Zhutian: Start with Flowing Gold

First, poor writing skills. Originally, it was difficult to write comprehensive X-type novels. There were integration problems, character appearance problems, logic problems, and lack of writing skills. I really do not recommend writing comprehensive The world is fluid. Since it is written comprehensively, you must have the ability to describe it and make cross-appearances! Result, no matter what! . . Second, women. First of all, I am not opposed to harem novels. Men understand them all. But, did the author describe it too easily? ? ? We met once and went to bed twice? ? ? For example, Wang Money, there are various works in the original work, but after knowing that Neptune was just playing for fun and had a fiancée, at least he gave Neptune a slap in the face and told him to get lost. You can design the plot. She struggled two or three times before being conquered by the protagonist. This is more reasonable, once? Hehe. They worship money, but they are not stupid! You can get it done in just one or two meetings, are you kidding me? She is not a woman like Qu Yaojing who is super open about playing abroad. Finally, as a character who can travel through time and space in a systematic way, can he accept all women? No first hand required, at least the original work is relatively conservative, okay? Is it a woman who is interested and not afraid of getting sick? . . Third, the travel mechanism. Time travel, play for a few days, time travel, play for a few days... Really, why not write about astronomy! It's the result of one world, another world, normal astronomy. Do you think this is a joke? Going back to the first question, author, do you have the writing skills to connect the plot? ? ? No! At least I didn't see the smooth plot spin off.

Why do you have to write about variety movies? It's too messy. You can't write a paragraph for a TV series or movie. After writing a paragraph, write a TV series next. This will make it clearer. Variety movies feel like a big pot of stew and can't be watched at all.

I won't accept any other women. . . Some have character issues, and some are just buses. Collecting them all would affect reading too much.

Extremely poisonous, illogical, and chaotic

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Swallowing the Starry Sky, Dou Po, Douluo, Wu Geng Ji, Star Change, Once upon a Time there was a Spirit Sword Mountain, Jiang Ye, Qin Shi Ming Yue, Spirit Cage, Demon God Chronicles, Snow Eagle Lord, One Thought of Eternity, I am the Great God, Spirit Sword Master, Hua Qian Gu, Chang Ge Xing, The Rumored Chen Qianqian, Chu Qiao's Biography, Son-in-law, Lanling King, Jinxiu Weiyang

The 5 million owed by the Jiang family has not been used up? After selling the house, I can get back 50 million, which is almost the same.

You need to talk about basic logic and common sense when writing a book. Who will give you ten times the leverage as a small retail investor? There are so many typos.

After more than 200 chapters, I started to feel unhappy. The protagonist was seriously injured and fell into coma. If I wrote too much, it would be okay and it would be more frustrating, right?

I don't understand Menghualu World. I just joined in the fun and then disappeared? There is also "Qing Yu Nian" and "The Eight Parts of Tian Long". It feels like a different person in the back. There is a hammer here and there and a stick in the west. It is so chaotic that it is hard to watch.