Sword Roaring Lingxiao

So far, there are three major vulnerabilities: 1. The protagonist has just become a disciple and is not qualified to accept a disciple. 2. The protagonist is not qualified to create a new boxing technique. Chuangquan practitioners in the past dynasties have experienced hundreds of battles and have rich experience. The protagonist has only been learning martial arts for a few months. Whatever the protagonist can think of, others can think of. The author is giving intelligence to other characters in the book to raise the IQ of the protagonist. 3. The Hunyuan Sword Technique that the protagonist wants to learn requires powerful internal force. His master should have known right away that it was not suitable for beginners and should not teach the protagonist. He should teach other swordsmanship that does not require deep internal strength to be used. This is what you call a master! In short, there are many things in the book that the ancestors or predecessors could think of, but the result is that no one else can think of it, and only the protagonist can think of it.

After all, the author is old, and a greasy feeling of old age hits his face. Although the male protagonist is a young man and the female protagonist is also a girl, there is no youthful vitality at all, only the insatiable grabbing of the basic desires of life. Suddenly, I felt that the modern so-called little fairy and this old fairy man were quite a match. The writing was good at the beginning, but the plot gradually became boring later on. Even if various beauties were added as a booster, it would still be boring. After all, it is still far behind the interaction in the live broadcast room. How can a too vulgar core become a fine product?

A cool article about upgrading a thoroughbred horse. It has nothing to do with martial arts. At a level like a toad, he still answers questions on Zhihu in a serious manner all day long and brags about the country and makes people laugh.

The pacing was very good before it was released. After it was released, it was terrible. The combat power collapsed. The new characters appeared just for water. Can you write a good outline before starting a new book?

For what purpose does the author have to write such a plot where the protagonist is ignorant and confused? For this reason, he also bluntly wrote a plot that keeps the talent of the protagonist a secret. The master of the protagonist is one of the five great masters in the world. This is just a martial arts novel. To be honest, even if the protagonist's reputation spreads throughout the world, as long as he doesn't sign up for his number when he goes out, who will recognize him? Does the author write too much about fantasy and fairy tales? . . Again, you are just a martial artist. After you are thirty years old, who in the world still wants to hear your story?

The performance of this book "Old Toad" is not good. In terms of plot and characters, this is not a martial arts novel. It is just a pure YY novel with a martial arts name attached to it. Long Aotian-style protagonist + all kinds of vulgar clichés, men will bow to him when they see him, women will give him away when they see him, from identity to friends to... In short, he is awesome, he is the Dragon King. The Wizarding World War of Pulse also followed this routine, but it was not so obvious. The Immortal with Boundless Mana also followed this routine. Pony Pony also followed this routine in the later stages. I don't understand why the old toad has to be so stupid and suppress such a vulgar YY story. He continues to persevere. If you are the audience for this kind of YY story, why not watch short video dramas? The old toad must not be short of money. There is really no need to embarrass himself with such outdated harem YY stories.

It's not worth watching, it's too childish.

Why did the protagonist's name change from Sunanqiao to Sun Yanwan?

Jianxiao Lingxiao kept following the writing, and Toad was not slow in writing. Then I saw him crazily pouring water on Zhihu, and I knew he was going to cut it again. As expected, improving one's realm is like drinking water. While others take a small sip, others fill a large vat. From Xiantian to Grandmaster, I thought about it for a few days, and it suddenly became a success. A toad's broken tail is like a migratory bird returning south. You know it will return, but you don't know when. The toad's tail seems to have been broken there a long time ago, and readers just walk over and see, oh, there is one. Following from ancient times, authors like Toad who act willfully are better than Fang Xiang and Shenji. Some of them are really incapable of writing. The toad seems to have cut off its tail to preserve a breath of spiritual energy, waiting for the next reincarnation. Okay, looking at the toad tails all over the ground, the old reader was already calm, but not far away he jumped up again and was still jubilant.

Boss Toad, can you fill in the hole of the full-time God of War? He was suddenly eunuched at the climax. It's so uncomfortable.