The Journey of the World That Begins with the Son-in-law
by Suohanlou
About This Novel
Draw a lottery in the world of your son-in-law and travel around the world
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Official(3)Scraped 8d ago
Big and messy
It's too open and the writing is too messy.
Too messy
Don't keep writing about the attributes of the protagonist, it's too wordy and too watery! Also, could the punctuation of the dialogue be better? It's so tiring to watch! There is no sense of immersion at all.
It's good to come on. Can
Hope to continue working hard, come on, come on, come on!
Rating
Community(0)
Official(3)Scraped 8d ago
Big and messy
It's too open and the writing is too messy.
Too messy
Don't keep writing about the attributes of the protagonist, it's too wordy and too watery! Also, could the punctuation of the dialogue be better? It's so tiring to watch! There is no sense of immersion at all.
It's good to come on. Can
Hope to continue working hard, come on, come on, come on!
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