Douluo: Wuhun Crow, in Charge of Life and Death

There is a little poisonous point in Golden Chapter 3. I don't understand why the whale gum is revealed. It is so weak. It develops steadily and kills decisively. Isn't it good? Let's take a look.

I read Chapter 11 without logging in, and I'm waiting for the account to objectively talk about the little poisonous points. The first one that is more controversial is the whale glue Matthew No. I don't think it's a big problem. After all, the protagonist needs a reason to rise, and the time and person he tells it are relatively reasonable. The second one is the choice of future path. The protagonist chooses to join Tiandou Academy with the help of the Xiao family's network. In order to seek immortal grass and maintain a basic friendship with Tang San, the poisonous point is that I wanted to write about the relationship network of the Xiao family, but was unable to explain it because of the white soul ring of Xiao Chenyu in the original work, and created a "loving mother". The loving mother was afraid of the danger to her children, so she refused the hundred-year soul ring and chose the ten-year one. I think the conflict between noble students and Wang Sheng and the group of work-study students in the original work are very good. The protagonist can deal with it from the bad side of the nobles, and can also objectively talk about the problems on both sides. However, the author's writing has a feeling of standing up and talking without pain. It is as abrupt as the "loving mother" above. It seems that this is not smooth, the problem is not big, and it is not a big poisonous point. The fourth overall strength is 14 A level comparable to the Soul Master, the martial spirit is not a god-level martial spirit, nor does it have the same skills as Tang San, hidden weapons, pure whale glue effect, it feels too exaggerated. These are some of the problems I found after reading the novel. In summary, there are not many big problems, but many small problems. I give it a 3⭐. I think the above is not a poisonous point. You can read it. The novel itself is very novel. If you think it is a poisonous point, you can leave early to avoid conflicts.

I have also been drunk recently. After I saw the killing of Yu Xiaogang, I thought the protagonist was really sure that the Wuhun Hall would not move. When I saw the reaction of the Enshrinement Hall, I thought it was done. But now I still have this kind of passive plot, which is not very satisfying to watch every day. Don't say anything like "Bibi Dong's brain is hard to guess the protagonist". When writing fan fiction, there is no "absolute logic". Isn't it all "the author's will"? To be honest, the author conceived the current series of plots after writing Yu Xiaogang to death. And there is another point. What was said in front of the enshrinement hall about "suspension of Pope Bibi Dong's rights" seems to be no different from fart now. After being "suspended", he can also assign elder tasks and punish failed tasks at will. Then I can't imagine what it would be like if the power is still there. He can kill anyone who wants to be banned, but no one else is allowed to fight back? ? ? Let's just say that in the fantasy world, the strong are respected, but I don't see where Bibi Dong is stronger in the original work? It is said that the strength has been suppressed. The rat and the rat were seven against one and he was allowed to grab someone and run away; the two beasts fought six against two for who knows how long, and the three of them were still dragging them around. In other words, Dou Yi is not suitable to write Wu Hun Temple as the villain. He can be a martial artist or not. At least don't write Wu Hun Temple as the villain before the protagonist has grown up. Otherwise, if you look at the number of strong people in Wu Hun Temple from a "God's perspective", you will find that the plot logic is almost the same as Dou Yi's original work, and it is just "brainless".

I read the title of the book and wanted to read it, but after reading the introduction, I immediately didn't want to read it. The subject of crows is a golden crow! In addition to symbolizing the sun, it can also control reincarnation and yin and yang. What a pity this subject matter

Chapter 34 is really unsatisfactory. It was so good before, but now it's just trash.

He died again and again, his father was afraid that his mother would not repent, so he killed Qian Renxue for fear that she would cause trouble again/What does maternal love mean, and what does raising her in front of that kind of person mean? In a world without Tang San, Bibi Dong is still a villain, and she wants to kill Qian Renxue from the beginning, a scheduled villain, in Tang San Shura God, marry the Qi of Qiwuhundian and Qian Renxue to Tang San. You were wrong when you said Qianxunji's only fault was that he was too soft-hearted. If you bring it into Qianxunji's perspective, you will find that there is no difference between Bibi Dong and a traitor. How did you treat traitors before? What is having a child compared to torture? If Shura God had not controlled her mother, she would have killed her mother after giving birth. If it had not been for the great worshiper who was an agent of the angel god, she would have had such a godchild without a mother. The other one was controlled by Shura. You were wrong. Qian Xunji's only fault was that she was too merciful. If you bring it into Qian Xunji's perspective, you will find that there is no difference between Bibi Dong and a traitor. How did you treat traitors in the past? What is giving birth to a child compared to torture?

The tulips were given too early. They should not be given to Ning Rongrong. They can be left to Ye Lingling, but they can also be given to Acacia Heartbroken Red. This one is more suitable. The alias of Begonia flower is Heartbroken Flower.

I'm a little speechless. The latest chapters are really a bit nonsensical. They say that Bibi Dong has been banned from papal power. But then Bibi Dong asks a few titled Douluo to be the protagonist. Isn't it too childish? Forget it. When did that silly bitch Liu Erlong become a Contra? Also, is the protagonist really thinking that Qian Daoliu is just a show-off when the Soul King destroys the two titles of Wuhun Palace by dancing like this? Qian Daoliu may not care how many Soul Douluo you kill, but Titled Douluo can only be found in the upper three sects, and there are only a dozen or so in Wuhun Palace. Do you really treat titles like cabbage? You killed two Qiandaoliu in one fell swoop. It would be strange if you didn't come out and wipe out your group of accounts directly.

The writing is awesome, there are no details at all, the way Jing Jiao handles it is not there, and secondly, it is completely brainless. This score cannot be brushed. If you can get this score like this, then this kind of fan fiction is useless.

Don't wash it off. Wuhun Palace has occupied the mainland's luck for a long time. Plus, Shura God has to bring some luck with him when he goes to other worlds. That's just a pass. Can't anyone in Qian Renxue and Wuhun Palace transfer half of the Qi to Tang San in Wuhun Palace? This has to be blood thicker than water/The Rakshasa God and the Shura God join forces to push everything to the Rakshasa. Tang San caters to Bibi Dong. It doesn't matter if he wins. They can get the luck. The purpose is to destroy the martial spirit. If he wins, the Douluo Star becomes Tang San. If he loses, he becomes the Rakshasa God. The weapon of the close God King is then transformed and then the godhead is given to Bibi Dong. Anyway, they are one body. The dead soul enters Bibi Dong's body and separates the soul. So these two idiots are responsible for this. According to the historical process of each person's participation, although the religion changed Douluo Continent, Huo Yuhao was added in the later period, which changed the practice methods and rules, plus the change of the schedule of Sun Moon Continent/Sun Moon Douluo Star. Dou San's original destiny protagonist was not Tang Wulin but the person who transferred destiny and entered the world.