Shanhe Ling: Legend of Qingya
by Xiao Yaxin
About This Novel
People who were hurt by the love of the world finally gathered in the deserted Qingya Mountain. The valley where it was located was extremely scary. Everyone named themselves ghosts and Qingya Mountain ghosts because of their own unique skills. The little boy's parents died when he was young. By chance, he met the leader of a group of ghosts. He grew up in countless tortures. After defeating the ghost master, he replaced the ghost master. The boy yearned for the human world and changed the name of Qingya Mountain, known as the hell on earth, to Ghost Valley.
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Sincerely, the author
After reading the author's Shanhe Ling, I have the following suggestions: ①Learn to figure out the mental and emotional changes of characters ②Introduce emotions to conceive the plot ③Learn to let readers understand what this article expresses ④ Try to standardize the use of pen and write in depth in various aspects such as multi-structural processing and spatial perspective. Try to make the logical relationship as clear as possible. ⑤ Follow your inner thoughts, understand what the mountains and rivers of your world are like, and come up with your own style. This suggestion is not intended to discourage the author, but I hope that the author can once again take us to appreciate the love of the mountains and rivers where the mountains and rivers are intact, and the old friends are still confidants. I propose it at this time just so that the author can learn to grow slowly, realize his dreams, and write a wonderful work. We believe that the author can write something different and wonderful, so I hope that you, the author. Come on! ! ! .
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Official(2)Scraped 9d ago
Long-tongued ghost
No specific description
Sincerely, the author
After reading the author's Shanhe Ling, I have the following suggestions: ①Learn to figure out the mental and emotional changes of characters ②Introduce emotions to conceive the plot ③Learn to let readers understand what this article expresses ④ Try to standardize the use of pen and write in depth in various aspects such as multi-structural processing and spatial perspective. Try to make the logical relationship as clear as possible. ⑤ Follow your inner thoughts, understand what the mountains and rivers of your world are like, and come up with your own style. This suggestion is not intended to discourage the author, but I hope that the author can once again take us to appreciate the love of the mountains and rivers where the mountains and rivers are intact, and the old friends are still confidants. I propose it at this time just so that the author can learn to grow slowly, realize his dreams, and write a wonderful work. We believe that the author can write something different and wonderful, so I hope that you, the author. Come on! ! ! .
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