Douluo Gold and Silver Dragon God

The knight will always protect the princess, but the princess will always marry the prince. The evil dragon will never hurt the princess, so the prince can never save the princess. Cinderella's glass slippers didn't fit her feet at all, otherwise she wouldn't have lost them when she ran. The ugly duckling turned into a white swan not because of hard work or luck, but because his parents were originally white swans. Do you think that fairy tales are wrong and that fairy tales are lies? Let me tell you, the fairy tale is right, it is the beauty that should really exist, and the wrong one is this world. What is a secret love? It's millions of blushing and heartbeats, and countless bowed sighs, it's one person's chaos, it's two people's helplessness, it's your smile that makes me happy for many days, your words that I've memorized for many years, it's my sleepy teacher in math class who nodded your name, and I raised my head before you, it's us watching a fireworks side by side, I didn't look at the sky, you didn't look at me. Secret love is when you are not in your eyes, but all you see is you. Repair my war sword and kill for nine days. Sprinkle my blood and move forward indomitably. When the yin and yang reverse, I will dye the sky with demon blood. Through thousands of calamities and dangers, even if my soul is scattered, my spiritual consciousness remains. Fighting through hundreds of reincarnations, even if the six realms are impermanent, I will still live forever. God's way! God's way! Heaven has lost its way, so why should we serve Heaven? When heaven dies, the devil shall be born

The existence of the Wuhun Palace is similar to Qin Shihuang's status in China for five thousand years, except that Qin Shihuang succeeded, so later generations will compare his achievements to those of the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors, while the original Wuhun Palace failed! But it doesn't mean that Wuhun Palace's contribution to the Soul Fighting Continent doesn't exist! The existence of Wuhun Palace at least allows more qualified civilians to have the opportunity to become soul masters, unlike those nobles who use the name of nobles to bully civilians to show their high status and power. These nobles are the most hateful! In the original work, although Tang San, the protagonist, destroyed the Spirit Hall, it was only because of revenge. To be fair, Tang San had nothing but indirect hatred between his parents and the Spirit Hall. Looking at it from a different perspective, I think Tang San was selfish! Because of Tang San's destruction of the Spirit Palace, the Fighting Spirit Continent fell into a war that lasted for several years and decades. Later, the Tiandou Empire split into two countries, and the continent fell into a situation of disputes between the Dying Hair Empire, making it even more chaotic. The only victims were civilians who had no power to restrain themselves. Only unification can lead to peace, and only healthy struggle can lead to progress! The war between empires is, to put it bluntly, just a struggle for royal power. It is more like a game between emperors, just to satisfy their own vanity of dominating the world and keeping their promises, but the common people are burdened by it! And if Wuhun Palace unifies the continent, at least the civilians will not be just civilians forever, nor will they bully civilians. Civilians will have more opportunities to become soul masters. After all, the existence of Wuhun Palace is the source of the progress of the Soul Fighting Continent! Without the Wuhun Palace, the Fighting Soul Continent would be nothing! In Tang San Douluo 1, he made no contribution to the Soul Fighting Continent at all, he only wanted revenge! So in comparison, I like Wuhundian, but I don't like Douyi Tangsan's character! Does anyone have the same idea as me?

