Dragons: Error Restart

In fact, the tone of the dragon characters is very obvious, so I don't mean to comment maliciously. Judging from the relationship with Lu Mingfei, Liu Miaomiao is a classmate, she has a normal relationship, and compared to others, she is actually a very good person. Su Xiaoqiang is a friend. If Fei Chao develops, she may be the only person willing to lend a helping hand to Lu Mingfei and be of great help. Chen Wenwen can only be described as average, green tea, but without any malice, her way of knowingly taking advantage of Lu Mingfei is hard to make people like her. Especially in the plot of Long Er, she is indeed an ordinary person, but her behavioral cognition has not changed, and this is something that cannot be cleared up. At that time, part of the reason was Lu Mingfei's own, which will be discussed below. At the same time, in contrast, Chen Motong, also known as Nuonuo, is really worthy of Lu Mingfei. Some readers feel worthless for Lu Mingfei from the perspective of God. But with normal understanding, a boss who knows Lu Mingfei is a loser but still never abandons him is really worthy of his promise to Lu Mingfei! Some people don't like it mainly because they know that she hangs on Lu Mingfei like Chen Wenwen, but from a normal understanding, the existence is very shallow, and this is the fault of the original author, because according to Nono's character, it is not necessarily normal, but she can express it, and it is also shown in the original work, stating that she has a partner. The trio of Eri Yi and the wet nurse is relatively normal, and most people agree on it. The most disliked thing about Lu Mingfei himself is that kind of escaping and always fantasizing. The original work is indeed very successful, but it will not work if the fans do not change this. Correspondingly, the thing that I dislike the most is also the worst thing about Lu Mingfei when the fans re-create it, which is talking bad words. Avoiding and talking nonsense almost complement each other. If he doesn't change this, there will be almost no change in him! For example, the Marvel Comics novel is not a fan. Although it introduces a lot of things, the evasions and bad words have hardly changed. Although it does correspond to the original work, it is a mess from a fan perspective, so it is better to read the original work. Personally, I don't think it will start a fight. As for the other supporting characters, For example, uncles and aunts, it feels like Lu Mingfei is constantly being pushed into the water, pulled out, and the cycle continues. There are always people mentioning Long San and uncle, but you must know that if you don't mention the dragon clan starting setting, even if it is a normal family stay, it is better than that. It felt like Lu Mingfei was deliberately put into a small circle, and he was afraid that he would be cruel, so he threw a bone. Yes, it's like brainwashing! Most of the others are normal. For example, Caesar is actually very kind to Lu Mingfei, and Ange does take advantage of Lu Mingfei, but his behavior is still normal. As for Lu Mingfei's "parents" and passers-by, he has just been beautifying it for the same reason. I'm so tired and don't want to write anymore, so that's it.

The narrative method of the plot is very strange. Several chapters can be narrated from the perspectives of several different characters. There is no foreshadowing at the beginning. It looks very messy and affects the immersion. I should have known earlier that I shouldn't have ordered everything

When will His Highness Zero appear? I can't wait.

Reincarnate here and pout for a while, insert your eyes first

Compared to Dragon Clan fan fiction, the writing style is pretty good. I feel like it should be in the top ten among fan fiction.

I watched it while dancing, it felt good

It's really good, better than most of the ones I've seen

Damn it, is it over? Then I have to take a look

It looks great. I saw it from next door. Good luck, author.

The story is interesting and full of daily life. Big cheers for the author