The Crossed Boundary

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I read it for ten minutes (maybe because of my poor understanding) and didn't understand what was written. I saw the panic, confusion, and annoyance of the time traveler when he arrived in another world. Did the author feel unhappy when he saw that the protagonist in the time-travel story quickly calmed down when he arrived in another world~ so he wrote the little SH specially? ? ?

Okay, I won't go into details. The settings are very detailed and the protagonist's character is quite reasonable. This made my eyes light up! But that's exactly what happened. My first impression after reading through it is that there are too many settings and explanations and too little story. It has become reality in less than 100 chapters. The whirlwind multi-world fusion world, zombies, reincarnations, etc. (Probably the main god space), Japan's Warring States and other aspects have been covered. Isn't this a bit fast? It feels like the storyline hasn't even developed yet! Also, the story seems a bit out of control. Is it my misunderstanding? The protagonist seems to be like some people in reality who cannot control their own future. It's like shouting "I want to make money, I want to work", but I don't know what to do next. What kind of job should I find? How to find it? How to interview after being found? What to do after a failed interview? After entering the company, I don't even think about how to deal with my colleagues and bosses, etc., But I can only take it one step at a time! What I want to say is probably that the protagonist lacks enthusiasm, or to be precise, lacks aggression! Probably, although I have a general direction in reality, I am unable to control my future, and I cannot be fully prepared for various developments, so I want to find an ideal protagonist in a novel who can deal with things rationally and consider various developments (I personally think that considering failed developments is the most important), and I will subconsciously feel disgusted by some protagonists who are similar to myself step by step. What makes me less fond of the protagonist is probably the understanding of Haki's actions. Since the protagonist thinks that being a master is helpful for understanding Haki, why does he just stay with the Daimyo and not take any action? Since you want to use your daimyo to achieve your goals, then you should analyze and use it carefully. Why do you just practice swords there and do nothing else? It is not too much to at least collect information. If you have nothing to do, it is not too much to think about how to use your own advantages to win people's hearts. It is not too much to think about what to do if something fails! It's hard to think too hard about how to obtain the maximum benefit in subsequent historical events! These are things that normal people would think about when they have nothing to do. Why doesn't the protagonist express any of these thoughts? I can't understand that the protagonist starts to be harsh after obeying the history, and suddenly a main god mission comes, which feels so stiff! These are all personal understandings, I still hope the author can take a look!

The character of the protagonist is not very good, the plot setting is not very good, and the beginning is inexplicably strange, but is it so difficult to accept a time travel? As for the writing, is it so verbose?? It's really not that good.

What the hell are you writing? You don't need to write the plot of the anime. I've seen all the anime, and I have all kinds of silly emotions about this and that, and it's of no use.

The protagonist kneels down when he sees a girl, can he have some backbone?

I was not interested in reading it. There is something wrong with the author's thinking. There are also loopholes in the main god system, missions, and protagonist skills... It is better to just write the system flow, kill monsters and upgrade, and you don't know when you will travel. You will travel as soon as you open and close your eyes Sometimes you will travel without explaining it...

I don't usually read book reviews or discuss them. I was bored and read book reviews today There are so many people complaining about it that I just want to post a book review. There are too many scumbag books. In today's society, if you don't like it, you just don't read it. There are a few people who are so embarrassed to post book reviews and comments. A group of people were invited to troll people.

You also say that others can't understand because you don't have enough IQ. Are you the evil god who has entered the body and has abnormal human logic? It was said earlier that Xiaoxuan was scared away by the tiger of Sanqianyuan's house and the male protagonist chased him. After chasing him, he met a leprosy toad, and then after 12 omissions, he found Xiaoxuan's brother. What the hell is this? ? !

I'd say okay, it's not good, I'd say not good. It's written quite fluently and I can still read it. But it would be nice if it was a cool article with many articles. There is also a kind of pig-footed writing about what a woman wants to do and just follow it. It feels a bit like a harem novel.