Combat aspect I think the author should insert a description of the character's appearance before the fight when writing a book in the future. Improve the sense of immersion, such as the character's weapons or the character's status, and then the actions should be detailed. (If you really can't write fighting, just develop into drama) From the chapters that have been released (Chapter 48), it can be seen that all the opponents the protagonist of this book encounters are greatly different from the protagonist in terms of strength. The battles are basically passed by in one stroke, and there is nothing exciting about them. It is recommended that the author try not to write about previous fights against opponents who are much weaker than the protagonist. Just crushing them will make the reading experience worse for readers. It is best to design a few more characters that are comparable to the protagonist's strength (the power when sealed). The protagonist must be injured in the battle, preferably relatively serious and unable to recover for a while, but the enemy must be defeated. If you can control this paragraph, you must make the fight longer (try to write it in a more ups and downs, otherwise it will persuade some people to retreat and forget it if they can't control it). Be sure to add some scene descriptions in the middle to highlight the protagonist's environment and further enhance the sense of immersion. Only in this way can you capture the readers' hearts, and it's up to you to figure out the specific details yourself. Protagonist character Next is the issue of the protagonist. Some people like his character, and some don't. Let me tell you my opinion. As for the character of the protagonist, I think the protagonist still has the arrogance of a time traveler. I think it is best to let the protagonist lose once (someone older or the same age, in a competition in some aspects, such as not using martial arts, let a character who knows how to fight with the protagonist), so that the protagonist's character can be more restrained or more mature. The protagonist's original life is the Golden Dragon King, a very powerful being. This kind of strong person either has unparalleled arrogance and does not care about the opinions of any small people, nor can he argue with others through words, but only cares about his own opinions, or he has both wisdom and courage, knows how to use people's hearts, can make good relationships with anyone, and is extremely smart. However, the protagonist has traveled through 6 years and has not changed at all. The protagonist still has the habit of swearing, and his personality is completely inconsistent with the posture of a strong man. I just hope that the protagonist can restrain his arrogance or have too many childish feelings (a personality that is casually taunting others). From the latest chapters, it can be seen that the character of the protagonist who has just traveled through time and is ignored by everyone has not only not restrained, but has become more and more serious. A true strong man must not only have a humble heart, but also need to have a noble (mature) character. There is also the issue of the protagonist's strength. If this is not written well, the combat aspect will become extremely difficult to write. Now I think (my opinion is for reference only), the protagonist's strength has improved a bit too fast. Before the protagonist reaches level 40, fighting Tang Hao and Zhao Wuji already shows that the protagonist's strength has far exceeded his superficial level. According to this progress, when the author writes the Soul Master Competition later, there will be basically not many people who can fight the protagonist. Readers already know the protagonist's strength, so there is basically nothing to see. So how do you prevent readers from understanding the protagonist's strength, make the protagonist's strength vague, and arouse readers' interest? Here are two methods you can refer to: First: Arrange a character to fight back and forth with the protagonist. It is best if the gap between the soul power level and the real strength is large (the same as the protagonist, if the soul power level is directly mentioned, the reader will naturally know the protagonist's strength, so there is no point in arranging this character). Second: Spend a longer period of time, such as 2 years later, try to use years as the unit, so that the protagonist's strength becomes ambiguous again. If the author wants to adopt my suggestion, I personally recommend the first method. For this book, I think the protagonist's strength (four rings) is now enough to fight the Soul Saint, so the second method cannot be used. He was already so strong at the age of 12. If another 4-5 years pass, then the protagonist can directly fight against a few titled Douluo. It seems that if you use the second method, the strength will only become stronger and blurred, which will make the subsequent plot difficult to write, so I recommend using the first method. Conclusion At this time, someone may tell me that I just like to read cool articles, curse people, and crush them. What's wrong with that? Then I can only say that there are a thousand Hamlets among a thousand people. Everyone has their own opinion. If you think what I said is right, that's okay. If you think I'm wrong, don't criticize me. I'm just expressing my own opinion. By the way, there are two bugs in this book. Let me mention them here: One is in Chapter 29. Gu Yuena has already told the age of Cockscomb, but Zhao Wuji seems not to have heard it. It is impossible that Soul Saint cannot hear the voice (I can hear what Xiao Wu whispered earlier). Remember to change it here. The second bug is from the old woman. The old woman's son is a 6-ring Soul Emperor. No matter how bad the matching of soul rings is, he still won't be out of money. Mother, go get some money. I remember in the original book, you can become a viscount of the empire with 4 or a few rings. So here you can change the Soul Emperor to the 3rd level Soul Lord (white, yellow, yellow) Finally, I want to say that what I said is only for reference, and I have no other meaning. I just hope that this book will be better. After all, it is not easy to find a book with a setting and protagonist identity that I like. I hope the author can read it and hope to adopt it! ! ! [Emot=default,18/]

I want to say that Qian Xunji is still alive, and what happened to Bibi Dong? How could Jugui Douluo defect to Bibi Dong? This is obviously a rebellion. Although not everything in the Wuhun Temple is decided by the Qianjia, most of the Wuhun Temple is the Qianjia. Since Chihiroji has no future, it is impossible to follow Bibi Dong and be Qiandaoliu. Is he dead? How obvious is the rebellion? Zai Sha will come out and hack Bibi Dong to death. The reason why Bibi Dong can become the pope is because Qianxun Ji died. Wuhun Temple cannot live without the Pope Qiandaoliu. In order for Wuhun Temple to allow the person who killed his son to become the pope, do you think he will let the inner fighting in Wuhun Temple come out and hack Bibi Dong to death in a minute? She also wants to fight Qianjia. She is dreaming.

Author, can the protagonist accept the snake woman as his harem? 😁

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Really rubbish.

Author, has Gu Yuena confirmed the heroine? It's a single heroine, and we agreed not to have a harem or a stud. Also, I think you can write a little more about Gu Yuena's scheming, after all, she has lived for more than 200 million years.

I think the protagonist is the Golden Dragon King, who is on the side of the soul beasts. Is the protagonist a bit kind to humans? If the author writes about the side of the soul beasts, there will be a battle with the human race! Those who are not of my race will be punished! Many people should know this sentence! Although there are good people in the human race, everything is for "profit"! So, author, how do you plan to deal with humans and soul beasts? !

Is it too bad time for Gu Chen to travel through time? The Dragon God had just split into the Gold and Silver Dragon King, and they were still fighting. But you came before the fight was over. Will you fight or run away?