Douluo: Bones up Susan, I Am a Natural Disaster
About This Novel
Born like an ant, you should have the ambition to be a swan! Life is as thin as paper, you should have an unyielding heart! Feng Xiao, an orphan who traveled to the Douluo Continent, unexpectedly awakened the unprecedented twin martial souls - "Sacred Heart" - as blazing as the sun, with endless vitality, reshaping flesh and blood, and healing all things. It is a symbol of creation. "Demon Bones" - as cold as prison, wrapped in death energy, bones turned into armor, Susanoo is a symbol of destruction. Life and death, light and darkness, the rotation of yin and yang, all things! However, in Douluo Continent, the strong are respected, and geniuses without background are just prey after all. Feng Xiao knew this very well. He is calm, rational, and good at calculation. Relying on the foresight of the time traveler, he plunders opportunities step by step and devours fortune! --Tang San's Eight Spider Spears? Rob! --Shrek's fairy grass? Occupy! --The inheritance of gods? Take it! He is a ghost walking between life and death. "I'm not a genius, I just... Know how to win better than anyone else!" This is a road to becoming a god paved with blood and fire, and it is also a legend of a mortal crushing destiny and taking over the world with his wisdom and iron fist!
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Official(122)Scraped 24d ago
Um? Is anyone watching?
Who is the heroine? The author is Da Da (make a cross)
A very strange style of writing
She is scheming, rational over emotional, and only considers interests for people and things, a bit like Fang Yuan. The problem is that this is the land of love, so there will be a very strange feeling. The description of the fight is procrastinating, and one fighting spirit can write six or seven chapters. For several female characters in it, the protagonist has a very obvious self-abuse and self-motivation plot. For her own good and her safety, she also hides this and that. She made a few girls talk into each other, and then said that she did not want to expose her weaknesses, so she chose not to show up...
None or single, as long as there are not many women.
Passive skills are directly changed to active skills, and they also consume soul power.
There is already a passive skill enhancement, which enhances all states by 50% and it is a passive soul skill that does not consume soul power. But here you have also changed it to an active soul skill, which also consumes soul power, and then it is still strengthened by 50%. Then you are not strengthening it, you are completely weakening it.
The writing is indeed good, but the plot is off track.
I can only say that it is indeed good. The writing style in the fanfic is considered to be top-notch, and the protagonist setting is also okay. Only Zhu Zhuqing still read the comment section to send Xiao Wu (Tang San and Xiao Wu hugged and fell asleep) and so on. The author, you can take a look at Douluo's current situation. If Xiao Wu is not accepted, she will also have a soul ring, or she will end up miserable, and if the seven monsters are not accepted, they will be treated coldly. For example, if you don't write about the relationship between them, from what I have seen so far, Dai Mubai asked Zhu Zhuqing to treat him? I don't understand the meaning of you writing these more words, enriching Dai Mubai? Nowadays, people who still watch Douluo Fans rarely watch the rich Dai Mubai and the plot that shaped Oscar. If your book was written in 2021 or even 20 years ago, it would indeed be fun to read as Shrek's Eight Monsters. But unfortunately, with the mainstream of Shao San Hao, even the brainless Douluo and Hei San's novels will have better results than yours. And for someone like me who has watched too many plots about Shrek and the Three Abuses (not self-deprecating, as far as the current QQ market is concerned, more than 80% of Douluo fans are those who torture the original protagonists of the Three Abuses). If I come into contact with someone like you, I will definitely abandon the book, no matter how good your setting is. Free again. I can only say that I was affected by the environment. After reading the plot you wrote about Dai Mubai asking Zhu Zhuqing to go to treatment, you should understand that they are all scolding.
It's too watery. The AI style is serious.
The protagonist fights two Soul Lord NPCs for six chapters. If you can accept Shuiwen, you should read it.
If the main character joins Shrek in order to get the Eight Spider Spears, then the main character made this move really well because of the Eight Spider Spears soul skills. Even a soul master with half-level innate soul power can have the opportunity to become a titled Douluo. This swallowing is really great and has no upper limit.
