Dou Po: Bind Xiao Xun'er at the Beginning, Get Ten Times the Feedback

The writing is good, but when it comes to Yun Yun, I feel that this girl is not pleasing no matter how I describe it. Most of the fans save her and she comes up with a cold question, making people save her as if they owe her money, and this woman is really self-reliant. Gao, the other one is that the protagonist in your novel is at the peak of Dou Huang and can fight any sect at will. This Yun Yun is just a Dou Huang. Even if she doesn't know that the protagonist is stronger than her, at least he is at the same level. Or should she come up and talk about a little guy when the protagonist saves him and it doesn't matter? It's so casual. Do you think she dares to call the stronger one an old guy? The most important thing is that I don't understand why Yunlan's puppet leader dares to be so arrogant and pretentious? Maybe it's because I don't have enough experience. I feel like it's incredible that I can reach the Dou Huang level at my age, right?

Dear readers, stop keeping books, there are already one hundred and forty chapters, it's time to start! Post some pictures:

Suggestions for the heroine: Gu Xun'er, Yun Yun, Queen Medusa. If there are too many, it would be better to have more children and more happiness.

What did you write, idiot? It doesn't matter if you cut off the green scales, you can help your brother find the strange fire, right? How could Xiao Yan find Qinglian Earth Core Fire without Qinglin Lin? Later, after Medusa used up the strange fire, she said she wanted to give it to the protagonist, but the protagonist actually didn't want it! That's outrageous. Do you have any grudge against your brother? What your brother worked so hard to find, what you did casually, alas, I just don't give it to my brother, I just play with it. Xiao Yan was cornered. He didn't have any strange fire in his body, so he could only be the first one to surrender to the Fallen Heart Flame. I just couldn't understand it. The protagonist has a water attribute, so strange fire is useless. Moreover, he and Xiao Yan are brothers. Will they die if they help others? Since we want to suppress Xiao Yan, why should we write them as brothers? It doesn't matter if you write him as a member of the Soul Clan, it will be fun no matter how you suppress him. Do some people think it's better to suppress their own brother? ? Driving such a big car and becoming emperor at the same time as Emperor Hun Tian made me laugh.

It made me laugh to death. The author didn't give Xiaoyan Qinglian Earth Heart Fire or Hai Xinyan, so he couldn't be a nanny for no reason. It made me laugh to death. In the end, I was giving benefits to all kinds of people here. I didn't give Xiaoyan a babysitter, but worked as a babysitter for other messes. It's awesome. Besides, Xiaoyan's own brother didn't give him a chance. As a result, the good things were given to others casually. It's really a double standard. Besides, if you don't give Xiaoyan Yihuo, he can't rely on himself, but if you don't show up, how can you destroy the opportunities that Xiaoyan originally had?

Qinglian didn't want the Earth Heart Fire, but Hai Xinyan gave it to the Soul Palace. After being exposed to the Soul Palace's protector, he let him go even though he had the strength to kill him instantly, and asked him to take Hai Xinyan away with him. Don't you want to give these strange fires to Xiao Yan? Let's not mention that he is your brother. You care about him on the surface. You have bound him and you don't even know how to improve him. You just eat the system until you die. You don't use any other resources and don't leave them to your own people. The most stupid thing is to give them directly to the enemy. In the end, one star does not count, so I just give two stars.

After reading Chapter 250, I feel it is very poisonous. First of all, there is the issue of combat power. You have the physique of Gu Xun'erhui, Qinglin's hundred-fold pupil technique, and the perfect disaster poison body of the Little Medical Fairy. Your realm will be equaled by Qinglin. The second is the issue of strange fire. You will not accept the Qinglian sent by Medusa. The reason for the Earth Core Fire is because you don't want to be a nanny and want Xiao Yan to take it by himself. If I remember correctly in the original book, Xiao Yan can take it away because Medusa will be more successful if there is a controlled alien fire to evolve. How will Xiao Yan take it after you take away the Medusa? Then again, you killed Han Feng's strange fire and why didn't you give it to the Soul Palace? Then you also took one of the strange fire remnant pictures. Xiao Yan may have reached the level of Dou Zun and his skills have not yet broken through the earth level. Overall, the plot of this book is good, but it can't be used for brains🙄

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First, Qinglian put the Earth's Heart Flame there and refused to take it. You can't take it back to Xiao Yan if you don't absorb it. After all, it's your brother, and you've bound the feedback, so the character just collapsed. Later, Han Fenghai's Heart Flame was taken away by the Soul Palace even though he beat him to death. The Dou Zong protector let him run away even though he could drop it in seconds? I'm afraid it's written by someone else's hand, right?

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