Ultraman Saiou Ultraman
About This Novel
Su Mu traveled through time and became an Ultraman student in the Kingdom of Light. What kind of experience will he have in this turbulent era?
What Readers Think
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Official(11)Scraped 4d ago
To be honest, I'm a little uncomfortable with you making it feel like this
I don't understand the way you write, author.
nb
Play till the end Not segmented no quotes Chapters with few words The plot is funny To sum up It's very ca i
Ah, no, no, no.
The tumble.
Have you forgotten the punctuation marks and your paragraphing? When I opened your book, I couldn't read the first page. Let alone whether the content is good or not, but the most basic punctuation and paragraphing must be done well. Only in this way can I continue reading and see how good your book is.
Ultraman Zero is written as a woman, is it poisonous?
It's written all over the place, and it's not short either. It only lasts two pages. Hammer.
It's so short and weak, 10,000 words and 30 chapters.
Niubi
A few hundred words per chapter is really not enough. The plot is not bad, but it is too little. One chapter per page?
⊙∀⊙!
First: No follow-up Second: The number of words feels so small Third: Jumping too fast
The chapter has too few words and feels too perfunctory.
Your plot jumps too fast. The first chapter is about the Kingdom of Light, and the second chapter is about the Earth.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(11)Scraped 4d ago
To be honest, I'm a little uncomfortable with you making it feel like this
I don't understand the way you write, author.
nb
Play till the end Not segmented no quotes Chapters with few words The plot is funny To sum up It's very ca i
Ah, no, no, no.
The tumble.
Have you forgotten the punctuation marks and your paragraphing? When I opened your book, I couldn't read the first page. Let alone whether the content is good or not, but the most basic punctuation and paragraphing must be done well. Only in this way can I continue reading and see how good your book is.
Ultraman Zero is written as a woman, is it poisonous?
It's written all over the place, and it's not short either. It only lasts two pages. Hammer.
It's so short and weak, 10,000 words and 30 chapters.
Niubi
A few hundred words per chapter is really not enough. The plot is not bad, but it is too little. One chapter per page?
⊙∀⊙!
First: No follow-up Second: The number of words feels so small Third: Jumping too fast
The chapter has too few words and feels too perfunctory.
Your plot jumps too fast. The first chapter is about the Kingdom of Light, and the second chapter is about the Earth.
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