The content is good, but it's getting redundant
The plot and the character of the protagonist are very good, unlike other Douluo fans who are either hypocritical or perverts, but the author likes to describe it too much, especially the two-person soul fighting chapter that actually lasted 6 chapters, which is outrageous. I listened to the book for a long time and was still reading. It is too long, no matter how detailed the description is, because the length is too long, I can't outline a coherent picture in my mind. Also, it's becoming more and more like the Bengtie storyline. Don't speak human words. The scene where Dugu Yan meets is all three primary colors. I talked a lot and wrote three chapters. That's all I've read so far. But if I continue to write like this, I can't keep reading because it's getting more and more pretentious and the plot is moving slowly. Other authors are getting more and more proficient in writing. How come you are letting yourself go more and more as you write?
Book lovers, how do you like the latest chapter? Comment a lot and inject some "interest" energy into me, I can withstand it!
Rating
Community(0)
Official(122)Scraped 24d ago
Um? Is anyone watching?
Who is the heroine? The author is Da Da (make a cross)
A very strange style of writing
She is scheming, rational over emotional, and only considers interests for people and things, a bit like Fang Yuan. The problem is that this is the land of love, so there will be a very strange feeling. The description of the fight is procrastinating, and one fighting spirit can write six or seven chapters. For several female characters in it, the protagonist has a very obvious self-abuse and self-motivation plot. For her own good and her safety, she also hides this and that. She made a few girls talk into each other, and then said that she did not want to expose her weaknesses, so she chose not to show up...
None or single, as long as there are not many women.
Passive skills are directly changed to active skills, and they also consume soul power.
There is already a passive skill enhancement, which enhances all states by 50% and it is a passive soul skill that does not consume soul power. But here you have also changed it to an active soul skill, which also consumes soul power, and then it is still strengthened by 50%. Then you are not strengthening it, you are completely weakening it.
The writing is indeed good, but the plot is off track.
I can only say that it is indeed good. The writing style in the fanfic is considered to be top-notch, and the protagonist setting is also okay. Only Zhu Zhuqing still read the comment section to send Xiao Wu (Tang San and Xiao Wu hugged and fell asleep) and so on. The author, you can take a look at Douluo's current situation. If Xiao Wu is not accepted, she will also have a soul ring, or she will end up miserable, and if the seven monsters are not accepted, they will be treated coldly. For example, if you don't write about the relationship between them, from what I have seen so far, Dai Mubai asked Zhu Zhuqing to treat him? I don't understand the meaning of you writing these more words, enriching Dai Mubai? Nowadays, people who still watch Douluo Fans rarely watch the rich Dai Mubai and the plot that shaped Oscar. If your book was written in 2021 or even 20 years ago, it would indeed be fun to read as Shrek's Eight Monsters. But unfortunately, with the mainstream of Shao San Hao, even the brainless Douluo and Hei San's novels will have better results than yours. And for someone like me who has watched too many plots about Shrek and the Three Abuses (not self-deprecating, as far as the current QQ market is concerned, more than 80% of Douluo fans are those who torture the original protagonists of the Three Abuses). If I come into contact with someone like you, I will definitely abandon the book, no matter how good your setting is. Free again. I can only say that I was affected by the environment. After reading the plot you wrote about Dai Mubai asking Zhu Zhuqing to go to treatment, you should understand that they are all scolding.
It's too watery. The AI style is serious.
The protagonist fights two Soul Lord NPCs for six chapters. If you can accept Shuiwen, you should read it.
If the main character joins Shrek in order to get the Eight Spider Spears, then the main character made this move really well because of the Eight Spider Spears soul skills. Even a soul master with half-level innate soul power can have the opportunity to become a titled Douluo. This swallowing is really great and has no upper limit.
The content is good, but it's getting redundant
The plot and the character of the protagonist are very good, unlike other Douluo fans who are either hypocritical or perverts, but the author likes to describe it too much, especially the two-person soul fighting chapter that actually lasted 6 chapters, which is outrageous. I listened to the book for a long time and was still reading. It is too long, no matter how detailed the description is, because the length is too long, I can't outline a coherent picture in my mind. Also, it's becoming more and more like the Bengtie storyline. Don't speak human words. The scene where Dugu Yan meets is all three primary colors. I talked a lot and wrote three chapters. That's all I've read so far. But if I continue to write like this, I can't keep reading because it's getting more and more pretentious and the plot is moving slowly. Other authors are getting more and more proficient in writing. How come you are letting yourself go more and more as you write?
Book lovers, how do you like the latest chapter? Comment a lot and inject some "interest" energy into me, I can withstand it!
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