
People Are Being Devoured, This Time Travel is a Bit Early
About This Novel
Yang Yi traveled to the Swallowing Starry Universe in 2012, and his body returned to its peak at the age of 18. You still have to wait for more than forty years to get the chance, and the premise is that you need to survive the catastrophe on your own. Since your thighs can't hold you for the time being, then be your own thigh! The heavens travel through the universe, and the main world is the star-devouring universe.
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Official(22)Scraped 22d ago
The first world of Devouring the Heavens is not Dragon Snake's resolute refusal to watch. The world of Devouring Starry Sky is mainly about the comprehension of laws, and internal power cannot be converted into energy, so it is useless. The early stage of Devouring Earth is originally about the perception of state of mind and physical exertion. Dragon Snake perfectly solves the internal power. That thing is useless in Devouring. Even if you go to a science fiction world, the telekinesis power is stronger than the internal power. At least it can be connected with the spiritual master.
Personally, I don't like traveling to other worlds all the time when it comes to fanfics. Even if there are time-traveling stories, there are still so many plots, so in Devouring fanfics, just write about Devouring. It would be nice to introduce the opportunities you get through time-traveling in one or two chapters.
It's a small world. Just take the opportunity to get a dozen or so cards. Don't grind in the dungeon. It's almost a hundred chapters and the Great Nirvana has not yet arrived. I'm afraid your plot line to the main world will still take more than a hundred chapters
I estimate that the author has written more than 200 chapters of the official plot.
The types of the heavens, the first time I saw the extraordinary types of the main world were briefly mentioned, and the sub-worlds were discussed in a long way... You must know that you are not writing about the main god type... According to the way you write it, it will definitely involve the types of "A Chinese Ghost Story" and "White Snake" and then transition to the prehistoric era. It takes a long time here. How will the main world be arranged then? Genius Zhan definitely can't leave, otherwise if he goes to Chaos City, he is seeking death (although he can make up some kind of inheritance, there are similar devouring novels). According to you, it's better to make the outline directly into the main god type...
I wrote more than 50 chapters in the first world, and even more in the second world. There are more than 300 chapters in total, and they are all martial arts worlds. It's really outrageous.
I came in to take a look after seeing the title, and was only disappointed.
several meanings
Hanging a sheep's head and selling Kun meat? It is estimated that it will take at least 'two and a half years' to write Devour.
I've finished watching it. Overall, the ending is a little rushed.
Clickbait, don't waste my eyes
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Official(22)Scraped 22d ago
The first world of Devouring the Heavens is not Dragon Snake's resolute refusal to watch. The world of Devouring Starry Sky is mainly about the comprehension of laws, and internal power cannot be converted into energy, so it is useless. The early stage of Devouring Earth is originally about the perception of state of mind and physical exertion. Dragon Snake perfectly solves the internal power. That thing is useless in Devouring. Even if you go to a science fiction world, the telekinesis power is stronger than the internal power. At least it can be connected with the spiritual master.
Personally, I don't like traveling to other worlds all the time when it comes to fanfics. Even if there are time-traveling stories, there are still so many plots, so in Devouring fanfics, just write about Devouring. It would be nice to introduce the opportunities you get through time-traveling in one or two chapters.
It's a small world. Just take the opportunity to get a dozen or so cards. Don't grind in the dungeon. It's almost a hundred chapters and the Great Nirvana has not yet arrived. I'm afraid your plot line to the main world will still take more than a hundred chapters
I estimate that the author has written more than 200 chapters of the official plot.
The types of the heavens, the first time I saw the extraordinary types of the main world were briefly mentioned, and the sub-worlds were discussed in a long way... You must know that you are not writing about the main god type... According to the way you write it, it will definitely involve the types of "A Chinese Ghost Story" and "White Snake" and then transition to the prehistoric era. It takes a long time here. How will the main world be arranged then? Genius Zhan definitely can't leave, otherwise if he goes to Chaos City, he is seeking death (although he can make up some kind of inheritance, there are similar devouring novels). According to you, it's better to make the outline directly into the main god type...
I wrote more than 50 chapters in the first world, and even more in the second world. There are more than 300 chapters in total, and they are all martial arts worlds. It's really outrageous.
I came in to take a look after seeing the title, and was only disappointed.
several meanings
Hanging a sheep's head and selling Kun meat? It is estimated that it will take at least 'two and a half years' to write Devour.
I've finished watching it. Overall, the ending is a little rushed.
Clickbait, don't waste my eyes









