The Unscientific Detective in Conan

Too deliberately pretending to be cool, I used the power experience card in a fight. I was evenly matched with the opponent in the previous fight, and then the system prompted that there were only 10 seconds left in the experience card, so I used my ultimate move. You are playing Ultraman here. You can't fight without flashing the lights, right?

I haven't seen Xiao Ai appear in chapter 27. If the heroine is not Xiao Ai, don't use Xiao Ai as the cover.

There are a lot of things in Chapter 5 of tmd that I can complain about. Not to mention that you lost all your money when you first got the system and later said that it was the system that you ran out of money. I can think that you are pretending to be a **, and that Mao Lilan and that teacher. I can understand the teacher, but Mao Lilan, what you wrote is like a holy mother. When you see others who are pitiful and have not met people a few times, you will, well, I will definitely treat my seniors to a meal in the future. There is also the one that solves the five-year-old haunted house murder case. Before I read this book, I thought it was a cheat that went straight to the top. It is understandable that it was done as a junior. But if you are a junior, you will do a junior thing and directly arrange a haunted house murder case five years ago. The case five years ago is something you can encounter. This can also be a coincidence. But when you find out the reason, you don't call the police, but go up and say stupid things yourself. You have to pretend to be this, can't you do it? So there you have it, words from a troll

The protagonist is 18 years old, smokes and drinks. The adult age in Japan is 20 years old (now it has been changed to 18). It is common sense that drinking under the age of 20 is illegal, so neither Kogoro Mouri nor Ran Mouri cares about the protagonist drinking? The next day I went to school smelling like alcohol, and the teacher didn't give any warning.

What are the flaws? That's a case that's all part of the Conan series. There's nothing original about it. The protagonist has read the plot and solves the case like a god without thinking or using his brain. So why should I read your novel? ? ? ? ? In the early stage, I was weak and attacked and beat up the drug dealer. It was very brave and very poisonous. Don't look at it.

To be honest, it's too routine. There's basically no plot about Conan and the others. It's just the protagonist stealing most of Conan's gross profits. There's nothing original at all. The lottery is also a bunch of rubbish. If it costs 950,000 for ten times in a row, there won't be many that can be used. If most of the money didn't come from system rewards, Japan would probably be in economic crisis. It can be said that the abilities are useless. I can't understand the combat power. Can you explain the bonus of relying on system occupations? Are you tired of taking notes all the time when writing a novel with a bunch of useless skills? Or are you saying that you have many skills and you can write everything? Rather than a plot like this, to be honest, it would be better to give the male protagonist an invincible character, and then use some trick skills to trick Conan for fun, such as giving the male protagonist twelve talismans and Shadow Corps skills. Not only would the male protagonist become a superman, but he could also do some things through the shadow world, including tricking Conan. Isn't it fun? You can also let the Shadow Corps destroy the original case evidence. Unless there are extremely evil people, Conan can't solve any cases, and then you don't have fun watching? Isn't it fun to use the rat charm to get Kudo Shinichi to accompany Xiaolan to school and scare Conan?

The timeline in Conan spans a lot. It was normal to have one day off from school and one week off. Why does the protagonist always have to take time off?

It's so uncomfortable. Your mother spent money to read more than 500 chapters, and suddenly it became free as a member. It's so uncomfortable.

I hope it will be a single heroine, and the heroine can be Haibara Ai

I wonder who the heroine will be next? But you can tell by looking at my profile picture that I personally prefer Shiho. But who is the heroine the author chooses in the end? I believe it will all look great, whether it is multiple heroines or single heroine, I believe the author will write it well. I am very much looking forward to the follow-up, Kasukora, come on! In addition, do you think the previous picture quality was better? Just like the two pictures at the back, the seventh and eighth pictures look like a child's face, wearing glasses, looking attentive, so cute