Wuhun Sharingan, People Are Causing Trouble in Douluo

If it's a harem, I'm a little tired of it. Please reply, author.

Uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh, the writing style needs to be improved.

Many of the fanfics I wrote before were about Genshin Impact, and I am still a newcomer to Douluo, but I will work hard! I hope you all will support me! This post is for discussion, although I don't know how many people will post it, because you didn't say anything, I thought no one read QAQ

Yesterday I received news from the editor that it has been put on the shelves, but I came here as a member of QQ Reading. I feel that subscribing is not as cost-effective as being a member. Of course, from a writer's point of view, I still hope everyone can support me!

The beginning and introduction are very good, support five stars

To be honest, what I dislike the most is the Qibao Glazed Sect. How can I put it this way? It's similar to Soochow in the Three Kingdoms. He doesn't hurt people, but he is disgusting. That's really disgusting. In training Tyrannosaurus Rex, he basically doesn't care about the secular world. Haotian Sect has its own arrogance and is in a semi-hidden state, but Qibao Glazed Sect is the most annoying. To put it bluntly, it's ugly. , He was the most powerful landlord in the feudal era, and he also bet on both ends. In a war, the first person to be killed is not the enemy, but the swaying people like the Qibao Glazed Sect, just like why did Ning Fengzhi save the people of Wuhun Palace at the end of the competition? Undoubtedly, you just want to sell a favor, but your own position is destined to be the enemy of Wuhun Palace, but what is the use of selling this favor? And this kind of character that wants and wants at the same time is really annoying, and in the anime, you may not be able to see it, but in the comics, you will know that the Three Earth Sects, the Immortal Sect was suppressed too hard by the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect, which led to the hidden... To sum up, the Qibao Glazed Sect is like a dictator, and auxiliary sects can either join us or destroy people with huge talents, or destroy or join us. Whether in anime or comics, they are mentioned in the anime version. When Gu Long heard about Tang San's talent, his first thought was to kill him. Seeing Oscar's potential, he also killed him In the comics, the leader of the Immortal Sect, Ye Lengleng's mother, clearly asked the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect for help when the Wuhun Palace attacked the Immortal Sect, and promised to merge into the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect but ignored it. And throughout the first and second parts of Douluo Continent, I have always had one point that I didn't understand. The inheritance place of Oscar and Ning Rongrong must know that a god wants to fly. When you ascend to the God Realm, you must have your own inheritance place to ensure that your divine status is passed on to future generations. However, after reading Douluo Er's novel, I still don't understand where the inheritance places of the Nine Color Goddess and the God of Cookery are. If they are in the Nine Treasures Glazed Sect, then they will not be forced to live in seclusion. You know, there is only one God's Wuhun Temple that has stood for thousands of years. Although they are two second-level gods, they are at least gods.

There are too many self-made settings. Although some changes need to be made, it looks very weird. At the apprentice's place, go to have a meal first and then run away after eating. Soul guides are cheap?

The subject matter is very comfortable, the character is okay, a few points are handled... A little bit poisonous, mainly because it is not explained clearly. There is no role for the little fox after the contract. There is a little bit at the beginning, but no appearance, which is very annoying. Join Qibao Bao Xiaowu emmmmm, I reluctantly accepted it... I accept it as a ghost! ! ! Originally, the cheat function was not introduced well. I have been exchanging detonating charms all the time. I have used it when redeeming other ninjutsus, so there is no sense of existence. It gives people the impression that this system is stupid and has no goals. Is it necessary to sacrifice certain people to open the eyes? It keeps wasting points on detonating charms without a clear goal. I like it but I don't know where I like it. After realizing it, I don't want to read it.

I don't need to read to know that the protagonist/author likes Ning Rongrong very much. Ning Rongrong, the soul mate of Blood Wheel Eye Martial Spirit. Ten of the ten Sharingan books involve encountering Ning Rongrong at the beginning.

The male protagonist's character is not clearly explained Take the little fox as an example. The ancestor of the fox said that he could be given a hundred thousand year soul ring, but the male protagonist said no, he had to give it to Xiao Mei. The main reason is not this, but the reason why the male protagonist does not want a hundred thousand year soul ring is mentioned. The reason can be that the male protagonist is afraid that the hundred thousand year soul ring will attract attention, or the author does not explain clearly what the male protagonist's personality is like. Also, the male protagonist actually fell asleep while hunting for souls. After all, he had an experience in the previous life, so he couldn't really be like this. Even a local child wouldn't be so big-hearted. Writing this way makes the male protagonist feel heartless. It always feels inexplicable that the male protagonist is described like this. Can the author explain the male protagonist's character in the comment area or in a certain chapter? Otherwise, I can't understand the reasonable explanations for some of the male protagonist's behaviors.