
Comprehensive Martial Arts Daming Xiaohouye
by The Country Is As Beautiful As A Painting
About This Novel
The overall view and world view of this book collapsed, resulting in Jiang Shan having to give up writing! Even though the book has been completed, Xiao Jian always persists, which really touches Jiangshan! Jiangshan's new book has been opened. The title is "Zongwu in Xiajiangzheng". If you are interested, you can come and take a look.
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Official(15)Scraped 25d ago
The author should not be too deliberate about some things
For example, the emotional scenes are too deliberate, and the author made the emotional scenes completely toxic. If you can't write emotional scenes well, try not to write them, and don't make them look different. There is also the force system, which is too deliberate. Martial arts are completely ignored, just like earth-level and heaven-level internal skills make people feel that their strength is about the same. Especially the martial arts pig's feet, what's the use of practicing so many martial arts? I can't beat the middle stage in the early stage. This is a martial arts novel, not a fantasy novel. The author completely treats the martial arts novel as a fantasy novel. You have seen several martial arts TV series that ignore martial arts.
Just that little girl who doesn't know the importance of matters, she persuaded me to quit. It was too dramatic.
It makes you feel like a girl from a wealthy family, knowing that pig's feet are time-traveled, but you are in an ancient background
Holy Spirit Sword Technique,
The martial arts in Fengyunli all come with their own internal skills, so why do you need to practice other internal skills? They also talk about the wealth and land of the Dharma couple, and even the tribulations. Are they writing about martial arts or cultivation?
Since I got the system, I have been beaten to death every time I faced off against someone. The system panel is beautiful but useless. Isn't this system all the same? Pig's feet are so useless.
Let's just say that nowadays time travel can't be done without any acting skills. This Li Xuan is really good at pretending to have amnesia. This Zhang Fu is really very good.
No matter how many doubts Li Xuan has in his heart, he really can only live like this at this moment, because he has settled down. Seeing the current situation, it is really hard to say
I have to say that Li Xuan's imagination is really too big, it's really amazing, but this imagination is big and the logic is a bit clear, which is a bit wonderful.
It's so miserable that there's no comment, so I'm occupying a floor
Occupy a floor, occupy a floor, I occupy the first floor
If a person replies to you instantly, it can only mean that the person is playing with his mobile phone.
I'm not talking about level-skipping challenges. Have you ever seen a protagonist who learned a lot of magical skills and was beaten half to death by others every time at the same level? If this is the case, why do you still need magical powers from the system?
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Official(15)Scraped 25d ago
The author should not be too deliberate about some things
For example, the emotional scenes are too deliberate, and the author made the emotional scenes completely toxic. If you can't write emotional scenes well, try not to write them, and don't make them look different. There is also the force system, which is too deliberate. Martial arts are completely ignored, just like earth-level and heaven-level internal skills make people feel that their strength is about the same. Especially the martial arts pig's feet, what's the use of practicing so many martial arts? I can't beat the middle stage in the early stage. This is a martial arts novel, not a fantasy novel. The author completely treats the martial arts novel as a fantasy novel. You have seen several martial arts TV series that ignore martial arts.
Just that little girl who doesn't know the importance of matters, she persuaded me to quit. It was too dramatic.
It makes you feel like a girl from a wealthy family, knowing that pig's feet are time-traveled, but you are in an ancient background
Holy Spirit Sword Technique,
The martial arts in Fengyunli all come with their own internal skills, so why do you need to practice other internal skills? They also talk about the wealth and land of the Dharma couple, and even the tribulations. Are they writing about martial arts or cultivation?
Since I got the system, I have been beaten to death every time I faced off against someone. The system panel is beautiful but useless. Isn't this system all the same? Pig's feet are so useless.
Let's just say that nowadays time travel can't be done without any acting skills. This Li Xuan is really good at pretending to have amnesia. This Zhang Fu is really very good.
No matter how many doubts Li Xuan has in his heart, he really can only live like this at this moment, because he has settled down. Seeing the current situation, it is really hard to say
I have to say that Li Xuan's imagination is really too big, it's really amazing, but this imagination is big and the logic is a bit clear, which is a bit wonderful.
It's so miserable that there's no comment, so I'm occupying a floor
Occupy a floor, occupy a floor, I occupy the first floor
If a person replies to you instantly, it can only mean that the person is playing with his mobile phone.
I'm not talking about level-skipping challenges. Have you ever seen a protagonist who learned a lot of magical skills and was beaten half to death by others every time at the same level? If this is the case, why do you still need magical powers from the system?









