write it down.
What have I been writing in the last few dozen chapters?
The protagonist of Shen San is too licky. Shouldn't he have three choices: treat him to a guest, behead him, or accept him as a dog? Why did he turn against Tiangang?
It's well written. Please write more about Witch of All People and Shen San.
It's a rare novel with the transformation of Dzi beads.
Skip all others, Dou Po Poison Kills People, Heavenly Realm Soul Douhuang's cultivation is said to be enough to fight the Dou Zong, and he also apprenticed to Yao Lao to be Xiao Yan's nanny











