Douluo: Become a God in Old Age, Blue and Silver Evergreen

I don't like Qian Renxue's self-righteousness, thinking that everyone can be conquered

Change the title of the book! There is a book about fighting masters and rebelling against disciples, and then forget about starting a harem. In old age, according to the finger given to the protagonist, how many years will be considered old age? Becoming a god in old age, you liar! You can grow up by spending time and become a god by collecting beliefs. How can you become a god in your old age! It would be better to change the name!

Fans must have the appearance of fan fiction. Since you want to write a story that conflicts with the original characters, can you please not change it randomly? The fact that the damn fat guy can have 37 is outrageous and nothing.

The academy stream is pretty good, but I have a problem with going to Shrek even though I have traveled through time.

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 82. The editing was so messy that it was as if the author had never read the original work. There were so many titled Douluo who couldn't see that Xiao Wu was a hundred thousand year old soul beast, but they saw that the Ice Emperor had hundreds of thousands of cultivations and was a soul beast. If he said that he didn't have a martial soul, he was a soul beast incarnation. The transformation also had a martial soul. Normal people should think that it was a self-created soul skill. The protagonist is a turtle man, and he is also mute. In addition to teasing women, he drinks tea. He drinks tea when he is insulted, is ambiguous when he is ridiculed, flirts when provoked, and only comes out to show off when others come knocking. Those villains are just like Shi Lezhi. They are slapped in the face again and again and taunted again and again. They are all tools just to slap the protagonist in the face. Take Dugu Yan for example. Ma Hongjun came to tease her at the beginning. He was obviously an acquaintance. How dare he, the orphan granddaughter of a titled Douluo, dare to tease someone? Gangzi was slapped in the face by Shui Bing'er for his theory when he first entered the academy. He saw his soul ring and level. He dared to lead a group of rubbish to challenge him later. He dared to talk about his theory at the birthday banquet. He was slapped in the face repeatedly and didn't have a long memory. The most lines in the whole text were "impossible". When Tang San saw the Haotian Sect at the birthday banquet, he said that it was his sect. Later, Gangzi said that his father was Haotian Douluo, but he still looked ignorant and told a love story. Gangzi knew nothing about it, it was just nonsense. The whole text has been edited in a mess, and it's all about Shi Lezhi slapping him in the face, which makes it boring after reading too much.

Isn't Ma Hongjun in Chapter 5 only at level 2? Then comes the third soul skill.

I'm fucked. At first, I was friendly and natural, and I followed my heart. Later, I became a mature and perverted woman. What the hell did you write?

There is no outline at all, and the configuration of the soul rings is even more chaotic. Each soul ring is different. What else are you writing about?

Shrek's three love brains and Wuhundian's three love brains are both annoying, but some supporting characters actually like them, such as Dugu Yan, Ye Lingling, Shui Bing'er, etc. They are all sober in the world.

Ma Hongjun is less than 16 years old at level 37. Yu Tianheng and the others are more than six years older than Tangshan, and they are also over 30 years old? ? ? ? There are so many fan novels published, more than 2,000! Not dozens or hundreds, but more than 2,000! As long as there is a little bit of unreasonableness, this book will not be requested, because there are too many fan novels and the timeline is wrong. Nowadays, people who read Douluo fan novels are becoming more and more picky.