Douluo: My Apprentice is the Pope

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How would I feel if my apprentice were the Pope? [Emot=default,14/]

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Lu Chi has a very sad constitution. He gets lost every time he goes out. I never thought that such a handsome boy like Yang Zian could also be a Lu Chi. Alas, it's a pity that if there is no one to guide him in the future, I don't know where he will be lost.

Not to mention that Yang Zian is quite lucky. After all, others have to practice according to systematic methods to become stronger. Yang Zian is different. Yang Zian only needs to accept a disciple. After accepting the disciple, he will teach the disciple, and then Yang Zian can also possess the disciple's abilities. Doesn't thinking like this mean that you're going to win?

Four stars give the author a great attitude in writing. At least I can see that the author is working hard. I have a few suggestions that are not suggestions (probably similar to what I thought when reading a book), and I would like to give the author a listen (I haven't been in a good mood recently, and sometimes I use words that are a bit irritable, please forgive me): 1. Time, the time the protagonist survives. This is something I have always criticized. It has been 800 million years, and it has only been only three million years since Homo sapiens appeared on the earth. In other words, the protagonist may have witnessed the evolution of human beings from some kind of ape-like soul beasts to soul masters step by step (maybe the protagonist has seen the appearance of those Homo sapiens soul beasts, but now he thinks of those Homo sapiens whenever he is with men and women? (Laughing)). Of course, the extraordinary world has unique features. I didn't say anything about my special view of time (in fact, I always feel that the story line of San Shao's ten thousand years is a bit far away. Human beings have not yet had ten thousand years of civilization. That's right, after all, the extraordinary world is different from this one. (Laughing)), or the author has already thought of me as a small figure... And for 800 million years, even in the Cthulhu Mythos, a powerful cone-shaped creature that can be mentioned as Nyarlathotep cannot exist for long, and it has to be transported frequently to preserve the race. 2. System. The system in this novel gave me the feeling that it has a pitiful presence, and the protagonist hardly ever uses it. If the author simply regards the system as a prop that distributes items and gives the main line, then he can write it in another way (only my own thoughts, just suggestions). For example, for example, the protagonist has a world stone or something like that. This is the reason why the protagonist travels through time. This stone is integrated into the protagonist's body, and then the protagonist travels through time. After traveling through time, I found myself in Douluo. The one who accepts a disciple can be completely transformed into that as long as he has a relationship with a hundred children of the times (don't think blindly, they are all people with ID cards), his World Stone can transform Douluo Continent into the world of the protagonist (the protagonist becomes the Lord of the World), and then naturally there will be a happy ending. Martial spirits, soul rings, talents, etc., 800 Million years of time plus a world stone, in this Ganges River. 3. Character design (this is just my own fantasy from now on, please forgive me for offending the author). Looking at the chapter where Gu Yuena and Bibi Dong quarreled, if I didn't look at the pronouns at the end, I wouldn't know who they were. It gives me the feeling that the characters of Liu Erlong, Bibi Dong, and Gu Yuena are very similar. Bibi Dong's words are like a queen who dominates the world and controls power. She should have a bit of a shaky temperament, more like Esdeath in "Zhan Mei"; while Gu Yuena's words are like a heavenly queen. She should have a bit of earthly and light temperament. She is as graceful as a startling giant and as graceful as a dragon. She should be more like Gu Yuena (I haven't seen Dou San's nonsense). If there is a true comparison, then Bibi Dong is more like Wu Zetian, while Gu Yuena is more like the Queen Mother of the West. (I think Liu Erlong is more like a girly Nezha (laughs)) And Yu Xiaogang, his appearance is bound to be eliminated, but how can I put it, the way the author arranged his appearance was too sudden. I think (don't worry about what I think is just nonsense) every character has a shining point (although Yu Xiaogang is not great, I think he will also shine) These are some of my suggestions that are not suggestions. If they feel bad, you are right. (Some people may also say that you know the author, so count it as my fault.) (Don't say that I prostituted myself in vain. I at least gave all my recommendation votes to the author.) If it affects the author and the author's books, please tell me and I will clean it up. Is it true that it doesn't work without pictures?

Should I say that Yang Zian's life after time travel is boring or what? After all, when other people have a system after time travel, they just pretend to be cool, but Yang Zian, in addition to accepting disciples, teaches them, and then sleeps. After sleeping, continue to recruit disciples. This feels a little boring.

This book is awesome, the writing is great, the plot is top-notch, it's awesome plus!

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