Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei's Growth Life Simulator

The writing is very good, but I read this book to read Dragon Clan. Up to now it is all about Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, so why don't I just read the Demon Slayer fanfic?

And it's updated five times a day. It's so big that it fills up quickly. Keep it up. I believe you can squeeze it.

It's just water for the sake of water, the content is procrastinating, and Mingfei also had to be smart because of the hydrology, which made my blood pressure rise.

Really 6, this is a headline, what does it have to do with the dragon clan? Most of them are demon slayers, why not just write about demon slayers. Writer of sensational headlines

There are more than 260 chapters so far, but at least 200 chapters are about ghost killing, which can actually be read. However, in a certain section, Su Xiaoqiang and Lu Mingfei were shopping, were assassinated, caught the killer, and met a loud reporter. The reporter alone gave a long talk, and one person said a word or two. Is the chapter too perfunctory? In the current few chapters, Lu Mingfei and Su Xiaoqiang were caught by the robbers and separated. I remember mentioned earlier that Su Xiaoqiang may be at risk of being raped. When you wrote that Lu Mingfei's first reaction was to kill one and try the other for his crimes, isn't it a bit...

After the protagonist leaves the simulation world, you can still see follow-up praise. But the overall pace of the book is very slow, with too many embellishments but not much actual content. Overall it's okay, but it should tell more about the story and push the plot, otherwise it always feels like the word count is too low.

There are more than 200 chapters. I don't deny that the first part is good, but the second part is really too watery and the plot is always watered down. Looking at the pace, it will take more than 200 chapters to start the Kassel plot.

Really, you can go slow. You can write simulations of demon slayer all the time. Demon slayer is not demon slayer, simulation is not simulation, and reality is not realistic. I don't know which part you want to write. You are not in slow pace now. You are writing a running account now. It is more flowing than an elementary school student's composition. I don't know where so many good reviews come from and such high scores.

There are many regrets in the world, and it is impossible to make up for them completely, and it cannot be made up for. Life is like this, there is nothing smooth, only ups and downs. Maybe fairy tales really exist, but unfortunately we are the reality. In fact, it is enough to simulate the world once. If you do it once, you will actually lose points. As the saying goes, there is no need to do things that have already existed, and why there is no need to do things that have already been done. If it happens again, it is them and not them. It is very sad to see it happen again. Self-deception all over again, very sad. The first simulation can be said to be a god, and the second simulation is the icing on the cake. It's like an imperfect item made for the first time. Although it's not perfect, it can be a god. That feeling is incomparable. Later, with experience, I made a truly perfect item using the same steps for the second time. Although it was perfect, it no longer had the same feeling as the first time. I don't know whether to be sad or happy. Watching the second simulation, I couldn't help but feel uncomfortable. The second time was to make up for the regret, but what about the two girls from the first time! Maybe it has been forgotten in the depths of memory! Ha ha! That's right! Didn't it make up for it the second time? What else is there to regret? But why do I feel like this is my escape? Yes! I am still the bad kid, running away, this ending is not perfect, wouldn't it be perfect from the beginning? Very sad, isn't it? Escape is still escape. But this is perfection that I can accept! But why is my heart still empty? Obviously those regrets and tragedies have been made up for. Why do you still feel uncomfortable? Maybe I'm crazy! Perhaps this is the reason why the old Jiangnan thieves did not resurrect those regretful people! I was thinking, if there are many parallel worlds, and you change the regrets in the second world, but maybe the first world still continues the previous story, is that making up for it or escaping it. Maybe it is a good choice to believe in fairy tales, but we are no longer the innocent children we once were. We have grown up after all. After all, there is no going back. (It's just a personal exclamation, it varies from person to person, so don't pay too much attention to it)

There are too many direct descriptions of emotions, and they are so long that I feel impatient to read them. The writing style is a bit literary and immersed in the sad, desolate or pitiful atmosphere created by myself, but the reader's experience is not good. It's not enough to write about emotions in writing, so reduce the emotion, use psychological descriptions, use objects to describe people, and use more narrative descriptions and side effects to set it off. ... Anyway, the writing style is very immature. I play bgm for myself in my mind. The shortcomings of the article are no longer visible to me.