Tiangang Disha in Dc
About This Novel
Every superhero is a drama queen, the kind that owes them a few Oscars. Miles thought that in this world of drama queens, he would check out Batman's drunk driving, Cyborg's network intrusion, and the locked-door wisdom's gang fight, and kidnap Wonder Woman along the way, and live a happy life.
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Official(21)Scraped 11d ago
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I found it after searching for a long time in my gallery
Tiangang 36 changes can be written incorrectly, are you serious? The Nailhead Seven Arrows book seems to be a magic weapon, right?
In Journey to the West, there is no mention of the thirty-six transformations of Tiangang and the seventy-two transformations of Earthly Evil.
In Journey to the West, there is no mention of the thirty-six transformations of Tiangang and the seventy-two transformations of Earthly Evil.
Theme starfish
It's just that the narration isn't great, it lacks a little coherence in places and looks weird. For example, Chapter 8. The pig's trotter asked for a glass of water, and then took the water from the other person and drank it. It's okay for me to write this way. But in the main text, there are no answers such as "Okay." "Of course." There is no connecting description of her going to pour water. It is directly that the protagonist comes to drink water. I copied the original text: ↓ ["Hey, since you know me, can you get me a glass of water? I'm a little thirsty now. Miles drank the water Felicity handed to him in one gulp, thinking about how to solve the problem of Felicity not telling her mother about this, so as not to be nagged again. When his eyes fell on Felicity's computer screen, he suddenly had an idea: "Hey, Felicity, how about making a deal? "] Adding these connections can make the plot look more coherent, such as: ↓ ["Hey, since you know me, can you get me a glass of water? I'm a little thirsty now. " ("Of course!" Felicity poured Miles a glass of water. "Thank you!") Miles drank the water Felicity handed to him in one gulp, thinking about how to solve the problem of Felicity not telling her mother about this, so as not to be nagged again. When his eyes fell on Felicity's computer screen, he suddenly had an idea: "Hey, Felicity, how about making a deal? "] There seems to be a bug here. Is the pig's trotter not disguised to fight crime? Why can others recognize it at a glance? This kind of thing shouldn't happen no matter what, right? Although I like the subject matter better, these small details make me unable to stand it. I'm sorry.
I just want to know what the DC world is?
I just want to know what the DC world is?
spicy chicken
Even people don't dare to kill hot chickens. Can you use some brains to time travel?
So holy. This is a novel, and the author feels uncomfortable writing it.
Not pretty at all. Already poisoned.
Ancient people were aware of Tiangang and Earthly Evils, and studied them
Water Margin Tiangang Star 36 people and 72 Earthly Evils, Journey to the West Tiangang 36 and 72 Earthly Evils
Book-like
The book is average, the pig's feet are too holy, and in the DC world, he actually doesn't kill evil people, which makes people speechless and defeated.
Author's view
Author, I want to know who the heroine is?
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Official(21)Scraped 11d ago
. . .
I found it after searching for a long time in my gallery
Tiangang 36 changes can be written incorrectly, are you serious? The Nailhead Seven Arrows book seems to be a magic weapon, right?
In Journey to the West, there is no mention of the thirty-six transformations of Tiangang and the seventy-two transformations of Earthly Evil.
In Journey to the West, there is no mention of the thirty-six transformations of Tiangang and the seventy-two transformations of Earthly Evil.
Theme starfish
It's just that the narration isn't great, it lacks a little coherence in places and looks weird. For example, Chapter 8. The pig's trotter asked for a glass of water, and then took the water from the other person and drank it. It's okay for me to write this way. But in the main text, there are no answers such as "Okay." "Of course." There is no connecting description of her going to pour water. It is directly that the protagonist comes to drink water. I copied the original text: ↓ ["Hey, since you know me, can you get me a glass of water? I'm a little thirsty now. Miles drank the water Felicity handed to him in one gulp, thinking about how to solve the problem of Felicity not telling her mother about this, so as not to be nagged again. When his eyes fell on Felicity's computer screen, he suddenly had an idea: "Hey, Felicity, how about making a deal? "] Adding these connections can make the plot look more coherent, such as: ↓ ["Hey, since you know me, can you get me a glass of water? I'm a little thirsty now. " ("Of course!" Felicity poured Miles a glass of water. "Thank you!") Miles drank the water Felicity handed to him in one gulp, thinking about how to solve the problem of Felicity not telling her mother about this, so as not to be nagged again. When his eyes fell on Felicity's computer screen, he suddenly had an idea: "Hey, Felicity, how about making a deal? "] There seems to be a bug here. Is the pig's trotter not disguised to fight crime? Why can others recognize it at a glance? This kind of thing shouldn't happen no matter what, right? Although I like the subject matter better, these small details make me unable to stand it. I'm sorry.
I just want to know what the DC world is?
I just want to know what the DC world is?
spicy chicken
Even people don't dare to kill hot chickens. Can you use some brains to time travel?
So holy. This is a novel, and the author feels uncomfortable writing it.
Not pretty at all. Already poisoned.
Ancient people were aware of Tiangang and Earthly Evils, and studied them
Water Margin Tiangang Star 36 people and 72 Earthly Evils, Journey to the West Tiangang 36 and 72 Earthly Evils
Book-like
The book is average, the pig's feet are too holy, and in the DC world, he actually doesn't kill evil people, which makes people speechless and defeated.
Author's view
Author, I want to know who the heroine is?
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