
Game for Five Thousand Years
About This Novel
With spiritual veins as the source and humanistic allusions as the bones, there are countless copies on different blue stars, and the output of countless copies constitutes a completely different world.
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Official(13)Scraped 3d ago
There is no way your book will become popular. It should not exceed three to five hundred pages. It will be cut off and unfinished.
Two points, what kind of party are you fighting all day long? The novel has little ambition and is just aggrieved. The most important thing is that in the article, the relationship between the protagonist's family is not correctly sorted out, which is completely unsuitable for the modern stage of refreshing writing.
The subject matter is good and quite novel, but it's very frustrating to read.
It was okay at the beginning, but then it was okay to keep writing about his father. It would have been okay if it had some help. But the latter part was completely toxic. No one could read it anymore. Everyone came to read the novel to relax.
Just two words after reading it, it was frustrating. I couldn't stand it anymore, but then I kept writing about how his father cheated his son and I couldn't stand it anymore.
I still underestimated the author. The protagonist is a fw. He is a wage earner with a grudge. He spends resources everywhere to support others. There are a lot of people in the personal copy who have different intentions. His parents are also scheming against this so-called biological son. The protagonist doesn't care. He still thinks that his mother is good. He didn't even know that he was sold. He also wants to do everything for his mother. Are you her biological son? The two so-called nephews are the biological sons. The parents try to trick the protagonist to benefit them.
The main character is just two words: frustrated
The family relationship is aggrieved, the relationship with the father is poor, and the description is disgusting. The frustration of living at the bottom has been read for hundreds of chapters, and I have no status or ability at all. Extraordinary abilities are frustrating, but the golden finger is still the same. Talent is still at the bottom of society. Extraordinary abilities develop industry? I haven't seen you make money and become rich. He doesn't develop his strength, and his own strength is a bit useless. His external equipment and subordinates seem to have not developed much. When participating in national competitions, you can see that there are many people with similar skills to the protagonist. Doesn't the protagonist have nothing special about him? The plot is frustrating and I have no idea what the protagonist is going to do. Is it like a period novel that focuses on daily life? Or become a strong and invincible like a fantasy? Or do you want to fight for world supremacy? Rich people become successful people? You can't tell at all, just like ordinary people, doing nothing
The family characters I wrote are so disgusting to me. Is there something wrong with me?
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The picture is very big, and I have a little bit of admiration and a little doubt about this topic. The author's writing style is concise, cold and solid. I always feel that it has the flavor of two sides. It is very good. I hope to continue to work hard.
The introduction of the dungeon is still indispensable, and the plot is not enough.
Shuhuang looked at it and it was okay, but when his father came out later it became disgusting.
At first I thought it was an extraordinary system, and it looked a bit like it, but when the protagonist came into contact with extraordinary power, he didn't want to develop and utilize it, but continued to engage in industry. Emmm, it is possible to develop industry, but the extraordinary power has not even thought of developing it at the same time. What is the use of the soul-raising and rectifying method you have obtained? Do you engage in production and hegemony in the dungeons of the world? Having this skill is the same as not having it. Abandoned. .
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Official(13)Scraped 3d ago
There is no way your book will become popular. It should not exceed three to five hundred pages. It will be cut off and unfinished.
Two points, what kind of party are you fighting all day long? The novel has little ambition and is just aggrieved. The most important thing is that in the article, the relationship between the protagonist's family is not correctly sorted out, which is completely unsuitable for the modern stage of refreshing writing.
The subject matter is good and quite novel, but it's very frustrating to read.
It was okay at the beginning, but then it was okay to keep writing about his father. It would have been okay if it had some help. But the latter part was completely toxic. No one could read it anymore. Everyone came to read the novel to relax.
Just two words after reading it, it was frustrating. I couldn't stand it anymore, but then I kept writing about how his father cheated his son and I couldn't stand it anymore.
I still underestimated the author. The protagonist is a fw. He is a wage earner with a grudge. He spends resources everywhere to support others. There are a lot of people in the personal copy who have different intentions. His parents are also scheming against this so-called biological son. The protagonist doesn't care. He still thinks that his mother is good. He didn't even know that he was sold. He also wants to do everything for his mother. Are you her biological son? The two so-called nephews are the biological sons. The parents try to trick the protagonist to benefit them.
The main character is just two words: frustrated
The family relationship is aggrieved, the relationship with the father is poor, and the description is disgusting. The frustration of living at the bottom has been read for hundreds of chapters, and I have no status or ability at all. Extraordinary abilities are frustrating, but the golden finger is still the same. Talent is still at the bottom of society. Extraordinary abilities develop industry? I haven't seen you make money and become rich. He doesn't develop his strength, and his own strength is a bit useless. His external equipment and subordinates seem to have not developed much. When participating in national competitions, you can see that there are many people with similar skills to the protagonist. Doesn't the protagonist have nothing special about him? The plot is frustrating and I have no idea what the protagonist is going to do. Is it like a period novel that focuses on daily life? Or become a strong and invincible like a fantasy? Or do you want to fight for world supremacy? Rich people become successful people? You can't tell at all, just like ordinary people, doing nothing
The family characters I wrote are so disgusting to me. Is there something wrong with me?
Be creative
The picture is very big, and I have a little bit of admiration and a little doubt about this topic. The author's writing style is concise, cold and solid. I always feel that it has the flavor of two sides. It is very good. I hope to continue to work hard.
The introduction of the dungeon is still indispensable, and the plot is not enough.
Shuhuang looked at it and it was okay, but when his father came out later it became disgusting.
At first I thought it was an extraordinary system, and it looked a bit like it, but when the protagonist came into contact with extraordinary power, he didn't want to develop and utilize it, but continued to engage in industry. Emmm, it is possible to develop industry, but the extraordinary power has not even thought of developing it at the same time. What is the use of the soul-raising and rectifying method you have obtained? Do you engage in production and hegemony in the dungeons of the world? Having this skill is the same as not having it. Abandoned. .









